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  1. raven1

    Chapter 33

    You were neither in this chapter. I am sure Carlos would approve. We know enough information to know the twins are not feral. They weren't acting out, they were just excited to find their mates. Even 30 miles away, the wolf shifters understood what the twins were excited about. As to the boys having an older brother comments, I'm going to have to reread a few chapters back to see if you left any clues that they had an older brother. I have to admit you were lucky or sly when picking a picture like that. Knowing you it wasn't luck. You probably pick it knowing how much speculation it would cause. I can easily see Kage working on finding great mates for his little brothers.
  2. Deacon has made it to meet Colby, but the risk he took put him in a very dangerous position. Colby came to his rescue, but Colby's assurance that Tuck was a field mouse didn't ring true to me. I think that Tucker is one of the problems and is a big danger to Deacon, Colby and Ahote. Tucker is an angry, reckless man with a bigoted nature. Deacon is again distracted by Colby, and I fear he my forget to tell him about the plans of the vigilante posse. I like the way this chapter build tension for what will happen next.
  3. raven1

    Chapter 112

    There is a great deal to think about in this chapter. My first impression of Timok for example is changing. He seems more like a slightly jealous best friend of Garjah with a twisted sense of humor, and not a subversive, evil villain. I think he needs his own man. Maybe Ases? The main problem in the chapter is the plan to bring social change to this world. Getting Ases' mech is the first problem. It will not be as difficult as rescuing Garjah, but is not an easy task. However, the main problem is changing how the population thinks and feels about the current structure of their society, as well as their positions in that society. Just because the rebels have the means and evidence to prove what they say is true, doesn't mean they can change the minds of enough of the people to make the plan work. Millennia of programmed education and entrenched beliefs are going to be difficult to overcome in a short time. We can see that in the difficulties experienced in trying to reverse biases against race, gender and sexual identities. We can see that in how hard it is to change people's ideas on climate, economic systems and human rights. Preconceptions and beliefs are going to be the biggest challenge to the plan.
  4. Hey Folks, Getting late, so checking in with you all before I hit the sack! Have a great day!
  5. raven1

    Chapter 33

    I always love your sweet comments and agree 100% with you on this. I do fear that this might lead to your first visit to the Korner. 😉
  6. raven1

    Chapter 33

    I can see it too. About the only difference is a few years and some facial scruff on Kage.
  7. Deke's plan has gotten him where he wanted to go. I am anxious to see how it plays out.
  8. I wonder if Deacon knows how ominous these words sound. I also like Lioden, but it doesn't feel like he fits in with Priest's Posse.
  9. Deacon is in love and willing to risk the danger of warning Colby. I don't fear for Deacon, because I am sure that Colby will protect him. However, I suspect that Deacon might find out the truth about Colby, and don't know how Deacon will be able to accept that knowledge.
  10. raven1

    Shadow Effect

    Great addition to the pictures. The twins are over the top hot!
  11. Maybe this is the reason Albert can't get his suitcase if speedos closed.
  12. raven1

    Chapter 33

    No! No! No! No! Not going to put them down! They are definitely not feral! You already made that clear! You're kicking the bee's nest now!
  13. raven1

    Chapter 33

    But you were so extra special generous to us this time. There are two very big bones this time!
  14. raven1

    Chapter 33

  15. raven1

    Chapter 33

    I am not sure if either Tyler or Elijah would care what the twins look like. Both of them want more than just the physical appearance. I am sure at least the twins and they can find effective ways to communicate. I do wish for a cure, but HEA is more about love than appearance.
  16. raven1

    Chapter 33

    Hey Lady, I'm trying to defend you here!
  17. raven1

    Chapter 33

    Are you saying you can't pull this off in 7 chapters? I don't believe that! You are back to your diversionary dance. We all know you better!
  18. raven1

    Chapter 33

    I am know you are right, but he's back and has a great chance to redeem himself. Maybe @kbois will send a bone your way too!
  19. raven1

    Chapter 33

    ...And the winners are the....KORNER KREW!!!!!
  20. raven1

    Chapter 33

    Yes, but I can't believe how generous you are! Not one big bone, but two meaty bones!
  21. raven1

    Chapter 33

    WTF? I can't believe that @kbois caved to @Mrsgnomie! Not complaining, but it does seem a bit like....impossible!
  22. raven1

    Chapter 33

    Kage-o-Matic? I love that Elijah can now make jokes about Kage. He seems to be moving on a bit and leaving the sadness behind. I love authentic Mexican food and their dinner had me salivating!
  23. Hi Albert! I hope you and Steve have better luck than Mickey! ❤️
  24. I had to laugh and agree with @weinerdog's comment about Kung Fu episodes. I am old enough to remember them and his comment is spot on. I do understand the motivation of this vigilante posse bent on revenge, but think that Priest is a little bit more than crazy. He doesn't want justice, but complete annihilation of all the "monsters". Deacon has great instincts and is right to be worried how this group is bad for the town. I wonder what the sheriff will have to say to him when they get home.
  25. raven1

    Chapter 1

    I know you have a lot of challenging projects ahead, but it would be great if you could do something with these wonderful characters!
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