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  1. I am so glad you mentioned this again. When you wrote the description of Jay, Loe and the girls' costumes it had me in stitches. Just remembering that again has raised my spirits. Maybe you can write a short story of holidays with the girls during their first year. I know it would be so cute!
  2. You had me cycling through all kinds of emotions, not just the ones mentioned. I didn't think I could have any more loathing and hate for Loe's parents, but I was wrong! You got me crying with this one @Mrsgnomie. I think you need to add a tissue alert, because I went through half a box as Rob was telling what he knows. He is an amazing investigator, and a compassionate guy for flying to Denver to tell them personally and not a call or email. I know that Jay's need to protect Loe is awesome, but very, very proud of Loe in refusing to protect himself in order to stop the child trafficking anyway he can. Thank you for making the beanie babes so lovable and healing for their fathers. I think that the new launch will be awesome. Gifts for babies and kids are a necessity of life for everyone. I'm looking forward to seeing a lot of evil, greedy people being brought to justice. That Statute of Limitations may be relevant to Loe's parents, but all the other bast..ds probably are still doing it and need to face justice. Bravo for Loe's decision to dedicate profits from the new launch to protect children. Awesome chapter! I am so pleased that you have added this Epic-logue to their story.
  3. Hey Drew! Hope you have a good day!
  4. The L.G.B.T.Q.I.A.+ rainbow umbrella covers a panoply of people of different gender identities and sexual orientations. If panoply were a board game it would be The Game of Life.
  5. I really enjoyed the start to this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
  6. Sounds great for the pocketbook, but hope you don't have to work too hard. Four soldout weeks sounds like a lot of work.🤔
  7. This is a delightful short story of two mischievous kids on a farm. It is a quick read (if you don't count all the time you spend laughing) that is a great way to get you in a good mood.
  8. raven1

    Story

    These two kids are hysterical! Laughed my way thru the entire letter. By now these two should be around 20 years old, so a meeting with the family where Aunt and Uncle share the letter with them should be a fun read! This made my day.
  9. Being a Texan you certainly know the importance of branding and trademarks! Welcome back!❤️
  10. raven1

    Chapter 11

    Don't worry about titles, it's the writing that counts. You do that very well, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!
  11. Hey Spikey! How are you today? I don't want to spoil it, but thought you'd like to know Drew is back! Our party time is officially over, and it's back to nukes and curfews again.
  12. Hi Dugh! Hope you and mum have a great start to the week. Is renfair still going? How long is the season?
  13. Hey Page! Hope you and your guys have a great start to the week. I appreciated the link to the meatloaf, but there was another link to Farmhouse Meatloaf that looked even better. I'm going to try that one tonight!
  14. Hey Gary! Happy Monday!
  15. Hi Clo! Hope you have a great Monday. Stay warm in class. If you don't have thermal undies, I would recommend them. They always kept me warm back in the days when I skied. As for your dislike of broccoli? It must stem from eating pureed broccoli baby food. Mushy broccoli could put you off for life.
  16. Hey Albert! Love the Red Hot Chili Peppers! Meatloaf...I think I will make one now that you and Page have mentioned it. Maybe I'll try the recipe Page sent. 🤔
  17. That wasn't even a fake tamale, only the inedible wrap is the same. Junk food doesn't qualify being labeled with the term tamale. It's sacrilege! You have desecrated my favorite food!
  18. Good morning, B!
  19. Maybe. I have missed you and glad you are back. I question your tastes however if you think that twitter monstrosity qualifies as a tamale. Yuck! 🤮 Even the polenta looks sick (assuming it is polenta).
  20. G'day Bucket! Hope you had a great day. Just wanted to say goodnight.
  21. Hey Albert! Great pictures and song, but the John Wayne trailer had me laughing. I almost didn't recognize him. The stunts were so comical in black and white. 🤣
  22. Hey All! Just checking out for the day. Hope your day is good.
  23. A very sweet, short novella of love on a ranch. Seth faces leaving his family's ranch as a result of an abusive father. Fate intervenes and the family begins to work together for a better future. A quick but feel good story.
  24. raven1

    Epilogue

    Nice to see things have worked out for the family and they happily remain together on the family ranch. A great HEA ending to a very nice story.
  25. raven1

    Chapter 3

    Things are looking up for Seth, his mom and Gavin. I am glad Seth's mom has a backup plan for keeping her husband away from the ranch and the boys.
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