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Has anyone noticed these short chapters give @Cia way too many chances to create cliffhangers?
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Exactly my initial reaction after reading this!
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Good Night All!
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That doesn't work unless you can pronounce it correctly.
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Nate being such a hateful person who was capable of raping Clem sure backed down fast. Not knowing what Nate was thinking, it is difficult to imagine why he would turn tail and run like that. I like that Clem stood up to Nate. Clem was richly rewarded for his stand in honor of Ashlee and Sukie. Clem and Ashlee were very hot together in bed. They make a great HEA couple.
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Like everyone has commented, I am anxiously anticipating the next chapter. Great description of the rodeo.
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My personal curfew is 12 a.m. and not one second before. Now go play with your pretty pink, fluffy handcuffs.
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I like Madison. She is a very accepting person and probably has a big romantic heart. Rodeos are a lot of fun, but it is also a great setting for some fisticuffs. Nate with his big mouth will probably chip away at Ashlee's patience until he deck Nate. I would imagine that part of Ashlee's self confidence stems from an ability to defend himself. Something he had to learn to do to protect himself growing up. Looking forward to the third date and what follows.
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The lasts thoughts Essell has before hearing the noisy thumping concern Timok as a possible traitor. The last makes it seem as if Timok may be the one thumping into the camp. No sure who it is, but with the noise, maybe Bouncer could hear and come running to the rescue. I don't see how Timok could have tracked Essell and Ases, so I wonder who has shown up. The traitors, Garjah, Timok, or....? Nice cliffhanger leaving Essell alone to face the intruder.
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It definitely is great for me. I am really excited to get the surgery done.
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As if we forgot any of Your cliffhangers. I still have shivers over Loe fall when climbing!
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The battle to test Bernie was exciting and didn't disappoint by seeming easy. Rodney as Tuath Dé really played up his part! Karhu and Bernie are going to make such a great Papa and Cub pair. This is a great start to the story @Grumpy Bear! I am surprised that you got this started so quickly. Thanks so much.
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Shhh! Chris, not so loud. You know who might hear you.
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Took me a minute to recognise the Michelin Man. Great photo find Albert!
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Too early!! Play nice and I won't be tempted to help Dugh kidnap you.
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OMG! Now I am going to need to find a cot and medical supplies. Thanks for the heads up Danilo!
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@kbois isn't evil enough to lynch, but between drinking bottles of booze in the corner, I am using my self imposed exile to order torches, pitchforks, tar and feathers. She has 72 hours to make this right. Of course she won't do that, she already commented that there would be more that one twisted chapter.
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True, but Trevor has left and whatever was on the knife makes it impossible for Kage to shift. It is also disintegrating his blood. Is that happening inside him now?👿
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Good Morning Drewster! 🤔 Funny, but Spike doesn't seem to be around right now to take the blame.
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I wonder if Drew's going to squeal like this when Dugh gets him.
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Thanks for the hot sex and sweet love making. However, WTH? Why was Trevor there? Where's Huntington? What is keeping Kage from shifting? Did the Boss set up Kage? And last but definitely not least, why are you sooo great at writing cliffhangers? Is this revenge for all the "Post It" comments? You are one evil lady @kbois. I think I'll steal the gif @Mrsgnomie used in the first comment!
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I like that Ashlee is easy going and doesn't make a fuss over small mistakes. The waitress could have been extremely embarrassed, but Ashlee's response was to giggle, then order. He also takes initiative to drive to the farm and see Clem. I see him as a very dominant personality without resorting to macho posing. He is just too comfortable with himself to be bothered by petty things. I like the balance he has established in his life. Clem seems to be a gay guy who isn't stuck on one stereotype of man. He appreciates the differences Ashlee and recognises his strengths. One of the strengths of this tale is how the dialogue is expertly written to bring life to these characters.
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Aod and I are doing well. We went for coffee today at an coffee cafe that feature elaborate dessert croissants and sandwiches using Swiss style croissants. I is also an art gallery with mainly abstract oil paintings I also got the go ahead from my insurance company for the operation on my right eye. I'll call the hospital/doctor to schedule the operation. It could be any time in the next 5 days. I'll keep everyone posted.
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I wish I had a neighbor like that!
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Hi Clo! I see you are in your Naughty Tink Fairy Mode.
