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  1. Just to update. Two more Recommends. We only need 22 more. We have added 35 so far in this chapter. @Mrsgnomie is taking notes now. I suspect she will cave soon. Maybe we could pay her for her writing by making the highest recommended book for the month on GA! A shout out to the following who are leading the cause: @Pickalane,@weinerdog, @Tonyr, @chris191070, @scrubber6620, @drsawzall, @Gary L
  2. Oh I'm liking this. Like a good Scout you will be prepared when the time comes. I agree with Kitt, so I sent some gifs to consider.⬆️⬆️⬆️
  3. YES!!!!! She is a lady and an Oregonian! Besides, wouldn't it be fun to have a Cousin's Camp Loelife? Think of all the fun skills and life values Loe could teach the kids and their parents. Aiden's first cooking lesson. Mugget's first lesson. Kids decorating rooms in their castle. (The one @kbois recommended.) Dance / aerobics lessons kids crafts Loren style Kid's create their own drink of the day for kbois to judge, or not. I am sure Loren will warn them about coconut. The kids at the end of one day at the club Parents' reaction Parents now have time for
  4. Glad to see you found it and joined the cause!
  5. Great work everyone!!!!!!!! Here is the updated score Boss Nanny: 93 recommendations JaysLoelife: 69 recommendations (Up by 36!!) Readers' Goal: 24 recommendations (Down from 57!!) You guys are great readers. Keep up the Recommendations, please! For newbies, it is easy to post a recommendation. Got to the Table of Contents for this story. Find dark blue button with a white outlined paper and pencil, a white medallion hanging from a white ribbon just a few inches to the left of the React button on the page. Press this button, go down to the bottom and press All, then hit the submit button. Easy!
  6. Great! I'll support you by posting several updates of the scores in those chapters.
  7. The phone call to Stacy was fun. I still chuckle when someone new finds out that the two ex-straight guys are lovers and mates. I hope that Dave's plans for the Staycation go very well for them. I wonder if Stacy knows that they are mates. I always enjoy it more when Lowe is around. Hopefully, we will see much more of him. Heather's oath was amazing and Dave was very astute in negotiating the oath/contract with her. The amendments definitely surprised her as she got a lot more than she has asked for from the Owensville Pack. That didn't surprise me. These guys are good like that. They don't do anything by halves. Vincent's trip to Baltimore got off to a great start. RJ is very impressive and will make a great partner for Vincent. RJ also doesn't do things by halve. He takes a get acquainted chat and turns it into a lesson for Vinnie. He evaluates both Vincent and his wolf, then suggests the each focus using their different strengths for different situations. I like RJ and feel he needs to stick around for more than just this assignment. Great chapter full interesting bits.
  8. I do believe you have issued a challenge to us. I did the math and it currently looks like this. Boss Nanny: 93 recommendations JaysLoelife: 36 recommendations Readers' Goal: 57 recommendations This is a reasonable goal. Over 102 readers have reacted to this chapter alone. For newbies, it is easy to post a recommendation. Got to the Table of Contents for this story. Find blue button with a white outlined paper and pencil just above the advance arrow to the first chapter. Press this button, go down to the bottom and press All, then hit the submit button. Easy!
  9. raven1

    Prologue

    Finished catching up! Now to start here again.
  10. Hey Page! What were you guys up to today?
  11. No way! I am very comfortable being down the list from Drew, Spike and you! Thanks for the bowl of nuts, though. I will think kindly of you as I devour them.
  12. Yes, but I'll grab on to even impossible hopes if it will bring peace to Ukraine. Yep. He would at that. The just look like hobbit feet compared to the rest of him. 😛
  13. Hi All! Sawasdee Khrup 🙏
  14. Tonight's dinner cooked by my personal Thai chef. It's a noodle soup called Yentafu.
  15. raven1

    Chapter 7

    This is my second read and I am surprised I miss this. All those confusing feelings Jin has and then this! Jin will definitely be drawn to Levi more and more until he realizes he wants Levi for his own.
  16. Sleep well Drewski! Dream of your Nobel Peace Prize. This time I really wish it will happen.
  17. Let me guess your response.......
  18. That's the logic of Humpty Dumpty who had a Great Fall.
  19. raven1

    Chapter 12

  20. Hi Page! How are you doing?
  21. You know Drew, I do worry about how close you and Vlad are becoming. It seems that Vlad's friends are having their money and any things of value they own confiscated by many countries. Are you willing to lose your mom's cooking or your arsenal of nukes? Think about it buddy.😙
  22. ....but Albert! They have a picture of him running outside that zoo in Texas! Of course I do respect your right to be an atheist in regards to Drew.
  23. raven1

    Prologue

    I like the start. It immediately got me interested. Although I have read the series from the beginning, I do find that I have forgotten enough details that I will have to go back and reread the stories again.
  24. raven1

    Chapter 12

    You may not want to write it, but your readers want to see them grow up. Charming kids grow up to be interesting adults, and we are interested adults wanting to see them grow up. It would be a slight change in your usual time line, but a book about Angelo and Gianni raising Sami to his preteen years would leave a lot of space to show the four kids growing up to their late teen years. It would also have room for Claudia,Toto and Michele to get past their university years to adulthood. I personally would like to see the changes in Marco under the influence of Dani, Giaco and Emilia. He might even have a growth spurt with all the exercise he will get exploring Ravello with them. Wouldn't it be nice for Emilia to get a kiss form a boy that didn't make her cry? This is a trick question. Although I can think of two plot twists that fit your criteria (one scandalous, one not😇), I thought you mentioned that your characters write their stories.
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