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  1. Really Drew? Do I have to read you your Miranda rights against self incrimination? BTW it is beautifull there. Good thing you are so bad at aiming your nukes.
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    Chapter 10

    What a conundrum for Dani. The only advance he has made is a commitment to reset the friendship with Emilie by promising not to break her heart again. He is so focused on Giaco, and is hoping that Giaco wants more than a just best friends relationship. However, Giaco seems to be confused himself. It is wonderful that Dani wants to include Marco again, but what would happen if Giaco decides he wants more than a best friend/brother relationship with Dani. Marco would be devastated and on the outside again. Dani needs get Giaco to honestly tell Dani what he really wants. This may take some time to resolve. I am betting only on Angelo and Gianni getting the house ready for a bigger family that includes Sami.
  3. A halo??? The speak louder than the 😇
  4. Younger than me.
  5. I know Mrsgnomie didn't want to trash Jesse, but to break up with Colin. Trash bin. Leave Colin for a job. Dumpster. Pragmatism over true love with a wonderful, beautiful man like Colin. Dump truck. To leave a love of your life for all time and has changed your life for better. Garbage dump. I didn't think Jesse was such a fool! The meeting was just this morning and Jesse has already decided? Dump, Dump, Dump Jessie, Colin. Charlies is the better man for you! Now I've vented, I need to go back to reading the rest of the chapter to see if this is real, or just a nightmare. Wrong! Try again Colin. This time Think! Go get your man Charlie!
  6. Aod's still sleeping, so I'll make sure to be quiet. Or at least I will try. Thanks Albert❤️
  7. Another sleepless night! Wow! Too bad I can't claim him. Plaid is reserved according to Clo's rules of order. I hate rules! Thank you anyway Albert. It's the thought that counts. 😥
  8. Such dedication Patch1. I would be exhausted after reading all those se...scenes.
  9. Howdy Page! I cast my vote for Loki's reincarnation. He is after all the God of Evil.
  10. Hi Spike! How was your day?
  11. Does the therapy work on all forms of cancer? That would be a miracle!
  12. She would probably agree! Drew is too random to be the god of time, and he is mischievous at best. Although he can push even that to its limit.
  13. Hey Albert! Pretty pic, good music, now where are the funnies? Oh, and you can throw in one of the hotties too. Please.
  14. Hi Everyone! Good morning to you all.
  15. Charlie sure knows how to start the week with Colin. That scene at the door was calculated and targeted at Colin for maximum impact. Comparing Jesse to a Disney character? Can't be Snow White, wrong hair color. Must be Cinderella. Naw, she had a fairy godmother to dress her. I give up! Colin seems out for revenge by outrageously flirting with Charlie, then agreeing to sleep in the same bed. Charlie is so much in trouble. He won't get a bit of sleep worrying the whole night! Poor Charlie! Sorry Charlie.....he,he... Bad move. I bet the skin to skin would start Colin to begin to question his commitment to Jesse. Although, it could be proof you are not longer a shark. Are you sure you didn't mean to say your? I'm having too much fun with this chapter! It will take me an hour or two to finish this! Jesse is not losing, but Charlie is gaining. I think this is going to be a tie game. What happened to the self centered, arrogant asshole Charlie? What will Jesse say when Colin asks for them to live together? What a soap opera! @Mrsgnomie, I hope you know this is the first time I have been compelled to write a running commentary!
  16. Not too busy. I got the coffee maker cleaned after going thru two different programs, descaling and cleaning. Boring!! What's worse was that I was coffee deprived for 90 minutes!!! I didn't get the freezer meals made, but I did bookmark three great sites. I was surprised the the trend for Thai stir fries was so large. About half the recipes! I just went to check on Aod. He was too quiet. Not in the living room, so I checked in the bedroom. He's there with his phone propped up on the pillow with some cartoon playing...while he is softly snoring. I had to stifle a laugh so I didn't wake him up.
  17. Made my comment, then read the others. It's almost even by the comments. I however am stuck on the fence. The only thing I know for sure is that I will gladly take the los...ah...one doesn't get Colin. Neither one of them is a loser.🤗
  18. OMG!!! You want us to score this game. You haven't even given us the game highlights. We know that Jesse had made some home runs, but Charlie hasn't even made it to first base! I do admit that Charlie is warming up in the bullpen, but he hasn't been up to bat yet! Favorite scene? Let's see. Colin and Charlie negotiating the 4th against Bend. Good Jesse jealous of Charlie resulting in sex with Colin? Hot! Karaoke Night? Too sad, but Charlie at least put up a brave face and got the last laugh with Ryan. Colin and Charlie having dinner together? Sweet, funny and Charlie is still clueless about the Clarkes Happy birthday present and breakfast? Charlie is standing at the plate waiting for Colin's first pitch. I guess I'll go with the dinner scene. Considering how much entertainment I got from laughing most of the time.
  19. Colin sure knows how to set a mean clock alarm. Now I have to figure out how to get the car horn on my phone. The date was perfect. Jesse and Colin are so sweet together. I was going for the baseball analogy before it was mentioned in the chapter. Jesse is definitely ahead of Charlie by not only overrunning first base, but seconds away from second base. I'm going to be crying until I laugh by the time Colin makes his final choice. It is apparent to me that you learned early on how to mess with the readers' emotions Mrsgnomie.
  20. Hi Clo! How is your morning? I edited to add another gif that is also fitting, I hope.
  21. Sleep well Drew. Now get to bed. Your curfew was almost 30 minutes ago! Don't start whining you are the god-emperor to excuse yourself!
  22. If I had to comment on every hot chapter you write, it would take me forever to write comments. You write hot chapters. I have to read them like this. You also write hysterically funny chapters that leave me like this. And with a stomach ache. This time I chose the least sexual, but best laugh I have had in a few days. (The last one was with Loe.)
  23. Evil? Yes! Not dead. You set us up with an adorable Charlie, then throw in another winner in Jesse! I don't know who to root for now. I don't want you to trash Jesse so Colin has only Charlie, but I also don't want Charlie to lose Colin...or Jesse. You are too mean. I also can't imagine you writing a HEA triad. At least @kbois is not here to influence your innocence. Jesse's hesitance to end the evening by giving Colin a kiss can be interpreted two ways. One, he is very innocent and has less experience than Colin when it comes to dates. (Adorable) Second, he is afraid he will seem to be desperate. (Also adorable) This lead me to the idea that maybe Jesse is a too perfect match for Colin. Maybe Jesse was advised and coached in how to hook Colin. Has Natalie has been working to getting Colin a boyfriend? Is she in league with Colin's parents? This is why I go back to one of the first stories written by authors I like. Now I know all the evil you write, isn't foisted on you by kbois. I will have to be more careful in taking sides between you two in the future.
  24. OMG! I had to stop reading, I was laughing so hard. You caught me completely off guard. I had to comment immediately. Back to the story, then another comment.
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