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That's good news. The weather maps I see made things look much worse. I hope you are continuing to get healthier.
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Now I understand why you were delayed at the market.
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There was a very hot time in the Han's house last night. Connor doesn't know what's coming at him. Challenging Rybalt and Slicky was exactly the wrong thing to do. It will inspire these two to do something that will leave Connor sputtering senselessly instead of giving a speech. I'm sure the two of them will demonstrate that you don't have to have a boring life to excel in college.
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@Mancunian can probably answer this better, but I will try. This is a contemporary story. Since you mentioned Charlie's starting wage, I am guessing you noticed it is well below the starting wage for an Automotive Technician. Charlie's starting wage is about £2.00 an hour lower than normal. It is because he isn't fully accredited yet and has several courses to finish. I'm sure that won't be for long as Charlie is very independent and driven to succeed and has the support of all his new friends.
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You should have heard me cursing Dr Bower when he got hateful and slandered Michael and Harry. I also liked how the cheeky Jason decides to claim Harry as his 'Gramps'.
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Hey Page! I see you lurking around. How are things in your house? The US weather reports I have seen show you and Gary getting a lot of snow.
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Hi Bucket! Glad to hear you made it safely there. Did you find Chris for Froggy?
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Hi Albert! Has the weather warmed a little? Hope you and Steve are keeping each other warm.
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That's what I have learned the hard way. I started working on a chapter one day and reread it exactly as you described. I think it's almost there, then go to bed. I read it again in the morning thinking being fresh I could read it one more time only to end up reading it another 5 or 6 times. I also read it a day before Craig posts the chapter and end up changing something again. I've also developed an allergy to commas.
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True. But I wouldn't want to be them when they face their Alphas. Sebastien especially!
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Scott and Greg may be smart enough to run a business, but still inexperienced enough to make some mistakes. I like that James allows them to make and learn from mistakes. I was not surprised that Jake was the first of the friends who had just found out to ask to be turned. I wonder if getting the answer that it would have to wait, will get him to change his mind about attending West Point. With the way Greg supports his friends and develops their loyalty, I suspect he will get many more requests to be turned. I appreciate that Brian is being offered the same help from Greg that Chris has already accepted.
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The part of the chapter where Stacy realized that Harry's son, Mickey, was one of his friends was very emotional to me. I am very happy that Stacy and Harry are becoming friends also.
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Hi Everyone! I had a fun time reading the comments. I do wish we had a few more reactions to choose from for the Drewster.
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Charlie got the job! I loved the prank he and Jason played on Stacy. I can understand what Charlie felt when he learned that Spenser is Stacy's brother, but Stacy set him right by letting him know Charlie earned the job on his own. His background shows he is trained, and the things he did during the interview show he takes initiative and is honest. I'm also happy that Harry is recovering well.
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Hi @Doha, I finally made it. I hope that Caleb isn't in a similar situation. It may be too much to ask for, but I'm hoping the trap was targeted for one light shifter because Huntington doesn't know about Caleb's new abilities. I also hope that both Caleb and Asa can maintain communication in spite of the trap. Maybe they can figure out a way for Caleb to rescue Asa and get the hell out! Keeping my fingers crossed.
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Another red herring??? There is also Pieter, I suppose. However, either or both could be shadow shifters, and willingly helping or blackmailed into helping the mangy lion. No one seems to have commented on what Corbin and the kids will do if Asa and Caleb don't make it back in time to return to the US, or how pissed Giles and Sebastian will be when they find out about Caleb and Asa's insubordination.
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Yep! It's been party week with three birthdays and two days of Loy Krathong. All filled with food and drink lasting to 4 AM in the morning. One of the after-parties was at my home, which meant massive cleaning the next day. I also had to spend a lot of time doing my beta/editing job to get chapters ready for posting. It is giving me a whole new respect for behind-the-scenes crews and authors. I won't ever complain about waiting for a chapter. Maybe.
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Hiding in the shadows like a shifter in the castle. At least that's my guess on how Huntington found out. I actually posted a comment yesterday, but apparently got distracted and forgot to hit the submit button. It basically said you gave us what we wanted when Corbin, Asa and Caleb decided to form families, then ripped our hearts out with Asa being trapped. Congratulations!
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Shows where your mind is. I thought the comment was a clever reference to Asa.
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True, but you did make many comments to the contrary. We're still cleaning up the mess of red herrings here in the Korner.
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I think it narrows things down to only two people in the castle unless there is another element or shadow shifter lurking in the castle.
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One of the things I like about Craig's and your stories, Gary, is that they are filled with many great moms.
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Dear Evil Author (and Accomplices), Why did you grant our wishes for Vann, Duncan, Dante and Marcel to be fulfilled like a nice fairy godmother, then dash them in a retched trap/cliffhanger like malevolent fairy queen? It's just sadistic! Before you say it, you're welcome for the compliment!
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Naw, Just let the readers read them and weep. Seriously though whether laughing and crying, sad and crying or emotional but good crying. Readers will need tissues for almost every chapter.
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Hey Nick, Good Morning to you. I did have a good day, but not normal. I went to a birthday party with friends for a friend. We all had fun, but the after-party continued at our place until 5 AM. I didn't last that long and only made it to 4 AM. It was normal for a birthday Thai style, mostly fun with a pinch or two of drama.
