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I agree with Davis. This is a much improved version of the original. So far it looks like you are doing a good job of sticking closely to the original plot.
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Your comment led me to experiment to see how creative the current AI at Bing could be. I gave it a variety of prompts. The last one was this: Create a painting of a single flower. The painting would be in a style created by an AI, not a human. This was the most creative the AI got. I agree with what you said, Myr. However, I will not fear AIs until they develop random, illogical creativity. Hopefully, they will also develop other illogical and random traits like love and compassion by then, and we will be allowed to live.
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I finished reading the series last February. It's great reading, so you'll have a lot more enjoyment ahead! I have the same problem of being distracted here in GA.
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Just take the time to get well kbois. Your good health is important to us.
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Thanks for the earbug Chris! Now you have me singing Ring of Fire. Johnny's version of course.
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Craig's great humour is one of the reasons I have so much fun working with him! There are some parts in the story where, no matter how many times we go over the chapter, I still laugh or cry every time I read that part.
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ASAP! OK? @Jkeeletupelo are ready and waiting!
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What was that line from the first Christmas show at The Boot? Damned, I'll have to go back and check The Boot-Three Years On now.
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Like @weinerdog and @drsawzall I too am suspicious about the two thugs trying to steal Pierre's inheritance. Did they attend the business meeting? Were they stalking him when he left the meeting? How did the all end up in the bar together? The events just don't add up. I was impress with how Ronnie and Richie handled the situation. My one worry is what is driving Pierre to drink.
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Greg impressed the judge with his maturity, knowledge and professional behaviour. The trips to the banks were proof positive that Greg and Scott both have these qualities and can successfully apply them to their business ventures. Like other comments, I was impressed when he demonstrated his trust in Lisa and made sure she would manage his accounts. His reward will not only be her loyalty but also her motivation to work hard on his behalf to live up to Greg's expectations.
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Psst! JK. More headed your way (and possibly sooner than expected).
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The Fates were not kind as they wove the boys' story in the beginning. It's nice to see the changes they are now weaving for them. Given your great reference to Greek mythology, let me continue a bit. Expect the Muses to make their presence felt in the future. That all I can say. (See Craig. I can comment without spilling the beans.)
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Brad may be smitten or simply extremely horny, but Charlie probably hasn't thought about sex much since the death of his mother. I think the kiss must have shocked him. He is also still worried about Michael. Stacy does seem to be trying to arrange something for Charlie, but that's very much up in the air. Charlie is still feeling a bit desperate and may try to get the first job he can find.
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Greg is in a quandary, and I wouldn't want to be him. His decision will either cause him to split with long-time friends, or trust completely in them and tell them the truth which could endanger them all. It also brings up the question of how he will handle the same problem with his dad. I learned some interesting things about this new AU you have created. Good chapter.
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Happy Thanksgiving to you all. I hope you enjoy gobbling up the gobbler.
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What a great chapter! I loved the humour, action and the finale with the two young men now realizing they are mates. Thanks, Justin.
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My mom caught my younger brother peeing in the refrigerator when he was 9 years old. It was a family story that lived on for decades. He used to tease me often, so when I had enough, I would threaten to tell his current girlfriend. I never delivered on the threat, he really was my best friend growing up.
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I am impressed that you can message online while you sleepwalk. The only thing I manage to do while sleepwalking is stub my toe and/or trip and fall.
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To all my friends in the USA,
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Doing well as is Orange. I hope you are having a great Thanksgiving!
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I would like to add my thanks to the wonderful people who make GA work so well for all of us!
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You're just being a hotdog showing off your alliteration skills. Don't worry, it's just your style.
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I see you have lifted the ban on Yayo stories for the holiday.
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Ah, sweet youth (it's wasted on the young). I have been there and done that for 59 years before I got the heck out and moved here. Just remember I did encourage you to do international teaching and move somewhere much warmer. It is the folly of youth to not listen to the wisdom of their elders.
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True story. The kids I taught here thought I was an idiot wearing short sleeves while they were bundled up in heavy winter coats, wool scarves, boots, hats and gloves. The temperatures in the morning were around 75 F, and they thought that it was freezing. The zoo has a Snow Dome with artificial snow for kids to play in and a long icy slope for sledding.
