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  1. raven1

    Paranormal Deep Dive

    The fact that they did just shows how much readers love your stories. I hope you will add another story to the series.
  2. Hi #Stop bullying me! 😭 I'm going to sleep, so don't expect anything from here.
  3. Happy Birthday young lady! Hope it was a great one, Sherye.
  4. That's exactly why we drag you into everything. It's the only way we can get you to pay attention to us instead of giving Drew googly eyes all day.
  5. Kind of sounds like my day. Routine. I did make the casserole for dinner. It was my own creation and turned out well. If it's edible, that's a win for me. 😁
  6. Hi Albert!
  7. Thought you all might like the drone picture I stole from Clo's collection. Guess who!
  8. Yup! Lucas now has everything to live for. It is a doozer of a word. I remember hearing it a lot when a child and it's still a goodie to me.
  9. We know!
  10. Hi Clo! The weather is normal for the time of year. I'm working on dinner, but also doing some reading. I've caught up on all the stories on GA I am following. I've been doing some editing and beta reading for a few authors here, but have had some time to look at stories on other sites.
  11. Hi Dugh! Hope all is well with you.
  12. I'm happy to hear about the writing. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you too. I left Oregon because of the kind of weather you described. Does it come with cool or very cold temperatures? It's still the rainy season here, but now we get a lot of clear skies. Also, the rainfall is not torrential. Temperatures usually hover around 30 C but will decrease slowly until the end of January.
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    Chapter 34 S1

    You did a great job of introducing Devin, Mac and readers to another interesting set of animals. Thanks, Bill!
  14. Hey Man! What's the news from Manchester? Hope things are going well!
  15. Hi Clo! Hope you are having a good day.
  16. Hi Page! We're doing great. Aod's at the dentist, and I just got back from grocery shopping. Got what I need to make a chicken enchilada and polenta casserole. How are you, Morgan and Max?
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    Chapter 25

    A very good deed led to the surprising reunion of Seth and his father. It promises to finally reveal what happened that made Jim leave, and why he has remained hidden in plain sight. I can't wait to find out if Marie or Julie knows Jim lives in town. There are several cans of worms to be opened in the next chapters. One thing I feel certain about is that Jim is a good man. His neighbor, Edith, thinks very well of him, and he really shows a lot more love and affection than Julie showed in the years Seth was with her. As for who loves who among the boys, I think it is fun to speculate. However, it is also a futile task. These kids have no idea of the differences between lust, love of a friend, romantic love, and crushing due to their emotional growth being stunted by the drama that surrounds their lives. I thought that Ty might be exempt, but this chapter proves I am wrong. I look forward to the many conversations and reveals in the next chapters.
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    Paranormal Deep Dive

    There's a whole lot of great reading by some great authors. Unfortunately, I was only able to add two stories to my list of books to read. I've read almost all of these in the last few years, or am reading them now as chapters post. Note to authors,
  19. Hi Spike!
  20. As promised, I'm back to add to my story comments. Of course, the other readers have done an excellent job of analyzing and observing in their comments. Like @FanLit I was impressed by the pacing and details of Jubal's efforts to rescue Lucas and kill Prescott. It did feel much like an action scene in "Mission Impossible". I honestly don't know how you could have improved on this chapter even if you wanted to. I think a lot of thought was also put into the "how Ronnie was able to ambush" Jubal and Lucas comments. My only thought is that Prescott did know that Lucas probably had the 20 gold pieces from his two dead partners. I was happy that Reid and Lucas settled their differences before the ambush, but wish that Lucas had also been able to tell Jubal what he wanted to say. That's a conversation I hope to hear soon after Lucas recovers. Considering what happens and how Jubal feels about Lucas, it could be Jubal who does or says something to get that conversation started. Thanks, Gary for an excellent chapter. It was perfect!
  21. I hope that soon those places that feel empty will fill your heart with loving, funny and special memories of your sweet Sky. Bless her for all she gave you. May her spirit be with you always.
  22. Good day everyone!
  23. Hi Sherye! Welcome to the madhouse!
  24. It looks like you read Myr's blog on AI Art.
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