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My only question was how chaste the kiss was...or wasn't.
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The new doctor was not married. I think we may have similar thoughts on that.
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I like the tempo of the chapter. It is a sad thing for a father to watch his son disintegrate before his eye. Worse if the father feels responsible. I'm glad that Helen is willing to extend a hand in friendship to him.
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Don't know that The Scar and Dimitri are planning, but like C James' evil villains, they are intelligent, skilled and soulless. It will be interesting when the two stories merge. Lump is his-to-ry and good riddance. Of course, he will stick around to stir up trouble, but Helen will be able to handle it with the support of Instinct. Gabe will be out of the picture. I wonder who helped Helen and interceded to convince the brother's homophobic father to release the contract.
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Strange that two straight guys are kissing in Rome to be sneaky. I'm wondering how this will tie in with Instinct. Had fun reading about all the things that happened during the shopping trip that most people can only dream about. Loved Brandon's reaction to finding out the magazine interview is with Rolling Stone. Just couldn't resist adding this link.
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I love the way the casual dialogue reveals a lot of background information about Chase and Brandon. The small parts about The Scar and his activities are disturbing and creepy.
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Brandon's a bit naive, but Helen and the three brothers are not going to let him suffer because of it. I wonder how much was skimmed and by who. It almost feels like the guy's father set it up. I like the way Helen is like a bulldog protecting her pups. Great chapter.
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A very happy chapter filled with laughs. Brandon's gaydar failure had me rolling on the floor. Eric's question and answer session in the hotel suite was cute with the confession by Brandon that he bought the Drummer magazine because Chase was on the cover.
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Way to get me drooling! I love quiche Lorraine, but the chocolate chip cookies with salted caramel filling had me licking the screen!
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That reminds me that Gary carefully selects names that have interesting meanings. Now I have to go back and so some research. Thanks for the reminder @FanLit!
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Hi Spike! Thanks for sharing the Thai drilling docs.
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Funny that. I see it so I can only imagine you're experiencing a mental block.🤪
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Hi Gary, As I said, I'm really enjoying Bearpaw, however, you have again peaked my curiosity when Lucas went to Larkspur to settle and then left again. You are evil my friend.
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Hi Page! Hope you and yours had a great weekend.
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Hi All! Did everyone have a good weekend?
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Missed a word so I corrected it.
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Spike can't make us think about what we already know. As for the redacted word, you'll continue to get it when you earn it. As for it not being used for two weeks, may I point out that you must be ignoring Spike's posts which show it every time, twice?
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Congratulations Clo! It is awesome!
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Hey Gary! Man and Albert beat me to it, but I just read, commented and reacted on Bearpaw. The story just keeps getting better and better.
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Excellent dialogue and from what was said Lucas and Jubal are kindred spirits. They share a lot of the same values and goals. I liked that Jubal still wants to catch and tame his own horse still. Lucas will have some problems to work through after killing a man, but I'm sure Jubal will be able to help him with that. Hopefully, the sheriff is honest and decent in the way he handles the situation when Lucas and Jubal turn the bodies of the two guys over to him. I really do enjoy your Western tales, Gary. Now the wait for the next chapter.
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I heading there now!
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
raven1 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
I can understand all the comments about communication, conflicted feelings, guilt and changing dynamics in the comments. Some interesting and logical arguments were well stated. Therefore, I will simply state that I had a great time reading this chapter. I focused on all the wonderful and funny images created. First was the bedsheet dilemma! I will remember this every week when I change my bedding. Second was the eggplant. I swear you have a very inventive and naughty mind @Mrsgnomie!- 122 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
raven1 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
She's just feeling a bit guilty. (I got notification again of her comment before the notification Mrs. G posted the story.) tsk, tsk!- 122 comments
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I did the same before going to dinner.
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Sorry, but I was too busy stuffing myself. No pics I took, but here's one from their website for the restaurant. Minus the pretty lady, the table and food look the same as well as the background. We didn't have any seafood, just pork and beef.
