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  1. Hi Page! How are you today?
  2. Hi Gary! Just woke up to a sunny day and checking in here. Hope everything is well for you and yours.
  3. Hi Cassie, Glad you are better. Hope you have all the energy and inspiration you need to write up a storm.
  4. Hi Drew! How are things your way?
  5. An excellent adventure filled with suspense and danger, but also love and humor. This well written and researched story will keep you on the edge of your seat. It is fast paced and will keep you reading long into the night.
  6. Excellent news!
  7. Hi Bucket! Weather here is the usual for summer. Blue skies in the morning then increasing clouds by noon. Afternoon and evening rains keep the temps about 30 degrees. Yesterday was spent doing chores and shopping, then out for the evening with friends. Today is for reading and relaxing.
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    Secrets and Lies

    That makes three of us. Especially when Steve said this. He wouldn't be the first religious fanatic in a rock group. I wonder how violent he can be.
  9. Great chapter! Comments were also very good. I agree that Perry is being practical. He knows he wants is Kyan who at this point is emotionally back in middle school. Max will be a possibility for Perry, but only if Kyan remains uncommitted to a long-term romantic relationship with Perry. Kyan is a middle school horny boy with all the problems of a young teen. I do agree he should be upfront with Max, but Kyan isn't mature enough yet to act like an adult. Max seems really nice, and I don't think Mrs.G is just going to through him away. Max and Perry haven't spent any time together to form a relationship of any kind. At best, they are both at the stage of thinking each other might have future potential. I can't see Max being hurt at this stage, but if Perry and Kyan are not honest and begin playing games, Max could be hurt...a lot!
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    Chapter 16

    We all knew this was coming, and the explosion was big, messy and revealed the truth to all. I don't feel anything for Stacy, and am happy she got rewarded for all her nasty comments and attitudes. As far as I'm concerned the background music for her should be "She Had It Coming" from Chicago. Blake, Roni and Amber should have listened to Seth when he didn't want to go to the party or left when they found it full of drunk, horny people. That's a perfect setting for an explosion. Seth needs to learn how to be assertive. Craig is in a very difficult place and at least Seth was able to stop him from killing them both. However, I think Craig will still be in danger from himself and need support from more than Seth to survive. Seth's problem will be when his mom comes home. Great action and pacing in this chapter.
  11. Hey @dughlas! What have you been up to?
  12. Hi Dan! Hope all is going well for you.
  13. Hi Bucket! How's the weather? Spring is around the corner for you, right?
  14. Hi Man, How's the new home office working out for you?
  15. Hey Spike! I'm doing well. How are you?
  16. Hi Albert! That pizza you made was just my style.
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    Batch 47

    Like Chris and Weinerdog I wasn't sure what reaction to post. First, I was shocked, then angry, sad and then felt the love. I was expecting "Chad" to be Gav. At least what happened ended with Gav and River together. Well written and I am still amazed at how the diary format flows so well.
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    Chapter 8

    That's OK for me. I never complain when someone publishes a story I am enjoying early. James is a great guy who really cares for the kids. Knowing the way Dakota, Jonas and Robin have bonded, he made their wishes come true. It was sad that Collin left before Dakota could talk with him again. Dakota will be surprised when he next sees Collin. Dakota will be expecting a young boy, and find a much changed Collin who will have seemingly aged in a few short weeks. What problem did Robin find when he opened the horse trailer?
  19. Bunting is the favorite decoration for any occasion in Thailand. Please trust me when I say that. Once in place, it will stay for many, many months.
  20. I hope they will get plenty of practice. It may take an entire lifetime or more before it is perfected. I am sure you are right about taking time for the new dynamics, but hopefully it will be fun, exciting and fulfilling for both.
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    Wild Wild Night

    Yep! I love love her for that. Those Vestal gossips must have phoned in the information as soon as they could. Who do they work for? At least Brandon and Chase are together at last. Jon and Erik are sure going to get an earful from Helen. Back at Australia that engineer is not as smart as he thinks he is. Dimitri has all but confirmed that not only will the lab assistants be silenced permanantly, the engineer won't last longer than it takes to finish his task.
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