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Craig is a much more sympathetic character who has survived a lot of abuse from his family. With the help of Aunt Marie (a saint) and her friend, he will probably survive this also. Seth's mom is an ass as is Stacy. I hope Marie puts her thru the ringer. Blake seemed to be the real survivor in this. I guess his history has helped him cope better that Craig or Seth. Seth is now in a good place with both Blake and Craig. I think with his aunt's support he will finally be able to thrive. Great chapter as far as the plot goes and great writing of the dialogue. I also appreciated the insightful comments made.
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I like how this chapter shows some of the differences between Jubal and Lucas. I like Lucas' laid back and trusting nature as well as Jubal's sense of right and wrong. I hope the sheriff will react to the situation as Lucas believes he will. As usual Gary, you are great at describing the sensory features of the setting, but hopefully after a shower and shave the gruesome smells will not linger. Great writing!
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Hi All, Sorry I've been missing in action for a few days. Someone, cough...Alb...cough, recommended I read Changing Lanes and I binged. Not much news, but I did have a great seafood dinner compliments of a friend's birthday on Monday. I also go news from Aod that night that his father will be visiting and staying with us for a week. His father is a very nice man and loves to ask questions, in Thai. It's going to be a confusing week with Aod constantly being asked to translate. I hope his nerves are up for that.
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You won't see my comment in the chapters. Once I started, I binged. This is an exciting visual adventure and romance with everything you could want in a story. It is a sequel that is equal to its predecessor, so I would suggest starting there. Let The Music Play and Changing Lanes will provide you with many hours of reading enjoyment. My highest recommendations.
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August Signature Author Feature: Gone Fishing by Headstall
raven1 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
A must read if you are a romantic. Cia knows how to pick great stories to feature here. You will feel alive and wonderful after reading this story.- 4 comments
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Max is a definite winner. Michael is fortunate to have a friend like Max. Night terrors are common to kids so there shouldn't be a big problem unless it causes sleep deprivation. I hope Michael's parents are keeping an eye on him.
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Hi Dan! I hope you stay a while!
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She's still a young lady! Hope you all have something special planned for her.
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You can't make comments like that if you want Spike to call you Phi Chai. Hey Drew! What's new in the Espinosa household?
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The memories may be old, but the spirit remains young! How was your weekend Spike?
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Hi Cassie! Just curious. How's the writing going for you?
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Hi Clo! Hope you had a fun weekend. I agree with you. Making bread takes a lot of patience, which I don't have. I love homemade bread, but usually fail when I try to make it.😪
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Hi Albert! That looks so delicious!
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Hi Page, Hope y'all had a great weekend.
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Hey Gary! Hope your weekend went well. Yep, We also had one of those. When I got old enough and tall enough, it became one of my chores to help mom do the laundry.
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Hi Man! Aod and I had a quiet weekend. I mostly read and he played games on his new PlayStation. It sounds like you had a productive weekend writing, baking and watching football. Hope the coming week goes well for you.
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Diaries are very intimate. This short story written as diary entries is a very intimate tale of college romance. Filled with love, humor, angst and tough times it is a great read. It is highly recommended.
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Me too! How are you today Man?
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In that case, you and Steve stay safe!
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Hi Everyone!
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Hi Albert! Hope that hurricane headed your way doesn't make it.
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Good night Bucket! Sleep well.
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Hey Clo, It could be worse. My grandma used something like this to iron clothes.
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It was a fun chapter going from almost snow to poolside grills. The food made me hungry. The family get-together went well, so the boys don't have that to worry about as their relationship continues.
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I like the start of the story as well as the characters introduced. I am envious of Scott's book collection. I assume the setting was picked to fit what will happen, so I expect a lot of harassment and anxiety in the future.
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