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Missed a word so I corrected it.
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Spike can't make us think about what we already know. As for the redacted word, you'll continue to get it when you earn it. As for it not being used for two weeks, may I point out that you must be ignoring Spike's posts which show it every time, twice?
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Congratulations Clo! It is awesome!
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Hey Gary! Man and Albert beat me to it, but I just read, commented and reacted on Bearpaw. The story just keeps getting better and better.
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Excellent dialogue and from what was said Lucas and Jubal are kindred spirits. They share a lot of the same values and goals. I liked that Jubal still wants to catch and tame his own horse still. Lucas will have some problems to work through after killing a man, but I'm sure Jubal will be able to help him with that. Hopefully, the sheriff is honest and decent in the way he handles the situation when Lucas and Jubal turn the bodies of the two guys over to him. I really do enjoy your Western tales, Gary. Now the wait for the next chapter.
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I heading there now!
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
raven1 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
I can understand all the comments about communication, conflicted feelings, guilt and changing dynamics in the comments. Some interesting and logical arguments were well stated. Therefore, I will simply state that I had a great time reading this chapter. I focused on all the wonderful and funny images created. First was the bedsheet dilemma! I will remember this every week when I change my bedding. Second was the eggplant. I swear you have a very inventive and naughty mind @Mrsgnomie!- 122 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
raven1 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
She's just feeling a bit guilty. (I got notification again of her comment before the notification Mrs. G posted the story.) tsk, tsk!- 122 comments
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I did the same before going to dinner.
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Sorry, but I was too busy stuffing myself. No pics I took, but here's one from their website for the restaurant. Minus the pretty lady, the table and food look the same as well as the background. We didn't have any seafood, just pork and beef.
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Hey Man! Hope you have a great Monday!
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Hi Clo! Love the gif!
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Hi Albert! Hope you and Steve have a great day! Check your email.
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@CincyKris is right about this. I will binge on it when I read it again.
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Hey @lomax61! Sorry, I forgot to mention you too in my comment! I apologize for the omission!
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Hi Everyone! Just got back from dinner with Aod and his sister Naw. We went to a Chinese Mala Shabu restaurant near us. The cooking soup and sauces were excellent!
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This is definitely me!
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This poem's impact on my senses left me stunned! The contrasting sounds, visual events and smells that flowed from one line to the next were mesmerizing. The title was in the background and merged with the timeline. A very unique poem with great emotional and sensory impact. Beautiful and brilliant!
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Thanks so much for your support, Chris. It makes me happy you enjoyed this.
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I just finished the story and totally agree. It's a great thriller and adventure. I loved searching for clues to solve the mystery. Excellent review @Parker Owens!
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A beautiful last farewell.
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Thank you, Mancunian! I appreciate you taking the time to read these poems. Your kind words and thoughts made me feel wonderful my friend. I am happy that my Haiku poems encourage you. That was one of my goals in writing these. It took me some years to realize it wasn't what happened to me in life that determined my happiness, but how I felt and reacted in response. I wish you all the best, and looking forward to reading many more of your stories.
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Hi Page! Happy Sunday
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I agree with Albert that you should add this one to the list, Man. There is only few things I suggest. Don't start reading until you have finished your story, have a lot of time, and are in a good space. It has 158 chapters and it is over a million words long. Guaranteed to make you binge. It is very intense and often stomach wrenching. Roller coaster emotions would be a very mild description. There are several chapters that could result in nightmares. I do love it!
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That reminds me I started the story today! Prologue and chapters one and two. Thanks for the recommendation!
