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So grateful to find that you've begun a new story!!! Was really getting tired of reading all of your others over and over and over again... Soooo....yeayyyyyyye for us!! Anyway, it's a great chapter, as is all of your work...we appreciate you and your talent!!
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All In Extra--Brad's Demise
Onim commented on craftingmom's story chapter in All In Extra--Brad's Demise
This was the perfectly written ending to an absolutely fabulously constructed story! We could not have asked for better!! Much thanks to you and you editing help! -
You really know how to put 'LOVE' in a love story...great story, very nicely done!! Thanks for sharing!
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I'm in agreement with the majority...'Best Story' winner! Great job...though I would've loved to have seen a bit more development of the love between Jase and Lyle in the end...to also act as a model of love for Devyn and Michael, since they are both still young!! But I will never be arrogant enough to try and tell someone with the brilliant skills you possess...how to write!! You rocked this story...thank you!!
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This chapter totally soothed the romantic side of me and just wrapped everything up in a beautiful package of 'love conquering all'!!! Thank you again for this awesome ride that has encompassed it all...love and hate, tears and joy, agony and ecstasy, with the right amount of sex and sensuality mixed in!! I look forward to the Brad POV...
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Maybe we could have a 'Brad's POV, where we get to see him suffer with the arrest and threat of death and destruction hanging over his head, right up until that fabulous bullet puts him out of his well-deserved misery...hehehe...just a vengeful thought! Seriously, you've done a spectacular job with every aspect of this story!!! We anxiously await more...
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This story has captured and enthralled us from day one...and so it continues...we don't function well without our 'All In' fix of the day!!! Guess we'll all just have to enter rehab together when its done. Such an enjoyable read....going to wait for our next morning 'fix'...
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Heart racing chapter...FINALLY...'what goes up, must come down'!! Brad has created and climbed over death to hopefully reach his own!! Fabulous update...which is the norm for you!!
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OMG!!! Another heart-stopping, nail biting chapter!!! Awesome!!
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Beautiful story, well constructed and nice mixture of romance, excitement, and sensual sex! Thanks for sharing!!
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Another fabulous chapter...wow!
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I decided to read anything I could of yours while awaiting your update of 'All In'...so happy I did!! This was brilliantly imaginative and beautifully written...sooo looking forward to the sequel! Thanks once again, for sharing your very talented work.
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Thank you again for updating so promptly and not allowing those of us 'on the edge' to pull our hair out waiting for the next installment... I've arranged for my laptop to come and get me as soon as you've updated...such a good lil gadget!! lol On a serious note, please continue with your awesome work!
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Another stunning update....
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Your writing is amazing! Your ability to keep us on the edge of our seats, to keep us riveted to the screen, to keep us checking two to three times a day for updates, to get us so involved in each and every one of your characters, is simply something beyond enjoyable!! Thank you for sharing your time and your fabulous talent with us!!! We are all forever fans!
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Why can't our president have a sense of humor?
Onim replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Republicans are never happy unless they have something or someone to debase, downgrade,, despise, denigrate or 'deliver from evil'...that's what makes their day! They awaken every day with the sold purpose of making someone feel less than, so that can feel better than!! :-P -
This was an awesome story, beautifully told, so vivid and bold!!! Loved it and your amazing ability to take us from smiles and laughter to tears and anger with such finesse and excitement! Well done...very well done!!!
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So happy to have found you and your awesome writing here!!! Great first chapter..looking forward to more!!
