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Great chapter, loved the museum descriptions!!! Very nice the way the guys have become so in sync with each other...almost sensing their feelings, solidifying their new found love... The interaction between the friends is building a bond that will be lasting, loving and fun-filled!! Kudos on this chapter!!! You did good...oh...btw, don't think I didn't notice you were a lil late... but, considering it was well worth it...I'll let u slide this time!!
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This has been a unique and exciting story, from beginning to now!!! Looking forward to the epilogue and more of your talent!! Thanks for giving us the pleasure of reading your awesome work!!
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Loving this story!!! Your characters are always unique and fascinating from beginning to end!!
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Wow...this was a bit like sticking a knife in an open wound, over and over again..OUCH!!! Feeling so bad for Ben...and Benoit...evil incarnate!!! Very well written, Rex...you've got all of us ready to join Dave's possee to wipe out that piece of toxic waste!!! Kudos...and can't wait for next week!!
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Absolutely fantastic!!!! This exceeds the "OMG" factor...the battle...soooo well choreographed ...Wow!!! Loved this and can barely wait for the the next chapter!!!
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"Life Doesn't Have to be Perfect ..."
Onim commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "Life Doesn't Have to be Perfect ..."
Very nice chapter...resolved a couple of pertinent questions of insecurities on both sides!! Although I hope Clayton doesn't get too involved in his 'friend's" activities wtihout Ryan's input!!!! " -
Absolutely loved the "detour"...it was amazing, very well done...a surprising twist for these two, but written so nice...you've just gotta love it!!! Great read, great chapter....
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Beautiful epilogue to an amazing story...sitting here imagining all of the tears that are being shed with the ending of this story!! You brought out every range of emotion in us, with each chapter...and we loved it...looked forward to it...pined for it!! Thank you for sharing the talent!!!
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Another great chapter, Rex...love the spontaniety of the love making, glad Ryan didn't let his insecurities get in the way...beautifully done, yet still keeping Clayton a mystery!!! Can't wait for the next....oh and ahmmm...the masses get anxious when their "drug of choice" is LATE, ya know... ...just saying Anywhoooooooo....well done chapter, without a doubt!!!
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Veryyyyyyyy nice chapter, sir!! Informative and a poignant reminder of what Ryan has been through...and obviously still has to go through, before he can see the end of the tunnel!! But, alas the bright spot to light his way now...CLAYTON!! With Clayton, the six month will still be a journey, but not alone...hopefully never alone again.. You did good, Rex...AGAIN!!
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Wow!!! Wolf...you do know how to create and describe an intense battle!!! This chapter has got the heart smiling one minute, excellerating another, and absolutely palpitating uncontrollably another...exciting is an understatement!! Ethan is going to go ballistic and I'm so glad that Casey and the guys have got his six, when he goes to find his heart!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! This was fabulous from start to finish...thanks, Wolf!!!
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Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Onim commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Defintely MORE!! What beautiful story of love you've written!!! -
Somethin's Got To Give, Part Deux
Onim commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Somethin's Got To Give, Part Deux
Okkkkkkkk...great chapter, but did you have to leave us in limbo on sooooooo many things here??? Geezzzzzzzzz, I don't know where to start asking questions!! Guess I'll just have to tune in next chapter...lol...(as if we had a choice) Awesome the way you're showing the growth of the guy's relationship through both their perspectives, almost simultaneously, brilliantly done!!! Soooooooooooo, that being said, when can we get our next "2 Fer"... Seriously, Rex...thanks for sharing the marvelous talent! -
Very nicely done...this slow build up to feelings being felt, but not acknowledged, Rex!!! Love the interaction and return of the "kids"...beautiful! And I'm not quite sure, how you sneaked this chapter in on me, but I turned my head...and all of a sudden you've graced (only me) with 2 new chapters!!! Thanksssssssssssssss so much...I'm liking this 2 for 1 chapter thingy...
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AWESOME!!!! This chapter, this story....the entire body of work has been truly, brilliantly written, from characters to plots to fianlly, lots of love and a sense of belonging for our Andy!!! Thank you Parker for sharing this beautiful story...looking forward to more!!!!!
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So happy that Clayton and Ryan are on the same page...a happy one!!! But...and that's a big but...hehehe...I sure hope Ben's spiral into "Benoit's BS", doesn't cause him to get hurt and he decide that Clayton is his only savior!!!!! Hopefully if that happens, Ryan will have his new legs working and in order to kick some serious butt about HIS man! Anywhooo, really great chapter, Rex (nothing unusual about that) and looking forward to the next chapter...due tomorrow, right??
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Can't wait for you to peel back another layer of mystic from the Pamchenkos...why is he so influential, so deadly, so involved in an 'ex' fiance-in-law's life....and what does this bode for poor Jason...and how to extricate Shane from this diabolical madness!!! Brilliant story with a serious twist in each chapter, so far!!!
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Oh geezzzz Parker...and here I thought we'd had our fill of the Kim Davis's of the world for a while!!! Wow...what an amazing, anxiety filled chapter!! I personally can't wait until the judge deals with this POS in the manner in which Davis should have been dealt with...flush her down the toilet!! In any event...going to take a pill, relax, and let her get handled.. Again, awesomeeee chapter!!!
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Awesomely, vivid depiction of a shift, Wolf!!! This was great, it's like we could feel the pain and agony from beginning to end!! The descriptions of the 4 elements coming to life around Ethan during his shift, was amazing!! This was a brilliantly done chapter, especially the mixing and blending of all the different species, in such harmony!!
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Someday We'll Be Together
Onim commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Someday We'll Be Together
Another feel good chapter of sensuous fun and "discovery"!!! CJ seems to make everything appear to be so natural and right, with such honesty and assuredness!! No hypocrisy or judgemental ignorance will ever be allowed to fester around this kid...laughter and positivity rules his day!! Kudos, Vet!! -
Beautifully done!!! Their love-making scene, could NOT have been handled better...it was so sensual...so sexy...so sensuous...and so natural!!! Wow, well done, Parker!!
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Verrrry nice chapter, Rex...Loving the way the old and new characters are interacting and supporting each other...like a little family!!! Glad Ben is off the grid.. Now we can move forward with some real love, with genuine caring... Sooooo, guess we'll wait for our next chapter...tomorrow good for you???? Ok, next week then, geeeeeezzz!!!!!
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Absolutely brilliant!!! No one does cliffhangers like you...you seemingly draw us into one scenario, making us think wholeheartedly that one thing is going to happen (giving the heartrate a small break) and then smack, we're right back, an inch from the edge of a precipice!!!! You've placed us in that room, feeling Kye's shame and pain, sensing the kindness of Rowland, shrinking away from the evil rolling off of his Master and Richard...again, brilliantly done Crafting!!! Love it!!!
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Fantastic chapter...love the way you handled Zander's convos with his grandparents and siblings...with them in his corner now, life may not seem so daunting for he and Andy to move forward! Looking forward to this next chapter...and Andy's reactions!! Thanks for sharing!!
