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Veryyyyyyyy nice chapter, sir!! Informative and a poignant reminder of what Ryan has been through...and obviously still has to go through, before he can see the end of the tunnel!! But, alas the bright spot to light his way now...CLAYTON!! With Clayton, the six month will still be a journey, but not alone...hopefully never alone again.. You did good, Rex...AGAIN!!
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Wow!!! Wolf...you do know how to create and describe an intense battle!!! This chapter has got the heart smiling one minute, excellerating another, and absolutely palpitating uncontrollably another...exciting is an understatement!! Ethan is going to go ballistic and I'm so glad that Casey and the guys have got his six, when he goes to find his heart!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! This was fabulous from start to finish...thanks, Wolf!!!
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Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Onim commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Defintely MORE!! What beautiful story of love you've written!!! -
Somethin's Got To Give, Part Deux
Onim commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Somethin's Got To Give, Part Deux
Okkkkkkkk...great chapter, but did you have to leave us in limbo on sooooooo many things here??? Geezzzzzzzzz, I don't know where to start asking questions!! Guess I'll just have to tune in next chapter...lol...(as if we had a choice) Awesome the way you're showing the growth of the guy's relationship through both their perspectives, almost simultaneously, brilliantly done!!! Soooooooooooo, that being said, when can we get our next "2 Fer"... Seriously, Rex...thanks for sharing the marvelous talent! -
Very nicely done...this slow build up to feelings being felt, but not acknowledged, Rex!!! Love the interaction and return of the "kids"...beautiful! And I'm not quite sure, how you sneaked this chapter in on me, but I turned my head...and all of a sudden you've graced (only me) with 2 new chapters!!! Thanksssssssssssssss so much...I'm liking this 2 for 1 chapter thingy...
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AWESOME!!!! This chapter, this story....the entire body of work has been truly, brilliantly written, from characters to plots to fianlly, lots of love and a sense of belonging for our Andy!!! Thank you Parker for sharing this beautiful story...looking forward to more!!!!!
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So happy that Clayton and Ryan are on the same page...a happy one!!! But...and that's a big but...hehehe...I sure hope Ben's spiral into "Benoit's BS", doesn't cause him to get hurt and he decide that Clayton is his only savior!!!!! Hopefully if that happens, Ryan will have his new legs working and in order to kick some serious butt about HIS man! Anywhooo, really great chapter, Rex (nothing unusual about that) and looking forward to the next chapter...due tomorrow, right??
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Can't wait for you to peel back another layer of mystic from the Pamchenkos...why is he so influential, so deadly, so involved in an 'ex' fiance-in-law's life....and what does this bode for poor Jason...and how to extricate Shane from this diabolical madness!!! Brilliant story with a serious twist in each chapter, so far!!!
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Oh geezzzz Parker...and here I thought we'd had our fill of the Kim Davis's of the world for a while!!! Wow...what an amazing, anxiety filled chapter!! I personally can't wait until the judge deals with this POS in the manner in which Davis should have been dealt with...flush her down the toilet!! In any event...going to take a pill, relax, and let her get handled.. Again, awesomeeee chapter!!!
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Awesomely, vivid depiction of a shift, Wolf!!! This was great, it's like we could feel the pain and agony from beginning to end!! The descriptions of the 4 elements coming to life around Ethan during his shift, was amazing!! This was a brilliantly done chapter, especially the mixing and blending of all the different species, in such harmony!!
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Someday We'll Be Together
Onim commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Someday We'll Be Together
Another feel good chapter of sensuous fun and "discovery"!!! CJ seems to make everything appear to be so natural and right, with such honesty and assuredness!! No hypocrisy or judgemental ignorance will ever be allowed to fester around this kid...laughter and positivity rules his day!! Kudos, Vet!! -
Beautifully done!!! Their love-making scene, could NOT have been handled better...it was so sensual...so sexy...so sensuous...and so natural!!! Wow, well done, Parker!!
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Verrrry nice chapter, Rex...Loving the way the old and new characters are interacting and supporting each other...like a little family!!! Glad Ben is off the grid.. Now we can move forward with some real love, with genuine caring... Sooooo, guess we'll wait for our next chapter...tomorrow good for you???? Ok, next week then, geeeeeezzz!!!!!
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Absolutely brilliant!!! No one does cliffhangers like you...you seemingly draw us into one scenario, making us think wholeheartedly that one thing is going to happen (giving the heartrate a small break) and then smack, we're right back, an inch from the edge of a precipice!!!! You've placed us in that room, feeling Kye's shame and pain, sensing the kindness of Rowland, shrinking away from the evil rolling off of his Master and Richard...again, brilliantly done Crafting!!! Love it!!!
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Fantastic chapter...love the way you handled Zander's convos with his grandparents and siblings...with them in his corner now, life may not seem so daunting for he and Andy to move forward! Looking forward to this next chapter...and Andy's reactions!! Thanks for sharing!!
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Excellent chapter, Wolf!!! Looking forward to the meeting of the 2 Solaris, should be interesting to watch this intrigue unfold. Can't wait until Ethan is unleashed upon that "smartest man in the room" greedy leader of thieves and murders!!! Sooo hoping that Michael is not "saved" in the end, he does not appear to have a redeeming vein running through him! Thoroughly enjoyable story...thank you for sharing...can't wait until "26"..
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Great chapter...Preston is HILARIOUSSSSS!!! Good to see the two people that probably needed toning down a bit..."tune" each other up!!!
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Awesome chapter....love the suspense and excitement!! Now looking forward to Merrick taking care of business and giving whomever caused Jensen's pain...exactly what they've asked for!!! Thanks for sharing the fabulous talent!!
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Very nice chapter, Parker!!! I feel as if we're watching Andy slowly shed away the depressing, demoralizing, degrading baggage he's been made to carry for soooo very long!! So good to see him learning to trust and laugh and smile...and use the word..."Mom"!!! Loved this one!!
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Love this chapter...the humor between them all is just so endearing and makes us laugh and smile along with them...after having a bad day...reading this chapter is a guranteed "upper"!! Thanks, Vet....very, very much!!!
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Awww Rex...marvelous chapter...you've introduced us to these two very different characters and quickly, after only 2 chapters made them our favorites!!! Soooo looking forward to Ryan and Clayton's journey of discovery, trials, and eventual (hopefully) overcoming any and all obstacles to the path of their love!! Thanks Rex...you delivered in the usual fabulous way!!
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Awesome chapter....sooooooooooo worth the wait!!! Just the right amount of excitement for this cliffy...can't wait to see how this will affect the progress of Jensen and Merrick's love... Thanks for the update...awaiting the next..
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What the Hell Am I Thinking?
Onim commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in What the Hell Am I Thinking?
Awwww Rex...this is shaping up to be one of your classic exciting page turners!!! Another of those fabulous "can't wait for the next chapter", with intriguing characters interwoven with some oldies (Barry, Rex, Dave, etc.) but goldies, plot twisting, stories!! "Can't wait" to find out Clayton's secrets and watch the Ben vs Ryan show unfold!! Excellent chapter...ready for the next...tomorrow did you say... Anywayyyyyyy...Thanks for sharing, and glad you're feeling better!! -
Fabulous chapter!! It just gets better and better with each chapter, there's no let up.. Once again, thank you for sharing your amazing talent!!
