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Absolutely fantastic!!!! Every story you've done so far, have been 'homers'...you have an amazing ability for 'cliffhangers'...that is, us 'hanging off the cliffs waiting for more, more, more CM!! We all would be elated if you continued the Kayden/Damien Saga, with a sprinkling of Oliver/Joseph in the mix, or separate. A jealous wench looking to be queen would play right into your extraordinarily gifted writing mind...you'd more than likely blow our minds with that scenario, with maybe Oliver's controlling dad coaxing the gold-digger...that way Oli and Nash would be drawn into the mix to help....just a thought... In any case...you are awesome and thanks for the stories!
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Awww...just look what love has created...from kit to lion, with compassion, bravery, independent, and the strength of mind to control it all...WOW!! Kayden has truly taken us on a journey of discovery and love...an amazing ride, CM...we appreciate your work and thank you for sharing the trip with us!!! We'll be on your next 'bus' too...lol
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Hail to the 'Cliff-hanger Queen'...you've done it again!!! What an exciting chapter, the little neko has awakened and behold a Giant!!
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Wow...sensual shower, loving man, caring friends, new face...Barry is certainly off to an interesting and adventurous new life...can't wait for more!! Marvelous chapter, Rex!!
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I knew this would be the best gut-wrenching chapter yet!!!!! Thankfully, Kayden's mind is sharper and stronger now...something the hunters are not aware of!! Awesome chapter CM!!!
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A well constructed, exciting chapter that I suspect will lead us into a 'nail-biting', on the edge of our seats chapter!! Leave it to you, to give us such a vivid depiction of 'jealousy at it's best'!! Let Damien's mind torture him thinking of how is life will be, if his ultimate love never returns! Again, we applaud you on a fabulous chapter....
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Loving this!! Exciting, and as always great writing!!
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Excellent chapter...as usual!! Glad to see Barry coming to terms with the love he's being surrounded with!
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Loving this start!! Kayden is maturing beautifully, as I'm sure this story will...already checking for an update...
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Another wonderful chapter of love...your characters 'scream' the kind of love we all aspire to!! Looking forward to ANYTHING you write!! Thanks once again, for sharing.
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Loved this story! Though, because I began 'Landfall' first, it remains 'topdog'!! Both are well written, sensitive, teary, sexy entries that make them such a pleasure to read!! Thanks for sharing your wonderful work...you and a couple of other authors on this site, definitely would get the "I'd Buy Before a James Patterson" award!!
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Your first is a definite WINNER! We're undeniably hooked and anxiously await more from you!!!
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Sooo well done...leaving us in suspense and in awe of your writing is a habit with you!!
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Fabulous chapter!! Like everyone else, I too look forward to the take down of both of these 'upstanding' citizens.. though I would love for them both to be caught, tried, and sent to the 'house of Bubba' with just rewards given to them on an hourly basis... just a 'pleasant' wish for the two!! In any case, with your more brilliant mind at work, I'm sure we can expect the best and most satisfying ending!!
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AWESOME!! How could we skip anything you write?? So, we'll just break out the tissues and pass them around. And happily read on...
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So grateful to find that you've begun a new story!!! Was really getting tired of reading all of your others over and over and over again... Soooo....yeayyyyyyye for us!! Anyway, it's a great chapter, as is all of your work...we appreciate you and your talent!!
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All In Extra--Brad's Demise
Onim commented on craftingmom's story chapter in All In Extra--Brad's Demise
This was the perfectly written ending to an absolutely fabulously constructed story! We could not have asked for better!! Much thanks to you and you editing help! -
You really know how to put 'LOVE' in a love story...great story, very nicely done!! Thanks for sharing!
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I'm in agreement with the majority...'Best Story' winner! Great job...though I would've loved to have seen a bit more development of the love between Jase and Lyle in the end...to also act as a model of love for Devyn and Michael, since they are both still young!! But I will never be arrogant enough to try and tell someone with the brilliant skills you possess...how to write!! You rocked this story...thank you!!
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This chapter totally soothed the romantic side of me and just wrapped everything up in a beautiful package of 'love conquering all'!!! Thank you again for this awesome ride that has encompassed it all...love and hate, tears and joy, agony and ecstasy, with the right amount of sex and sensuality mixed in!! I look forward to the Brad POV...
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Maybe we could have a 'Brad's POV, where we get to see him suffer with the arrest and threat of death and destruction hanging over his head, right up until that fabulous bullet puts him out of his well-deserved misery...hehehe...just a vengeful thought! Seriously, you've done a spectacular job with every aspect of this story!!! We anxiously await more...
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This story has captured and enthralled us from day one...and so it continues...we don't function well without our 'All In' fix of the day!!! Guess we'll all just have to enter rehab together when its done. Such an enjoyable read....going to wait for our next morning 'fix'...
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Heart racing chapter...FINALLY...'what goes up, must come down'!! Brad has created and climbed over death to hopefully reach his own!! Fabulous update...which is the norm for you!!
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OMG!!! Another heart-stopping, nail biting chapter!!! Awesome!!
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Beautiful story, well constructed and nice mixture of romance, excitement, and sensual sex! Thanks for sharing!!
