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Great start...should be very interesting how this progresses!!!

Excellent chapter!! So happy that Nobu took the high road and decided to forgive and walk away with both his dignity and integrity...leaving Daisuke in more turmoil and anguish than if he had physically tortured him!! There may be a chance for the guys to extricate themselves from these detrimental familial ties that seem to want to rob them of humanity and potentially keep them apart!! Can't wait to see the brothers confront their father....

Thanks Rex, for the awesome history of a movement, a time, an epidemic that was allowed to almost wipe out an entire generation of wonderful loving people!! This chapter brought tears and memories of how heinous human beings can be toward others whom they perceive as "different" or not worthy to be protected and secure in our world...I've lived through the tragedies of both the 60's and the 80's...and yet, we still have to be ever vigilante in keeping evil and hate at bay, everyday!! How sad! Again, excellent chapter...glad to see the guys moving forward so lovingly!!

As usual...you've done a fabulous job with this chapter...the adenalin rush you gave us with the anticipation of Vladi getting to Daisuke in time and the terror we felt (literally) along with Nobu for Viktor's life...was just amazing!!! Thank you for such an awesome story, and especially for this chapter that took us from terror to relief...brilliantly!!

Fabulous chapter to a beautiful story!!! So glad Cor was forced to thow the "garbage" out! Hopefully he can learn to forgive and give Jas another chance...if Pierre can do it...what's stopping him.. Get a grip Cor and see what's smacking you in the face.. Awesome writing...

Awesome....simply fantastic story!! So looking forward to Ash making Kye believe that he's worthy of being loved...should be quite interesting to say the least!!

Hoping this review will let you know that you've created two characters that we've totally become enamored with!! Loving the storyline, and the way it's developing...beautiful!!! So please be encouraged to give us moreeeeeeeeeeeee!! BTW, love the way Benji is taking care of his man...

While I'll admit to not caring for Jason and his cavalier treatment of Pierrre, I was totally impressd with the way he was so open and honest about his shortcomings back when he was young and taking everything for granted!! It shows his level of maturity, especially given the fact that it could have gone downhill and caused a scene...he knew that it was something that had to be done.. Difficult chapter...beautifully done!!

Brilliantly done...so exciting..so loving, so menacing...all wrapped into one chapter!!! Absolutely brilliant writing!! Can't wait for the next chapter...you have left our minds in turmoil...and literally on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks for sharing!

Very nice updating chapter, Rex...love how you have them showing the kind of love a real friendship should be...unconditional and there when you need it!! Good job!!! Hope you're doing ok and in good health! Can't wait for the next chapter...

Very nice...soooo glad our Barry is ok, and hoping that with all he's been through, with the love of Dave and their wonderful friends, he'll be just fine!!! But it was hell waiting a whole week... not knowing if one of our faves was ok!!!!!!!! Thanks for the update on everything.. I wasn't worried one bit Anyway, now to Clay's secret...after all of this, I'm glad he realizes that his love is in excellent hands...and secrets will be handled... Rex!!!

Great beginning...can't wait to see how these two tango!!! One will teach the other about a delightful sense of humor that can go a little awry...while the other will have to learn that every day is not a "play" day....should be quite interesting!! Absolutely loving the storyline and the characters already!!

Hey Rex...I'm a bit confused...would the authorities have left them all there without investigating the scene, dusting, and collecting evidence to get a sure fire conviction??? And would Barry's friends be more worried about celebrating a holiday when they don't know how badly he may have been injured??? Help me out buddy....just askin???? Are we to learn the answers next?

Wow...just happened onto this story...and so far, am blown away with it's energy and excitement!! And now...they must deal with the asinine "media" of assume what you will and assinate characters at will... In any case, looking forward to "plan B" and the next chapters...amazing job so far!!

Hmmm...trying to decide whether to beat you now...or wait until the end of the story!!!??? Decisions, decisions, decisions...ahhh...guess I'll have to wait until you finish the story(psst..wouldn't want to injure those talented fingers)!! Excellent chapter, Rex!!! Love how you're showing how Clayton and Ryan are getting sooo comfortable and more understanding of each other!! While the nightmares concern me, I think that the love that's growing between these two, will suffice any and all obstacles! Let me be the first to say that...this poor robber has...picked the wrong bar, the wrong night, and OMG...the absolute frikin wrong set of friends to try and rob...Dave is gonna kill him for breathing on Barry, and twice for threatening him and his friends!!! Can't wait for the next chapter...tomorrow In any case...awesome job "King Cliffy"!!

Very nice storyline here...short chapter, but informative none the less...characters are coming to life better and liking the way this is fleshing out so far!! Good job!

Great chapter, loved the museum descriptions!!! Very nice the way the guys have become so in sync with each other...almost sensing their feelings, solidifying their new found love... The interaction between the friends is building a bond that will be lasting, loving and fun-filled!! Kudos on this chapter!!! You did good...oh...btw, don't think I didn't notice you were a lil late... but, considering it was well worth it...I'll let u slide this time!!

This has been a unique and exciting story, from beginning to now!!! Looking forward to the epilogue and more of your talent!! Thanks for giving us the pleasure of reading your awesome work!!

Loving this story!!! Your characters are always unique and fascinating from beginning to end!!

Wow...this was a bit like sticking a knife in an open wound, over and over again..OUCH!!! Feeling so bad for Ben...and Benoit...evil incarnate!!! Very well written, Rex...you've got all of us ready to join Dave's possee to wipe out that piece of toxic waste!!! Kudos...and can't wait for next week!!

Absolutely fantastic!!!! This exceeds the "OMG" factor...the battle...soooo well choreographed ...Wow!!! Loved this and can barely wait for the the next chapter!!!

Very nice chapter...resolved a couple of pertinent questions of insecurities on both sides!! Although I hope Clayton doesn't get too involved in his 'friend's" activities wtihout Ryan's input!!!! "

Absolutely loved the "detour"...it was amazing, very well done...a surprising twist for these two, but written so nice...you've just gotta love it!!! Great read, great chapter....

Beautiful epilogue to an amazing story...sitting here imagining all of the tears that are being shed with the ending of this story!! You brought out every range of emotion in us, with each chapter...and we loved it...looked forward to it...pined for it!! Thank you for sharing the talent!!!

Another great chapter, Rex...love the spontaniety of the love making, glad Ryan didn't let his insecurities get in the way...beautifully done, yet still keeping Clayton a mystery!!! Can't wait for the next....oh and ahmmm...the masses get anxious when their "drug of choice" is LATE, ya know... ...just saying Anywhoooooooo....well done chapter, without a doubt!!!