Oh you clever, clever writer you!
"Kieran sat on the beach and watched the promenade:...a man with a large wolf-dog, walking along with his fingers in the animal’s thick ruff; "
I had to read it twice! Working Boris/Buddy and Oli in there!
Kieran does have a lot to work out, but man, he is growing in leaps and bounds here! I'm falling for him myself!
Well done!
Trying to be patient for the next chapter, but I am feeling so drawn to these people! I'm really enjoying the way you gently weave the back story in. I appreciate not being hit over the head with it.
I think I'll go re-read the first 3 chapters.......
Have a great Saturday!
I just love these guys! Love the way they care for each other and back each other up! I hope after the confrontation with MaryAnn our boys can get back to the business of being students and pack mates. I can't wait to see how CE helps Sam.
I've read the whole story 4 or 5 times now waiting for new chapters to appear!