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  1. mollyhousemouse

    The Pit

  2. I feel much the same way the Lyssa and Puppilull do. Although English is my first language and my background is in writing, I am no writer. Leaving a "review" seemed pretentious. Most of what I write is "comments." I want to encourage the authors I read to keep writing, to keep sharing these people who live in their heads, their talents, with readers. Being involved with forums, and reading some authors blogs, I've come to understand better how valuable my comments and likes are. I'm lavish with the likes! I'll leave comments every few chapters. I also hope that having a "Comments" label, there will be more feedback from readers.
  3. mollyhousemouse

    Part Two

    Oh, tim....well done! Bravo!! And so many other things that mean, "Man, that was good!" I could feel SIlver's trepidation at hearing Goram utter those three tiny, yet significant, words. Goram's shock at seeing the silver goat taking Silver's little purse. And the fact that he didn't care. If you wanted to write more fairy tales, I'd surely read them. Thanks, tim. For sharing this story with us! Molly
  4. and What am I thanking you for, you may wonder? For putting words, well thought out wonderful words, to what we all have felt from time to time. And the sun! How wonderful it feels when, not feeling at all like the you you like to be, and you step into the sunshine. Oh yes. Like a hug from a dear friend. I'm sorry as hell you are feeling lost. And yet feeling blessed that you have the words, and the courage, to share this with us.
  5. mollyhousemouse

    Part Two

    I loved this! It is different than what you usually write for us and I really enjoyed it. It made me a little angry that William took away Tris' ability to choose at the end. Tris could have gone on to do good, or even great, things. But William took more than that when he first turned Tris, didn't he? Another story to add to the library of "Stories to Read Again."
  6. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 12

    How will Kiorl react to having to work for what he wants? Hard to say, can't wait to watch the drama (oh it will be drama) unfold!
  7. tim, I'm so glad that your Christmas turned itself around. Having a plan is a great idea! Let someone (Mike) know what the plan is so he can help you execute it.
  8. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 1

    I already have Chris Pratt cast in the role of Coop. Will they start raising horses, all from Cholo the stud? Will they move to Wiley's place? Will they sell it and stay in their idyllic valley? If these two fine fellas and their lives make the occasional appearance, I wouldn't mind it one bit. Nicely done, Gary
  9. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 1

    Gary, the people who inhabit your stories are so very real! They are people we could know. And that weather! Growing up in Northern Colorado, I know storms like that. They can be really scary and come up just that fast. Reading about it made me grateful that I'm in Central Texas now, lol! Thanks again for sharing them with us.
  10. Grown up work clothes, off and in the hamper. PJ's and fluffy socks, on. Supper, eaten. Cold beverage, at hand. Let the reading begin! Authors...Thanks for the words Gary...Congratulations! Support team...Thanks for giving of your time and talent Mann...Thanks for the artwork, it's beautiful
  11. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 9

    Oh Tim! What a lovely way to end this story. Terry has a wonderful heart. To know that Dave needs time to mourn. Without pressure. And how brave Dave is! To take a chance on Terry. To trust Terry with his heart on that walk, "hand in hand and side by side." Of course it's not the end! Their love will go on blooming! Barry and Cathy's baby will be born. Who knows, there might be a baby in Dave and Terry's future. But that, to me, is what a good story does. Makes the reader care about the inhabitants of that world. Even if we don't hear from them again, we know that their world goes on. Thanks again for sharing them with us!
  12. mollyhousemouse

    Red Rose

    It really isn't about the destination, is it? Selfishly, I hope the trip lasts a long, long time. Or there are many more trips in the future. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
  13. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 8

    My heart breaks for Dave. And for Jim, for having to tell Dave. And even for Terry. They all love Dave, and it's hard to see someone you love in that much pain. Another review nicknamed Cathy, "mayor Cathy" that's pretty close to what's happening! Their little community seems to be off on the right foot. Well done, Tim, well done.
  14. mollyhousemouse

    Levko

    Oh, Tim. Hard to tell who saved who in this story. But isn't that also real life? Thanks again for trusting us with your story.
  15. mollyhousemouse

    Ice

    I didn't realize polar bears were blind... I mean, even Rye can see it. I'm so glad that Jian is patient, hmmmm, is that a tiger trait? Thanks Sasha
  16. I loved the conversation between Cesar and Owen. If Owen wants this to work, he's got to change the way he thinks. CJ amazes me. My twins are his age, and while they have, from time to time, bought dinner for us, they are more concerned with GPA's and logging volunteer hours. Heck, we've never even had one of the "date" yet. I do admire the way Brett and Cesar have let CJ in on the family finances. While we aren't in their tax bracket, we've done that too. We feel it de-mystifies the way the world works. Looking forward to the rest of the trip! Molly
  17. Well, that makes 4, or 5, times that I've read Ladies Man. The video from the song inspiration was on yesterday morning, so this is where I started my weekend of self-indulgent reading. Ashlee and Clem never fail to make me happy. The fact that I live so close to Ausitn, that I know, I just KNOW that I have seen them somewhere. Lakeline Mall, perhaps? 6th Street, late at night? The Wolf Ranch Farmers Market? Thanks, Sasha! Molly xoxoxoxo
  18. mollyhousemouse

    Part 1

    What a wonderful way to start! I will wait as patiently as I can for Part 2. Now, however, my itch for ink has intensified.... Thanks again for sharing your talent! Molly
  19. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 3

    Well done! William King mentioned that this sounds like a Western. It does. Mad Max meets Sergio Leone. Hurry up Tuesday! Molly
  20. mollyhousemouse

    Intimate

    Why is it that other people can see what we can't? Rye knew, heck even Zeke figured it out. Em? Clueless. For the most part. I mean, after the last night at Zeke's he was getting closer to figuring it out. Either way, what a satisfying chapter. Now, how will it move forward? Oh the anticipation!
  21. What a very sweet peek into their world. Isn't having a sweet boyfriend the greatest? Thanks again, Sasha!
  22. What a great way to spend my lunch hour! Today. I held off on reading this as I always get a bit longer for lunch on Friday, my manager is out of the office at noon on Friday Thanks for remembering that CJ is just 16, same age as my twins, yikes. I love the comments from Owens sister at that last dinner. Thanks...
  23. These two pieces affected me in a way that I can't explain. I don't think I have the words. Please know that I read them, they affected me, and I feel blessed that you are in this world. Molly xoxo
  24. mollyhousemouse

    me Zombie

    What a great little story! It's like one of those great old episodes of The Twilight Zone, or The Outer Limits! Nicely done Tim!
  25. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 3

    Crying demons.....never a good thing. Not as much scary as really, really sad. I do so love all the guys in the house, but Kiorl, maybe because he's a panther, has always been a favorite. Glad that he gave himself permission to cry, now hoping that he acts on the knowledge he gained in doing it. Thanks again, Sasha...
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