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  1. Defiance19

    Chapter 1

    I love Zombie.. There is a shortage of actual good Zombie, written or otherwise. This is really good. Inhuman speed and can supposedly regenerate itself? Yesss!! Sucked me right into your world. Looking forward to this story. Very well done, Geron
  2. I checked.. thought I worked a miracle. It’s ok on my iPad not the phone. 😒
  3. You drive home a very good point, Gary. Sometimes even with the best communication things get lost in translation, and quarrels happen. It is not only important to listen to what being said, but to hear your partner. Really hear them. Relationships take work and I’m happy Paul and Chris could figure it out. Very well done Gary.. Thank you.
  4. Ahh, fixed it. I have no problem walking in the rain...most times. I enjoyed taking this walk with you. Particularly, seeing brightness and cheer, in a place where the first thought is often of sadness and mourning. It’s a wonderful perspective and a great Haibun. Nice work, tim.
  5. Defiance19

    The Class

    That was awesome. Dean kind of let himself be led there, because he never insisted on an answer. Thing is, I can see how that happens which makes this great. So well done as usual tim, and good golly, I am only a day away from this being my truth.(they do start out as little aliens) lol.
  6. Thank you, Gary. I miss a lot of too, but I’m happy you found this little bit. Your support and encouragement of me is greatly appreciated. Thanks again, dear friend.
  7. Thank you very much, molly. Glad you found this. You flatter me, but I really do appreciate the comments.
  8. Thank you for reading this, and leaving your very kind comment. I truly appreciate it. I’m glad you saved the brandy too..
  9. Thank you, Ivor. You still managed to say a great deal.. I appreciate it.
  10. Thank you, Geron. I’m so glad you found this and read it. I appreciate the comment even more. Thanks again.
  11. Defiance19

    Prompt #689

    Yes, the dread. You told this story beautifully, capturing the emotions, fears and convictions of Aaron and Gavin. I get Aaron’s loyalty, but it’s hard when you’re the one left behind, not knowing. Well done.
  12. So happy. I appreciate you reading it, Carlos. You know how much your opinion means. xo
  13. Im thrilled you think so, AC.. Thank you.. I can’t say it enough. I appreciate all your help.
  14. Thank you, Zenobia.. Your comments are inspiring and kind. I really appreciate it.
  15. Sorry it took you back to that place.. For me, my aunt’s last days sparked this story. Life does go on and we do learn to live it the best way we can. Thank you, avid reader. I appreciate you reading this. xo
  16. Thank you, tim. For your kind words, your help, everything.. I appreciate it.
  17. Thank you, Reader. I appreciate you reading it.. I couldn’t help the sad..
  18. “If you die on me, I will never forgive you.” I wanted to take the words back as soon as I said them. I saw the alarm and wild panic in his eyes, but I also saw what he was trying desperately to say without any words. He loved me. He was sorry. He didn’t want to die. Desperately trying to control my quaking voice, I whispered, “I love you. I will always love you. I’m not leaving you. I’m right here.” His eyes shone bright at my words. Tears rolled out of the corners of his ey
  19. Hugs, Val.. I will be thinking of you.. 💕
  20. Defiance19

    Chapter 2

    Well damn... Kevin. I probably need to digest this a bit more, but it was a powerful chapter in terms of Kevin’s state of mind.
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