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  1. This was the way it was meant to happen. A wonderful ending, Gary!! I’m glad that Drake finally, finally understood what he was doing. I didn’t think all was lost in the last chapter, but I’m glad Jimmy distances himself like that. They both needed that time to realise some truths about themselves and that they are what each other needed. Glad we get an epilogue too!! Thank you for another fantastic story, Gary.
  2. Defiance19

    ATGB IV

    RIP Abo... Death is a reality, but it does really suck. There is no right way to deal with the reaction to it. Sometimes it hits right away or it comes months after. Everyone deals differently. No doubt Ritchie will be ok, he has wonderful support. In the end, they all have each other to lean on whenever they need. Knowing that, is comforting. Well done, Carlos.., ps: I was excited just reading about the jet pack water ride/adventure. I wouldn’t be so brave though although it looks like fun.
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    Chapter 1

    Ahh, yes. This felt like a home coming. Great to be back with familiar faces. Ty/Brat.. hope he never changes. Ollie too for that matter. They add such charm. lol. Loved that Neil is going to be a groomsman. It may be unreasonable to hope that Neil, Liam and Clarissa all get in at U of S, but I will anyway. I look forward to the stories of our new guys entwined with the friends we already know.
  4. In hindsight I guess we could see Kevin coming out a mile away. He’s been edging toward this for a while. I’m struggling to figure out why Kevin wouldn’t tell Becker. That’s like a slap. Yeah, it’s freeing for Kevin but he wasn’t isolated in this relationship. does he want to force Becker’s hand? Was/is he hoping that someone would put it together. But he’s leaving and if they do, Becker has to deal, alone. Now I wonder how the time apart will serve them. How much will Kevin change now that he’s not hiding and how Becker will deal with it all.
  5. Defiance19

    Stranger Things

    A most intriguing start. There’s just a little bit of everything, and I’m looking forward to hearing Sam’s story. Finn’s too for that matter. Great job, tim.
  6. Run, don’t walk.. Pass go, and all that other stuff. Craftingmom’s stories are not to be missed. This one in particular is a page turner.. well, you can’t swipe fast enough...
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    All Your Ducks

    You did more than tell a story here, tim. You embodied emotions. So much love, tinged with bit of sadness bled through your words. You stirred some memories for me too. It’s hard sometimes to remember that there is a life to be lived when you suffer through loss. I’m glad Derek chooses get on with his life and I’m sure his son is too. Wonderful..
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    ATGB III

    Ah, the joys of home ownership. As much as a headache it will be, I think this part of putting together a home is the fun part. Now I’ll wait to see all the crap upon crap they uncover as they renovate. Ritchie had me cracking up, and it was mice to see Harley... Nice chapter, C.
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    In Conference

    Loved that Andy got closure. That he didn’t have to deal with a confrontation and Ray got what was coming to him, made it all the more satisfying. I loved the scene where Ray decided to sign the papers. Where he was now the one afraid. Imagine that. Great job, Parker.
  10. Aw, Thank you, deville. I always appreciate your comments. Glad you liked it.
  11. You’re most welcome, dugh. Thank you for reading, it is much appreciated..
  12. Thank you so much, Caz!
  13. Lol. Thank you, Puppi.. I appreciate you reading this.
  14. Thank you, Northie.. I’m thrilled you like it.
  15. Thank you much, Gary. I tried something different, and I honestly wasn’t as confident about it. I am so happy that it worked... Thanks again.. 🤗
  16. Yay! because I know your work, I’m going to take that as a big compliment.. lol. Thank you so much.
  17. Thank you, renee. For something I was unsure about, I really appreciate the response.
  18. Thank you, A.. so glad you liked it!
  19. I’m glad now that I stuck with it. Thank you for reading, and your comments, jp.. xoxo Also Caz did a great job with her idiom, so thank goodness....if I got ‘Drinks like a Fish’ I don’t think there would have a story posted, on account of ongoing research.
  20. To think I almost didn’t post this. I really appreciate your comments. Thank you, Mac.
  21. I’m really glad you liked it. Cia was throwing ideas at me and narwhal stuck. Thank you for reading, and commenting. xo
  22. Thank you for all your help. I’m really glad you liked it when I was so unsure. xo
  23. Thank you so much, for giving it a read..
  24. Thank you, tim. This was so different and I was worried. I’m glad you liked it.
  25. Loved your take on the idiom, great story. Didn’t see the twist coming, and it was just super. Well done, Dolores.
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