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  1. Defiance19

    Chapter 16

    It’s a myth.. Advanced life forms would never have sent a memo like that to earthly people who abuse the dress code. 😏
  2. Defiance19

    Chapter 16

    You never disappoint, Geron! Reading this chapter right after the last was very satisfying. It’s a wonderful end to a fantastic not your kind of Zombie story. I loved how everything came together as it was being explained. I imagine Richie talking to his relatives in blue - “So, while you were sleeping...” If anything this story has solidified my case for a safe house or bunker. At the very least my go bag is ready. I think we as humans are way to arrogant in believing we are the only life form. They’re probably walking amongst us. 👽👀 Seriously though, thank you for a really great story.
  3. Thank you much, A.. Happy you liked it!! xo.
  4. Thank you, tim. But you know you’re partly to blame right? Write bravely you say, so when I get these weird ideas I just run with it and hope for the best. Lol. love you though xo
  5. It was almost over. Gunter wiped his stained fingers on the damp cloth, and moved from beside his now sleeping partner. “I’ll go now, before Jurgen wakes,” he said to his best friend and protector, Uwe. “Will you be okay?” “You always ask that. I know he is watching, and we have done exactly as he’s asked. Besides, there’s been no flicker in the barrier since.” I don’t trust Klaus. I know it’s my fault he found us in the first place, but…” “Don’t do that, Uwe. You have kept u
  6. Defiance19

    Chapter 12

    Great chapter! Hopefully, the trip to the library yielded a couple of books with great ideas.. so a table saw, a vacuum cleaner, and a dishwasher had a three way which resulted in a...what?
  7. Defiance19

    Chapter 11

    God i hope this plan works!! Off to the next!
  8. Happy Birthday, Steve. Hope your day was most wonderful!
  9. Loved this, tim. I enjoyed it from start, to wonderful twist finish.
  10. Defiance19

    Chapter 9

    Whew Ok. fire works, for now at least.. I am cautiously optimistic that the boys will figure out how to kill the zombies on the ground. Right now, I worry the beasts in the air.
  11. Defiance19

    Chapter 8

    Great chapter.. The boys are wise in continuing to be cautious, and wary of other humans. Simpler situations bring out the absolute worst in people so I can only imagine (if and when), who they’d encounter and how they’d attain trust.
  12. Yup, and sometimes it was the one I was sure I’d ace..
  13. Defiance19

    Chapter 7

    Like the last chapter, this one was most excellent.. vivid sense of abandonment and eerie-ness (made up word) tension so taut, you can feel every moment. I agree with @Mikiesboy too.. This chapter is deeply affecting in it’s continuing plot intrigue.. It’s a plane..it’s a....?? Great job...
  14. Defiance19

    Chapter 5

    Marnie is right, that could have gone wrong fast but... go Sherry!! That was the brave and right thing to do imo. now to outsmart and out-crazy this zombie!! Fantastic chapter!
  15. One of my best friends has admitted to those same fears. She cares for her mom who is at end stage Alzheimer’s disease and her dad who has vascular dementia. It’s an endless struggle, and the toll that it takes on the family, well.. you’ve expressed it perfectly here. I’m sorry you and you family are dealing with this. Hopefully all the funds raised from these ongoing events will go far enough to find a cure sooner than we expect. My best, dear molly. xo.
  16. I read this story before I joined, and then again soon after. Excellent! Great review Spikey!!
  17. timmy tim....❤️❤️❤️
  18. Defiance19

    Chapter 4

    So, a zombie with an actual thinking brain should be an oxymoron, but I love it! added to all the other strengths it has I say the playing field is a little more even.. Makes me want even more eager. Great chapter.
  19. Drewbear, just know that I am rooting for you enthusiastically... I am sure you’re doing fantastic and learning all sorts of amazing things. My brain scrambles on the logarithms and exponentials. 😬 seriously though, I hope you have a great year!!
  20. Defiance19

    Warming Up

    Enjoyed this. Very well done and yes, I agree, there is room for much more. Thanks in advance.
  21. Defiance19

    Chapter 1

    Lovely story. It really could have gone differently if not for the kindness of Edward. I want to believe that we just don’t hear about all the Edwards in the world, but they do exist. Well done...
  22. Defiance19

    Chapter 3

    It looks like Jack taught them well. The methodical and careful way they are is ingrained. That, along with your superb detail, had music akin to the Jaws theme song playing in my head. It set up the tension, and what do you know. Shots fired. A while day to get back to camp!!😖
  23. Defiance19

    Chapter 2

    With the full story, it’s not surprising that Richie had that nightmare. Great chapter.
  24. Excellent questions and answers, great authors, and another lovely feature.. Thanks for putting it together, Carlos.
  25. All I have is poor, poor Becker. It almost hurts to watch him struggle.. I wonder what his breaking point is.. the thing that will make him stop punishing himself.. This was another well written chapter.
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