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Yeah, I'm with LitLover, maybe an edit like the one with Jason and Lyle's sex scene? I'm a little disappointed, because he probably had a quick death, but that doctor's still out there somewhere, hopefully the police can 'forget' about him and leave him to Devyn Anyway, sorry I stopped reviewing, the only times I had time to read were when I was on my phone I've loved every chapter so far, though, and this one isn't an exception It's so awesome to see everything looking up for Devon! After everything he's been through, he deserves it, and reading this chapter gave me the warm-fuzzies . I'm still nervous, because the client who killed Brad is probably just as worried about Devyn, but hopefully the police realize that and protect him until they catch the killer (and hopefully give him a high-five before jailing him). I'm ashamed to admit that it took me forever to realize what the name meant, I think it was only a few chapters ago that I looked at the title of the story and facepalmed at how badly I missed it . Just mentioned it 'cause I wanted to say it's an awesome name for an awesome story Thanks for writing!

Aww, two stories ending so close to each other? Oh well, all good things must come to an end, it's better to have a nice end like this one's and Sparrow and Kier's Oh, I agreed with Caand at first, but now that I've thought about it, we all loved Hani five minutes after meeting him, there's no surprise Phelps did too . Thanks for writing such amazing stories!

Teddy's so funny he's the opposite of what's needed in every way, except in terms of companionship. "I'll get dirty" what kind of excuse is that in the middle of a rainforest? Somehow, his unpreparedness for everything makes him lovable instead of annoying, although I don't understand how you pull it off . Awesome chapter, I wonder if Wildman built the bridge or if it was someone else? He doesn't seem very innovative, so even though it seems like it was him I have doubts maybe they'll find more wild people out there

Dammit, I can't believe it's over! That 'The End' came out of nowhere (to me at least), although I have to admit it's an awesome place for an ending. I still wanna know about the house, though what did the pack think of it, how much time do Kier and Sparrow actually have there, etc I'll definitely be hoping for an epilogue . Anyway, thanks for such an amazing story, this'll be one I never forget

Loving the story, I hope Brad's party goes to shit Onto chapter 6!

Devyn's reaction to Jason is awesome almost as funny as it is sad. It's good I kept the pitchforks and torches handy, 'cause Brad's just begging for them to be used on him . Anyway, I'm too lazy to try to express my dislike of Brad (and pretty much everyone else in that house except Jason, Devyn, and possibly Michael) at the moment, and I'm dying to get onto the next chapter, so I guess I'll just leave it at 'amazing chapter'

So Brad's room has a door into Devyn's, and the only other room within hearing distance (of quiet things, not like Devyn can make much noise) is Sam's? After all the hints so far (including the two housekeepers' reluctance to talk about Brad and Devyn (the 'we both owe him our lives' thing makes it sound even worse - what are they trying to justify?), in this chapter), I really don't like how this looks Oh well, I guess it could be innocent, but I just don't like how everyone is acting . Loving the story, the only thing I'm not enjoying is how little time I have to read it XD Thanks for writing!

I don't know why they weren't taking him seriously as soon as he pulled them away, he obviously knew something they didn't. Hopefully that arrogance dies off before long, cause stink incarnate there will probably be more and more useful as they go on, and it'd suck if they died just because they thought they knew more than someone who survived the outside Awesome chapter, as usual

Uh oh, Devyn's showing real fear towards Brad that's not just 'he hit me once, what a bastard', that's something more . I don't like how Brad said the doctor is a close friend, either. He seems to use his 'close friends' to get immoral things done (etc keeping his step-brother locked in his room), and after what he's shown so far I've got suspicions about Devyn's 'tonsillitis and pharyngitis' . Devyn tells people he's being abused, and then suddenly becomes mute? How convenient for Brad -.- Besides, I don't know much about tonsillitis or pharyngitis, but if Devyn got stuck with Brad when he was 12, and he's sixteen now, and the diseases were three years ago, then a year after being thoroughly checked out by the hospital (I'm assuming they would have, after him being in a car crash) he suddenly has a bunch of diseases in advantages stages? Likely. -.- Maybe I'm just overreacting because I don't like Brad already, but he seemed a little too sincere about Devyn's last 'care-taker' getting in an accident right after he let Devyn escape. Brad seems like the type of person who'd see that as a betrayal, and I doubt he'd just let it go. The whole "I felt so bad, like it was my fault" thing just reeks of bullshit. It sounds like a play for sympathy to direct Jason's attention towards how good of a person Brad is and away from the accident itself, as if Brad doesn't want Jason thinking about it too hard. My guess is that Kieran (I found it amusing that his name is Kieran and he rode a motorbike, after 'Redemption's a Bitch' ) found out more than Brad wanted him to, tried to help Devyn escape, and got caught. If he was who Brad chose to take care of Devyn, you'd think Brad would have picked someone who wouldn't show too much sympathy, so his 'he was trying to be a friend instead of a care-taker' thing seems unlikely. I'm probably reading way too much into nothing, but then again, that asshole watched his bodyguard hit his brother and then blamed it on Devyn -.- I'll give Brad the benefit of the doubt, but I'll keep the torches burning and the pitchforks sharp anyway Anyway, rant over, I absolutely love the story! It's definitely engaging, as you can probably tell after my giant anti-Brad rant Oh, just two afterthoughts: is Kieran being taken care of by Brad's doctor? That seems like a good way for Brad to make sure he doesn't talk to the wrong people if/when he wakes up. And also, no matter how Brad turns out, Sam's an asshole and I'm looking forward to any and all bad things that happen to him

Oh, fogot Pompeii, don't know how I managed that

I read about two lines before I got a text and had to look away, and I was honestly hooked just from that . Awesome intro, I like Devyn already! I absolutely love his name, by the way It's one of my favorite names, but it's the first time I've seen it spelled like that it looks good, I like it Anyway, the story's interesting already, can't wait to start chapter 2!

Love it! Is it in the same world as any of your other stories? Reading more about James and Peter would be awesome, but the world itself is almost as fascinating already

Haha Lou finally caught on, yay! "white haired devil" is right he's cute even when he's seducing Lou XD Wow, rereading these has made me fall in love with the story all over again, without ever having fallen out of it I'm gonna force myself to wait to reread the other chapters, so I can actually review when I do

Aww, Snow's reaction to Lou letting him stay is so sad I forgot about that, and reading it again is a lot more potent it's good he's living with Lou now, though, and he'd be really good at working at the diner, if they made him a cook

Reading this again is so nostalgic I forgot how entrancing the beginning was, and Snow's so cute! Anyway, poor Lou, he's so thrown off random dancing hot (cold? ) guy in his kitchen, and said hottie sees right through him . Onto the next chapter all over again!

Not hard to see why, although it is a happy message Never actually seen the music video for this, although it's my favorite song, but if I actually listen to the lyrics when I'm being particularly pathetic it can bring me to happy tears

Nice chapter from how Justin didn't even need to go into his house to know something was wrong, I'm assuming the house has been burnt down or something you'd think Justin's cell would have been called a few times, though, so maybe I'm wrong hopefully his parents are OK, at least

Haha seeing all the familiar names was a surprise, but my favorite part was Cia giving Justin a PB&J sandwich that doesn't seem like very werewolf-ish food Anyway, I liked the chapter, although I'm really late reading it I don't seem to get notifications for this and Sasha Distan's stories, all the other ones are fine I'm lucky I saw ch6 in the new stories feed onto that now! Thanks for writing!

Hey wizard, nice to see you on GA hope you like it!

Thanks glad you enjoyed it!

Wow, for an expensive ship security sure seems lax I guess Hani must have blended in with the other cat-person when he was walking on, but it still seems lucky Anyway, it's awesome that he's going to find Phelps! Hopefully he wont get any trouble from the authorities, but if they didn't investigate every freeloader on every ship that he could viable have escaped onto then they probably aren't looking that hard. They've probably/hopefully cut their losses . If no other troubles show up (unlikely, for such a unique and naive guy XD), then the only other worry for him is Phelps himself he seemed like a pretty dutiful guy, hopefully he won't turn Hani in!

Yep, but answers (along with more questions, of course XD) are coming soon! Thanks for reviewing

Flames; flickering, crackling flames, were consuming the house, crawling up the walls to lick at the ceilings. My imagination filled in what my eyes couldn’t, and I ran to the bathroom door, pounding at it frantically as the fire alarms blared. “Nate! Nate! The house is fucking burning!” “What!?” I heard, muffled by the door, and the water stopped. “Stay away from the windows! Don’t go outside, I’ll be right there!” The door flew open, but nobody was there. “Nate?” I asked, panicking all ove

didn't read through the whole thread (too lazy at the moment XD) but I don't think this was said yet: Hell no. Guys are hot it's not a deeply meaningful reason, but it's still valid there's no way I'd wanna give up liking guys XD that's half the world's worth of eye candy, why deliberately lose it?

Happy birthday! Have an awesome one!