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Outstanding chapter! This story has tremendous potential from the perspectives of education vs. trade school/internship, and working hard to achieve your goals and dreams. Jim is resourceful, analytical and creative. These are the skills that most successful entrepreneurs possess. There will be many pitfalls along the way, but with his dedication he should hopefully succeed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter and finale! Roger is a dynamo in bed apparently. The two boys are experiencing teenage hormonal lust. True love takes time to develop and rarely makes it through high school. I’m happy that they are moving forward with their relationship, hopefully it will be as they envision. Great short story! Great characters! I’m definitely looking forward to the next story! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Dawson’s birthday party was a success for Josh after being teased about his accent and him teasing the locals about theirs. 15 boys wanted to learn to play rugby. He is lucky that those boys all go to the school so he knew kids when he started. The new rugby team at the school got to play. The roughness and win at all costs mentality usually leads to them being bounced off their team for their lack of sportsmanship. Josh and Peter told each other about their new relationships. I am fairly certain that Roger is gay but not sure. Since they are having a sleep over the question may be answered. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! This story is off to a good start, a Gay male married couple and their gay teenage son moving to the United States where LGBTQ+ marriage is still relatively new? What could possibly go wrong? The family next door seems accepting, and their son Dawson seems to be friendly and interested in learning about Rugby. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Poignant ending to an inspiring story! The world could use more Jeff’s who are willing to step up and help when they are needed. Too many times people are so wrapped up in their own lives that they cannot see what is going on around them. We are so focused on our phones we are blind to those people around us who are in need. How many Toby’s are lost each day because we are so wrapped up in our own lives? You do not have to be rich to help someone else who really needs it. Thank you for a wonderful story and amazing characters. I look forward to your next story! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! All 4 boys graduated University and got married. Unexpected deaths in Venice led to adoption of the children by Toby and Ron with help from Jeff. Richard is missing, and Toby’s father died while his mother yelled at him when he arrived to check on him.some people should never have children since they are incapable of putting aside their own wants to care for a child. The most touching moment in this chapter was after Jeff gave instructions on how to take care of his burial next to Clair in Italy, Toby’s response was “Yes, Dad we will do as you have requested.” Toby’s finally acknowledging that Jeff has always been his father. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Outstanding chapter! It was very nice to have the Italian extended family visiting for the holidays. Career planning and University applications are the order of the day, within financial concerns being a factor for Ron and Roberto. Jeff using the foundation he set up to honor Clair to offer scholarships should solve their problems. This chapter was very emotional and the rescue of Toby continues to make Toby, Ron and Jeff wonder what force motivated Jeff to take his walk earlier than normal. I sincerely believe that Clair knew how Jeff was shutting down and she saw a solution and pushed him forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Wow! What an amazing trip. The reunion between Jeff and his friends made with Clair from their previous trips. Being able to travel and tour locations with locals is infinitely better than the monotone facts given by underpaid tour guides. You will always get more details and explanations that tour companies do not have time to provide. They are on tight schedules with little time spent per location with large groups where you are unable to even hear what they are saying. When traveling you always want to have a private non structured guide who is local and knowledgeable about the local history and local sights. American tourists are generally disappointed with pizzas in Italy because they are so different from what pizza is in the U.S. The friendship between all four boys will expand understanding on both continents. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! A lot of firsts for the boys, flight, customs, jet lag and Rome, Italy are but a few. This Italian trip will open doors for learning that they could not imagine or believe. They are getting to know another culture, entirely different customs and being introduced to a lifestyle that most people are unaware of. To be able to experience antiquity in person enables a perception and understanding that you cannot get from a book or photographs. Toby and Ron are receiving the keys to a better understanding of the world and how they fit into it. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The first time Hunter made love to Jaime was so touching and emotionally fulfilling. The first meeting between the two mother’s was confrontational, with Maria making it very clear that she won’t allow any further abuse of Hunter, that she will bring in C.P.S. to sort out the mistreatment of her only son, and then she will systematically ruin their social lives and ruin their business. This is not the kind of woman you want to piss off, she will make destroying them her one and only mission. Hunter is so overwhelmed by the unconditional love being shown to him, he cannot understand why they treat him as they do since he has never experienced any type of loving before. I am really looking forward to the next meeting of the mothers. I think it is going to be epic. The way that you express the emotions of your characters leaves us wiping our eyes, blowing our noses and cheering the happiness you so eloquently write for us. Thank you for all of the hard work that you and your team put into these stories. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Dion and Trey learned that holding TJ is easier than they thought. Josh’s trip to the farms with the younger boys was something that they will never forget, they had fun and learned a great many things that most urban residents never experience. It was nice to see that the farm’s are still doing well and the children are still very involved in how the farm’s operate. I recall now that Richard came through the farm. I am glad that you took us down memory lane. I cannot remember which book this was in. I believe that Dion and Trey will definitely be holding TJ from now on. The refurbished tree house and expanded deck seems to be the only place that the younger boys spend their time, at least until winter sets in. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Kastan is totally in love with Jihan and has told him so. Jihan is totally in love with Kastan but is afraid that he’s not capable of running the manor, the village, the valley and his own businesses. He is also doubting the relationship with Rashan, who he loves completely, the relationship with the villagers and the people of the valley who have been overtly hostile to him. The Wedding Dance is worrying for him since he knows that they dislike him. Thankfully Rashan smoothed over his mistreatment of Jihan by calling him Papa for the first time melting Jihan’s fears about their relationship. I believe that the Wedding Dance will solidify his position as Imperial Consort and Duke of Silvershore Valley in the eyes of the valley’s residents once the Generals swear their fealty and Imperial Prince Kastan presents the golden family seal empowering Jihan with his trust and authority. Once the ceremony is completed Jihan will have his full Imperial powers as Duke.Temu has discovered just how intelligent, resourceful and cunning Prince Jihan is and will be making the others understand just how valuable he is to the entire empire. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ p.s. : I really hope that your personal struggles can be brought under control quickly and painlessly. I also hope that you are staying safe and healthy during these incredibly difficult circumstances. I truly value your stories and characters and the complexity of your creative genius. Please always know that we your loyal readers love and value you. You offer each of us the opportunity to live in your worlds, even if only for short periods. These amazing stories are an escape from a world gone mad. Thank you so very much! 👏❤️

Excellent chapter! Teens working in the garden voluntarily is extremely rare, getting them to audit college classes during summer break is even more so. The relationship between the boys, Jeff and Ron’s family could not be better. The trip to Italy is coming up next and might be a little difficult for Jeff since they are following the itinerary and staying in the same hotel. I’m certain that both Toby and Ron will provide the emotional compassion and support needed. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! It is amazing how quickly Jeff, Toby and Ron have become a loving family. The 17th birthday party and trip to the lake that was Clair and Jeff’s favorite in Italy is a gift that will leave an indelible mark on all of their hearts. Jeff is one in a million! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Ron was pretty direct with his questions and with his romantic feelings, Toby realizes how closely he came and how incredibly lucky he is to have Jeff and Ron in his life. I am sure that Jeff is aware of how important Ron is to Toby and his recovery from his traumatic experiences. It is amazing that a teenager would have the moral fortitude to decide not to resort to selling himself to survive. He is also fortunate that he did not have to make the decision about suicide since Jeff arrived at the right time. The new character who just moved in I suspect that the firm is probably associated with investments and is in need of qualified candidates. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Outstanding chapter! Toby and Jeff are now legally related. Toby’s parents objected to the support payments but the judge ruled against them. It is unfortunate that this remarkable young man has such worthless parents. Religion and dogma are responsible for persecution And intolerance world wide. How can you justify throwing away your children in the name of religion, when the religion itself teaches tolerance and compassion. I’ll never understand how much damage belief has created and caused over the centuries. A very small group of people discovered the power of control they could wield by purporting to speak for their deity. There’s no excuse to do what his parents did and some day they will face the judgement of their lives and they will discover that they were wrong. Sorry, I will climb down from my soapbox now🤭. I sincerely hope that this story will continue with Toby, Ron ad Jeff as they live their lives. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! A very solid relationship between Jeff and Toby is growing based on compassion, love, respect, and support. Jeff is showing Toby that he is welcome and wanted irrespective of his sexual identity. Toby is soaking up the love like a sponge and realizes that he is very lucky to have met Jeff. Toby’s lawyer and police successfully retrieved his posessions even though his Mom tried to deceive them until they met Ron his best friend told them where to find his bike. Once served with the guardianship papers, both mom and dad are not happy that they will be responsible for paying child support until Toby turns 18. Toby informs James and Jeff that he and Ron are boyfriends. I’m certain that the parents will object to their financial obligations at the hearing. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! I’m really enjoying this story, you have taken a mournful widower and a teenage boy at a crucial point and brought them together to bring fulfillment and joy back into their lives. Not very many people in our current society would have even noticed that Toby was in desperate need, since everyone spends so much time looking at their phones while wearing ear buds closing out what is happening right in front of them. Add in the I am sure that some one else will help, I don’t want to be involved mentality and he probably would have frozen to death. I am certain that Clair gave Jeff the needed encouragement to take his walk. Now that Toby has a lawyer, things should move forward quickly to settle guardianship, school and the retrieval of his personal possessions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The idea of suicide being the easy way out is ludicrous. When an individual is driven to the point of suicide they can not see any other option. Generally speaking the individual is without hope, has no one else in their life and are desperate and emotionally broken. In most cases suicide is an extraordinary solution to what is generally a temporary problem. Every suicide is tragic and preventable. In our current society we’ve lost the emotional support given by extended family members, we are all in such a hurry to accomplish what seems important at the time, but leaves family and friends as a very low priority. We can solve these problems with a step back to a much more connected relationship with the family and friends. We are supposed to work to support our life, now we live to work letting ambition and financial gain drive us. I am really glad that Toby was rescued by an “angel” and will have a chance to live his life with love, respect and support. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Outstanding chapter! What a dichotomy of parenting you have created for your characters to deal with. One uncaring, hateful and angry; while the other is loving,caring and supportive. Hunter’s mother and father are narcissistic and should have divorced after he was born and placed for adoption. To blame your child for mistakes you’ve made is truly unforgivable. Jaime’s parents have picked up that Hunter’s family life is horrible and Mrs. Vega is going to tear his mother a new one. I love how quickly and deeply Hunter and Jaime have fallen in love. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I really enjoyed Josh and Jake’s tour around Atlanta with Nick and Shannon, It reminded me of a trip I took and enjoyed very much visiting most of the locations they did, Stone Mountain has a very large Scottish Festival over a 3 day period. If you are ever in Atlanta in the fall the Historic Square offers a ghost story tellers event with the top storyteller’s in the nation telling some amazing stories in and around the Historic homes. It was wonderful. I am glad that Nick and Shannon will be home for Thanksgiving. Thank you Bill for continuing to tell this amazing story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! It’s very nice to see that Shannon and Nick are doing well with a promotion for Nick and becoming a CPA for Shannon their lives are definitely getting better. Josh and Jake seem to be enjoying the day trips around Atlanta, which is a very beautiful city with many amazing sites and museums to visit. I enjoyed many locations that haven’t been mentioned, so I will keep them safely under my hat until after part two of the trip. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! If this is what group therapy is like, sign me up!! This rather unique family is complete now that Sadie is moving to the area. Lindsey and Sadie seem to be hitting it off and could very well become great friends. Adam introduced Mason as his boyfriend which was a huge step forward for him. Sadie’s small town upbringing is about to go through a major culture shock, but it appears that she’s ready to accept that life with family around is better than living alone. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m so happy that you have started the next Barnstable story. Hunter’s story is starting out with rural ranch living, a dysfunctional family, a new best friend who has a family with tragedy and losses. The sexual innuendos are running rampant. The profanity is a little over the top but I am really enjoying the story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m glad that Dion and Trey are making an effort to give TJ the love and support that he needs. They are still extremely cautious about handling and ultimately holding their new son. The studies clearly show that physical contact skin to skin has an emotional link in new parents and their child. I am certain that Josh and Danny will give them both the tips and proper instructions on how to emotionally bond with TJ while maintaining his safety since he is so tiny. Thankfully he is gaining weight and the NICU nurses are encouraging and supportive. Joshie is entering the teenage rebellion stage and it will be a very trying time for all of the family members. The older teens like Ryan, Elliott, Ian and Owen can be a resource for the younger teens who are feeling stifled by the rules. I love how patient Trey has been while enforcing the rules while explaining how they are for their benefit and future experiences. Definitely looking forward to hearing about the visit with Shannon and Nick. I’m also glad that Jeff is being invited to family events since he and Kevin have been together for a long while. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️