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    Chapter 61

    Outstanding chapter! The new website is a little bit surprising since the King, Queen and press secretary never mentioned it. A website was inevitable due to the overwhelming press and public interest. The bonds developed during the honeymoon have brought them all closer and a feeling of family is growing stronger everyday. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Control

    Excellent chapter! Artie finally got to see Ezra’s true intentions. After the team lost their final game Ezra just couldn’t prevent his true self from appearing at their lunch after the game. His overwhelming belief in his superiority as well as his condescending attitude about Artie’s lack of a strong father figure being necessary for success in life gave Artie a very powerful look into the nature of their relationship. Good riddance to bad garbage. Adam, Mason and Dizzy remained supportive and caring during the very trying weekend. Lots of hurt feelings, however they came through as the family they knew they were. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 60

    Excellent chapter! The adventure of their honeymoon is soon coming to an end. Yuri and Boris will be joining them again for the trip back to Italy. It’s going to be very emotional for everyone as the honeymoon comes to it’s conclusion. I will be very sad to see this story come to an end. I do realize that you’re planning to continue the story, however each ending is sad while we wait for the next story to begin. I have loved each and every story you’ve written. I love how your characters all value relationships over “hooking up.” My husband and I are celebrating 30 years together this November. Sharing your life with someone who cares for you is priceless. Thank you for all of your wonderful work! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 59

    Outstanding chapter! The tours through Malta are giving the security team the opportunity to be friendlier with the Prince’s than would normally be tolerated. Yuri may be a bit annoyed that Eric and Peter aren’t following the strict protocols. I’m glad that Eric was able to speak with the archeology student while touring the ancient site. Peter was a bit impatient with how long the discussion lasted bu tolerated pretty well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 5

    Outstanding chapter! Jihan was instrumental in preventing the massacre of Kastan’s armies, as well as uncovering who is behind the treasonous members of the Royal court. The explanation behind the magical connection between the ruling family was fascinating. Kiyan is aware that his wife is behind the attack on Kastan and his armies. Kastan is starting to reveal how much he cares for Jihan. Jihan is aware that he’s under the protective care of Kastan, but won’t admit his feelings. The treachery in the court is the main reason that Jihan didn’t want to be the supplier to the armies during war time. I really hope that these two very powerful people will realize their feelings and enjoy the experiences. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  6. Outstanding chapter! Donald and Connor spent the weekend becoming more comfortable with one another. I’m very happy for them both and hope that they will live happily ever after! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    WTF?

    Excellent chapter! Donald has taken the first step toward finally admitting that his over the top hatred of gays was his own fears of discovery and the hatred his father showed constantly. The most vehement homophobes are generally closeted gays unable or unwilling to admit to themselves who they are. Hopefully this relationship with Connor will help him to accept who he is and allow him to be truly happy for the first time in his life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  8. Outstanding chapter! I totally love Nate, he’s become such an amazing person and he is always correct when he’s giving Eddie or Matty his view on how they can solve whatever problems they are facing at that moment. I’d like to see more about Nate and Simon. Connor seems to be a good candidate for Eddie to have a great new friend. Who knew that Donald knew ASL. There’s an attraction between Donald and Connor. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 58

    Excellent chapter! Eric has befriended the Captain now, he’s from Malta and became the tour guide. He showed them his family’s home and took them to an ancient church from before christianity. They’re enjoying the tour so far. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Chapter 57

    Outstanding chapter! Eric continues to doubt his worth to the Royal Family and the decisions that he’s been making. Peter sets him straight about his worth and value to all of Makarovia. Henri was impressed with how much in love the guys are. They’ve arrived in Malta and they are going to visit the archeological sites in disguise. What could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 56

    Excellent chapter! I’m really enjoying the rapport between Eric, Peter and all of the people on board the Duchess. They’ve added more pieces to their own family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 55

    Outstanding chapter! I really hate people who abuse children. I hope that they are roasting in hell! Alec was victimized, overcame the trauma and shame associated, and became a successful guard in Makarovia. Now he and the Prince’s have become friends and I believe that his life will take a turn for the better. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 54

    Outstanding chapter! The crew and security personnel are cooperating with Eric’s request for having a deck party and cookout. Alec is being stubborn, but Eric will get him to relax sooner rather than later. He won’t push for every detail. Abuse can take many forms. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 53

    Excellent chapter! Eric, Peter, Pano, Barry and Edger became very close friends over their stay in Athens. Now they’ve sailed away on board the Duchess heading to Antikythera. These last two chapters have been very entertaining and fun. I know that you are telling these stories for your own sanity’s sake, but we all enjoy sharing the wonderful imagination you bring to these stories and characters. Thank you for all of the hard work that you put into each chapter. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 52

    Outstanding chapter! Eric and Peter spending time with the security team in a less formal setting has lead to the security personnel getting to leave the yacht and spend time sightseeing and shopping for their families and friends. The prince’s are still planning to return to Big, which turns out to be a private club, they’ve passed the ouzo test and are now members themselves. I think that when the honeymoon finally concludes, the staff on the yacht will miss them since they treat them all as friends rather than as servants. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 51

    Excellent chapter! Big was such a treat for the guys and their security team. The owners and regular patrons were very kind and treated them both like regular guys. The bar posted very large patrons to prevent paparazzi outside. The police prevented them from following by requiring documents that they’re required to carry. I’d like to visit such an amazing place, unfortunately I am very short, so would stand out like a beacon. I’m very sorry to hear about the sweet tea disaster with your Mac. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  17. Outstanding chapter! Very different days for the guys. Jealousy isn’t the best emotion for Eddie to be experiencing this early into their separation. Matty’s bewildered by this reaction. I’m concerned that Eddie’s jealousy may cause unfortunate problems later. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😃❤️ I would absolutely love another Barnstable novel. I miss those amazing characters!
  18. Excellent chapter! The overheard arguments from the soldiers is very concerning. Jake and Alex start to sneak away when Preston asks where their going and if he can come with them. They’re enjoying their first sexual experiences when their rudely interrupted by Preston. They are all screaming at the shock, hopefully the soldiers won’t overhear and come rushing in. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 4

    Excellent chapter! Jihan’s faith in Firuz and Lord Silver rescuing him from the trap he willingly walked into worked out, barely. Duke Silver’s comment about Firuz turning Jihan over his knee, is fitting and hinted at his genuine concern for him. The eagle that landed on Jihan’s arm must have a very interesting story that I hope you will share in future chapters. Andiya has departed from the Kamran estate. The ghost warriors at the inn has a tale all it’s own. I’m trying not to figure out how we get to the Duke’s army’s holding Jihan for execution. I am aware that you’re enjoying having everyone guessing, and that you started this story in this way to throw us off balance. You’ve succeeded. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  20. Excellent chapter! Matty’s debut as a back up quarterback went amazingly well. His first autograph goes to a bullied teen who is inspired by he and Eddie. Nate has matured so much. The separation becomes more lengthy and more difficult. Lots of temptations. Are they strong enough to resist? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Changing Lives

    .Outstanding chapter! Eddie has the empathy necessary to be able to help youth and the compassion needed to guide them into discovering their inner strength to discover their own path to confidence and happiness. The fact that he got an assist from Matty was just icing on the cake. The death of Donald’s mother is sad and adds a new wrinkle to their relationship. Being apart for their college careers will bring new and complicated issues to bear on their relationship. We’ll definitely have to hope that they will get through their trials without destroying their very special relationship. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 50

    Outstanding chapter! The relationship between Henri and the Prince’s seems to be strengthening, they love the genuine joy and dedication to excellence that Henri places on each and every meal that he prepares. Henri admires and appreciates the laidback non pretentious people the Prince’s are and the absolute joy they receive from eating the meals that he prepares. Athens gives the honeymooners ancient sites to see, a delightful lunch with Capriano the waiter who aids them in escaping the paparazzi with the help of the police. The dance club Big and it’s really big bear of an owner sounds like fun. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  23. flesco

    Chapter 1

    Outstanding story! This was a truly enjoyable short story with dynamic characters and lots of emotional moments. You are always so talented at having us feel and experience every nuance of the characters emotions and the dramatic moments of their lives. Thank you for another wonderful story. 😡❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Outstanding chapter! Kastan and Jihan have met for the second time and Kastan announced that he owed Jihan a favor for saving his son’s life. He also invited Jihan to come meet Rashan at their home. Hopefully the next meeting between them won’t end at the point of a sword. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 2

    Outstanding chapter! Jihan has saved Rashan from injury or even death which should help him survive the encounter with Kastan in the future. I’m enjoying the foundations of the story and the characters you are laying out, albeit painfully slowly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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