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  1. flesco

    Chapter 10

    Excellent chapter! After two very successful years it is time to expand the buildings to hold the new delivery van and have expanded storage and the ability of having additional rooms on the second floor. It was terrific to have Paul come back for New Years, he is doing very well in college and he encouraged the boys to complete their GED’s and continue with college. They needed another worker and recruited Jake from the streets. He seems to be learning fast and is fitting into the team nicely. I really am enjoying this story and hope that you will give a bit more on the main characters life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Outstanding chapter! Another great year for the food truck and food truck catering! The 10% ownership that Jim gave to Donnie and Denny is well deserved for their exceptional work ethic and loyalty in making the business successful. The new partners designed the new logo that will adorn the vehicles and menus going forward. Having to add a delivery van for the catering arm of the business just goes to show that business is booming. Having to add additional staff and cleaning personnel is another factor in an ever growing business. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 8

    Excellent chapter! The baker going into direct competition with the food truck only cost him Steady business. Paul going away to college near his mother was terrific since it allowed Andre to start working on the food truck and living with the boys during the week. The baker did not have any effect on Jim’s sales even with the baker competing against them. The business model and hard work has made the business successful and profitable. I see unlimited potential for their business going forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 7

    Outstanding chapter! The holiday dinners have been successful, the regular menus keeps being added to and rotated to maintain interest and keep customers coming back for more. The fact that Jim runs the food truck the way he does has earned the respect and loyalty of the boys who treat the business like it is their own. This builds a very strong bond that keeps everyone interested and offering suggestions on how to improve, offer variety and make sure that the business is successful. Jim and family already treat the boys as family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 17

    Outstanding chapter! The marriage dance ceremony ordeal for Jihan has ended with the knowledge that the Council of generals and the army have sworn fealty along with their families and the people of the valley. The ceremony was enjoyed by all with the retired emperor conducting. Nisa, Ferino and the Empress are going to be a problem when Jihan and Rashan go to Vasia. Fortunately Kastan has ordered his Generals to protect his family from harm and Neith has warned Firuz to be extremely vigilant. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  6. Excellent chapter! TJ is comfortable with Josh, as if there was any doubt. He’s had unlimited experiences with babies, toddlers, preteens and teens throughout his life. He held his own children when they were babies, his grandchildren when they were babies and countless children during his career, and through his adoptions. He has an innate ability to connect with children. Danny, Brandon, Dion and Trey are all set for their couples retreat over the Labor Day holiday weekend. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  7. Outstanding chapter! Nearly every member came for Josh’s 69th birthday celebration. There are so many people who we don’t get to hear about much. Everyone enjoyed their visit and had a great time. Life in this family is nonstop and there’s always something going on. I am looking forward to the resolution of the possible abuse suffered by one of Graham’s students. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  8. Excellent chapter! Danny returning to his regular schedule is going to be well received by all of the family, especially Brandon. TJ’s addiction is not as extensive as originally thought and will be welcomed home sooner. I’m really happy that Xander’s condition is improving with his medication. School clothes shopping went well with Xander being amazed at how different their stores and quality were compared with his foster families. School is about to start and things are going well with several birthdays coming and the young boys opting for a Star Wars themed sleepover and Tristan choosing a bowling theme. I believe that the family is going to be very busy. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 6

    Excellent chapter! I am really enjoying this story, the characters have depth and are believable in how and what they say. The new dinner meals have been well received and most restaurants are utilizing to go packaging which is microwave friendly and are available in recyclable materials since the pandemic has struck. I see a definite increase in volume of business with the dinner options. It is definitely going to require an increase in staff and shift managers to keep their quality up. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 5

    Outstanding chapter! The school has become a valued customer opportunity, between the staff and possibly some of their students could create a steady income stream. Denny moving in with Donnie leaves a room for Paul to use, thee three boys are getting along incredibly well. Fixing up the conference room for the boys to use for their education is brilliant as they can help each other. The incredible rise in business doesn’t seem to be a significant problem yet. I know that many cities now offer food truck access to their parks with picnic tables and other infrastructure to allow people to enjoy the culinary experiences available to them. Some offer covered eating areas with restrooms allowing people to spend time while eating with live entertainment available. If Jim decides to visit these types of locations then he will need additional vehicles and staff. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 4

    Excellent chapter! The garage is complete with storage and apartment spaces with bathroom. The business is successful and Jim is adding a third worker. All three boys are well motivated and eager to succeed. I believe that they will all excel and make the business even more profitable so that Jim can expand further. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Outstanding chapter! Donnie is a “diamond in the rough” and will excel in a supportive and caring environment. He is completely dedicated to the food truck and is going to surprise everyone with how he adds his ideas about food offerings and specials. Jim is a type A person but has humility and compassion for others which is are traits normally lacking in driven people who are only interested in succeeding. If more type A personality people had compassion and empathy our world would be a very much better place to live. Imagine a world where CEO’s, Actor’s and Sports stars were paid a salary which while higher than the regular staff, would allow a much more even distribution of salaries. I know it’s a fantasy, but imagine how much better the world would be. I know that the food truck will be wildly successful and that Jim will recruit more staff from disadvantaged teens. I would love to know if bit more of Donnie’s story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 2

    Excellent chapter! The planning by Jim’s parents for college has enabled them to purchase the truck he wants and needs. Most parents would become angry and deny the funds to spend as they see fit. The fact that Jim worked four weeks to help train his replacement speaks volumes about his character, add in feeding Donnie dinner and giving him lunch to carry away shows his empathy, compassion and nurturing side also. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 1

    Outstanding chapter! This story has tremendous potential from the perspectives of education vs. trade school/internship, and working hard to achieve your goals and dreams. Jim is resourceful, analytical and creative. These are the skills that most successful entrepreneurs possess. There will be many pitfalls along the way, but with his dedication he should hopefully succeed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Excellent chapter and finale! Roger is a dynamo in bed apparently. The two boys are experiencing teenage hormonal lust. True love takes time to develop and rarely makes it through high school. I’m happy that they are moving forward with their relationship, hopefully it will be as they envision. Great short story! Great characters! I’m definitely looking forward to the next story! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 2

    Outstanding chapter! Dawson’s birthday party was a success for Josh after being teased about his accent and him teasing the locals about theirs. 15 boys wanted to learn to play rugby. He is lucky that those boys all go to the school so he knew kids when he started. The new rugby team at the school got to play. The roughness and win at all costs mentality usually leads to them being bounced off their team for their lack of sportsmanship. Josh and Peter told each other about their new relationships. I am fairly certain that Roger is gay but not sure. Since they are having a sleep over the question may be answered. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 1

    Excellent chapter! This story is off to a good start, a Gay male married couple and their gay teenage son moving to the United States where LGBTQ+ marriage is still relatively new? What could possibly go wrong? The family next door seems accepting, and their son Dawson seems to be friendly and interested in learning about Rugby. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 12

    Poignant ending to an inspiring story! The world could use more Jeff’s who are willing to step up and help when they are needed. Too many times people are so wrapped up in their own lives that they cannot see what is going on around them. We are so focused on our phones we are blind to those people around us who are in need. How many Toby’s are lost each day because we are so wrapped up in our own lives? You do not have to be rich to help someone else who really needs it. Thank you for a wonderful story and amazing characters. I look forward to your next story! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 11

    Excellent chapter! All 4 boys graduated University and got married. Unexpected deaths in Venice led to adoption of the children by Toby and Ron with help from Jeff. Richard is missing, and Toby’s father died while his mother yelled at him when he arrived to check on him.some people should never have children since they are incapable of putting aside their own wants to care for a child. The most touching moment in this chapter was after Jeff gave instructions on how to take care of his burial next to Clair in Italy, Toby’s response was “Yes, Dad we will do as you have requested.” Toby’s finally acknowledging that Jeff has always been his father. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 10

    Outstanding chapter! It was very nice to have the Italian extended family visiting for the holidays. Career planning and University applications are the order of the day, within financial concerns being a factor for Ron and Roberto. Jeff using the foundation he set up to honor Clair to offer scholarships should solve their problems. This chapter was very emotional and the rescue of Toby continues to make Toby, Ron and Jeff wonder what force motivated Jeff to take his walk earlier than normal. I sincerely believe that Clair knew how Jeff was shutting down and she saw a solution and pushed him forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter! Wow! What an amazing trip. The reunion between Jeff and his friends made with Clair from their previous trips. Being able to travel and tour locations with locals is infinitely better than the monotone facts given by underpaid tour guides. You will always get more details and explanations that tour companies do not have time to provide. They are on tight schedules with little time spent per location with large groups where you are unable to even hear what they are saying. When traveling you always want to have a private non structured guide who is local and knowledgeable about the local history and local sights. American tourists are generally disappointed with pizzas in Italy because they are so different from what pizza is in the U.S. The friendship between all four boys will expand understanding on both continents. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 8

    Outstanding chapter! A lot of firsts for the boys, flight, customs, jet lag and Rome, Italy are but a few. This Italian trip will open doors for learning that they could not imagine or believe. They are getting to know another culture, entirely different customs and being introduced to a lifestyle that most people are unaware of. To be able to experience antiquity in person enables a perception and understanding that you cannot get from a book or photographs. Toby and Ron are receiving the keys to a better understanding of the world and how they fit into it. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Family Love

    Excellent chapter! The first time Hunter made love to Jaime was so touching and emotionally fulfilling. The first meeting between the two mother’s was confrontational, with Maria making it very clear that she won’t allow any further abuse of Hunter, that she will bring in C.P.S. to sort out the mistreatment of her only son, and then she will systematically ruin their social lives and ruin their business. This is not the kind of woman you want to piss off, she will make destroying them her one and only mission. Hunter is so overwhelmed by the unconditional love being shown to him, he cannot understand why they treat him as they do since he has never experienced any type of loving before. I am really looking forward to the next meeting of the mothers. I think it is going to be epic. The way that you express the emotions of your characters leaves us wiping our eyes, blowing our noses and cheering the happiness you so eloquently write for us. Thank you for all of the hard work that you and your team put into these stories. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  24. Outstanding chapter! Dion and Trey learned that holding TJ is easier than they thought. Josh’s trip to the farms with the younger boys was something that they will never forget, they had fun and learned a great many things that most urban residents never experience. It was nice to see that the farm’s are still doing well and the children are still very involved in how the farm’s operate. I recall now that Richard came through the farm. I am glad that you took us down memory lane. I cannot remember which book this was in. I believe that Dion and Trey will definitely be holding TJ from now on. The refurbished tree house and expanded deck seems to be the only place that the younger boys spend their time, at least until winter sets in. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 16

    Excellent chapter! Kastan is totally in love with Jihan and has told him so. Jihan is totally in love with Kastan but is afraid that he’s not capable of running the manor, the village, the valley and his own businesses. He is also doubting the relationship with Rashan, who he loves completely, the relationship with the villagers and the people of the valley who have been overtly hostile to him. The Wedding Dance is worrying for him since he knows that they dislike him. Thankfully Rashan smoothed over his mistreatment of Jihan by calling him Papa for the first time melting Jihan’s fears about their relationship. I believe that the Wedding Dance will solidify his position as Imperial Consort and Duke of Silvershore Valley in the eyes of the valley’s residents once the Generals swear their fealty and Imperial Prince Kastan presents the golden family seal empowering Jihan with his trust and authority. Once the ceremony is completed Jihan will have his full Imperial powers as Duke.Temu has discovered just how intelligent, resourceful and cunning Prince Jihan is and will be making the others understand just how valuable he is to the entire empire. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ p.s. : I really hope that your personal struggles can be brought under control quickly and painlessly. I also hope that you are staying safe and healthy during these incredibly difficult circumstances. I truly value your stories and characters and the complexity of your creative genius. Please always know that we your loyal readers love and value you. You offer each of us the opportunity to live in your worlds, even if only for short periods. These amazing stories are an escape from a world gone mad. Thank you so very much! 👏❤️
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