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Freshman Year, Christmas Break
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Freshman Year, Christmas Break
Excellent chapter! I am so very proud of the man who Noah’s developing into. His interactions with Sky and Lex were touching as there are no problems between them. Their friendship is still strong and will endure. The Ellen show appearance was amazing and profitable for the aquarium and the Bridges to Adelphi program. I’m sorry to see that this amazing story is ending soon, I will certainly miss Noah and those around him. Thank you Geoff for yet another incredible Barnstable story. I am really happy that you are back to teaching. Please stay safe and healthy. North Texas is a dangerous place during the Pandemic, the numbers are climbing at a truly alarming rate. Everyone please wear your masks when you’re away from home and stay home, safe and healthy! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
The Past Shapes The Future: Pt 1
flesco commented on R. Eric's story chapter in The Past Shapes The Future: Pt 1
Excellent chapter! Thank you Bill for letting that rabbit just run! I have always been a fan of your bunnies and rabbits. I love the background behind how Eric became who he is. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Thanks Bill! I wasn’t complaining, I am quite accustomed with the way you enable us to feel what your characters are feeling. 😃
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Outstanding chapter! It’s so nice to hear from Josh again and get updates on his boys. Graham, Andrew and Sammy living together and all being teachers is carrying on the legacy of their father. I was touched by the picture of Cody and the connection that Graham still has with him in times of emotional need. Yes Bill you made me shed tears for Cody, Brent and the others who have passed on. I really hope that Graham with a push by Cody can move forward and find a new love. Graham’s interest in protecting one of his students definitely shows that the Currie family traditions are being carried forward into the future and in different parts of the state. I really hope that Little Ricky will be able to help the child and Graham who definitely needs someone to love. Josh should be very proud of the morals he instilled in his children and their continued care of the families and children around them. He couldn’t ask for a more lasting tribute. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Thank you Artie for slamming the door in Ezra’s face! He truly deserved it. Working at the donut shop will be a very good opportunity for Artie and Dizzy to understand how hard everyone works, as well as the chance to gain some experience and show what each is best at. Lunch with Colleen was a great chance to help her understand the family dynamics and how much Adam really enjoys having Dizzy around. Her advice on where Artie should take Dizzy to tell him that he loved him should work out perfectly! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The conflict between “Lady” Baiza and Jihan has not gone according to the Empress’s plans. The Duke has no interest and Prince Rashan has seen and rejected being used against Uncle Jihan by gifting his award to Jihan with a smile. The family of Prince Kastan, Prince Cohort Jihan and Prince Rashan has turned out to be unbreakable. She’s very angry and totally unbalanced in her belief that she’s the princess consort. I am ecstatic how close Jihan and Rashan have become and I believe that the Emperor will intervene between Jihan and the Empress. The people of Silver Shore Valley are avoiding Jihan and his efforts to bring needed trade into the valley to get the local economy moving again and bring prosperity to the people, the Manor and the Emperor’s demand for cash. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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The Flat Earthers: Part Two
flesco commented on R. Eric's story chapter in The Flat Earthers: Part Two
Outstanding chapter! It looks like the family who complains constantly is about to learn the price for their vehemence towards the Crown. The old adage “be careful what you ask for” is about to come true. I think that when they are faced with the reality of their requests and their costs, they will backtrack very quickly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! I absolutely loved that Artie has now told Ezra off and told him to go back to Dallas. I’m certain that Ezra won’t give up that easily, so Adam, Mason, Dizzy and Artie should remain vigilant. I’m also very happy to see Artie recognize that Adam is the father he’s been waiting for, and that he’s completely in love with Dizzy. Thank you Ace for a wonderful chapter! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding story! You captured the joy, fear, happiness, angst, confusion, clarity and over thinking a romantic encounter with a hot boy. You’ve portrayed the emotional turmoil, intellectual confusion, and physical reactions of an insecure young man who has just jumped into the deep end of the dating pool perfectly. I shudder remembering those feelings from the past. I’m so glad that I don’t have to go through this in the modern age. Life was simpler before technology dragged us into the future. ❤️😃 Thank you! 👏👏👏👏
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Excellent story! Thought provoking, inspiring and a future to look forward to. I truly enjoyed the explanation of global warming! I’m definitely looking forward to the next story! 😃❤️
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Excellent story! The absolute joys of youth and their complex experiences and relationships! Unfortunately this type of in person friendship is all but impossible currently, what an extraordinary shame. I sincerely hope that this pandemic will end soon so that young people have the opportunity to develop their friendships and their romantic relationships. thank you Comicality for an amazing story! 👏👏👏👏
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Excellent chapter! I am sad to hear of your vision problems and hope that your Doctors are at the top of their fields and that your treatments will be successful. Thank you for continuing this amazing saga. This first chapter was wetting our appetites for many more chapters and the bumps in the road along the way. I’ve purchased a large package of tissue boxes and am prepared for a truly enjoyable experience! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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The Flat Earthers: Part One
flesco commented on R. Eric's story chapter in The Flat Earthers: Part One
Excellent chapter! The Orban family of malcontents are always complaining about everything but never offering solutions or suggestions. There’s unfortunately a disproportionately large number of people who are this way. It’s very sad but to date there’s no cure! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! The opposition has a leader who is a bit of a mystery. He dares yell at the King! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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Excellent chapter! Not surprised that the United States and Great Britain are dragging their feet with the consortium investigation. I’m impressed with the speed of construction on the underground and the new electric train that will run between the two cities. It’s looking like a very large portion of Makarovia wont be trapped in their home’s during the bitter winter season. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! A fitting ending for this truly enjoyable story. Watching these dynamic characters mature and grow into functional adults was wonderful. Alex had the most to learn and made tremendous progress in growth both physical and emotional. His gambling addiction was a major step forward when he sought and attended counseling sessions thanks to encouragement from Jeremy. His totally selfish relationship with Brandon was wrong from the start, however both young men had lessons to be learned. I’m happy that they were able to sit down and discuss their concerns. I believe that they both grew from the experiences that they shared. I’m ecstatic that Alex was able to become mature enough to put someone else first. I sincerely hope that they will have a great life together. I wouldn’t mind a subsequent visit with these amazing character’s. Thank you for a wonderful story! 👏👏👏👏
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Outstanding chapter! I love the fact that Jihan has jumped into restoring the manor, he’s very dedicated and determined to understand the inner workings and financial situation. He’s also making the household staff and the overall community a bit nervous by his direct questions about how their businesses are running and why rent is not being paid. The butcher found out the hard way that the Prince Consort cannot be easily bullied. His shadow guard put him on notice that touching Jihan is dangerous, possibly fatal. Jihan extended an olive branch by offering to help with making the butchers business more successful. The Empress’s next attack is about to take place, the “Lady” is going to be a very difficult problem to control. Jihan and Rashan should be capable of putting her in her place with veiled courtesy and civility. I love that Kastan got to meet Yoru, and will soon meet two key members of Jihan’s network. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ p.s.: take all the time you need on these creative and amazing characters! I will wait patiently because I truly enjoy and appreciate all of the hard work involved in bringing these chapters to us. Thank You! 👏👏👏
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Freshman Year, Fall Semester
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Freshman Year, Fall Semester
Excellent chapter! Whew! David, Charlie and Graham Jennings to the rescue! They all met with Mrs. White to discuss rule 2a. After Graham finished telling Mrs. White what Noah and his family would accept, she refused. Graham called the University President and she told Mrs. White that she expected her resignation within the hour and security would help her leave with her personal effects. The University President did not want a lawsuit which they couldn’t win. Justice reappeared at the University for everyone. Now Noah and Billy can be themselves and enjoy their college experiences without a bigot causing them pain and anguish. I am so happy for them! Noah earning a spot in the chorale surely overwhelmed Billy. Getting to perform with David at Carnegie Hall has Billy floating on air! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️👏 -
Outstanding chapter! The guys are all moved into their dorm room, unpacked their stuff, figured out what courses they wanted to take, then got their welcome packages with the rules book. Now what will our guys do? I’m fairly certain that Billy can resign as mentor to Noah and everything will be fine afterwards. Another advisor can be assigned who doesn’t live with Noah! All’s well that end’s well! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! So our young men went ahead at full speed, despite their fears of being a rebound relationship! They do appear to have a very strong tie to each other and can hopefully make the relationship last despite any issues that may occur. My husband and I were with other people when we met. Both were very unkind and controlling. We took the leap and rescued each other and have been together for 291/2 years. The key to a lasting relationship is communication, we argue, scream and yell, then afterward we can discuss the issue and resolve it. Holding your feelings inside and not saying what you feel lead to break ups and divorce court. Yelling isn’t bad when both sides air their views and can then reach an accommodation. If neither one is completely happy then you’ve negotiated a real solution. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The aquarium staff and animals were very happy that Noah’s back. The tiger shark and Oscar were certain that Billy is Noah’s mate for life. Both young men have very strong feelings for the other, but they are still becoming better acquainted and developing a friendship before plunging into the romantic relationship. Billy was impressed by how easily Noah functions in his job, school and interacting with typical people. The potential for a long term committed relationship is probable. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ The photos you’ve added are of two breathtakingly beautiful young men. They fit the pictures in my head.
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Excellent chapter! Noah’s 3 weeks at University went extremely well, he went from crying and scared, to the mentor for his mentor. Everything that Noah does or experiences seems to be positive and successful, with the exception of his very early life and the losses of his parents and of course his romantic relationships. Each person atypical or typical experiences adversity and failures. I feel like there’s a problem or drama just around the corner. I like Billy’s character but remember he has a boyfriend named Devin we haven’t met. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Geoff, I really appreciate the care, research and empathy you have put into this amazing story! You are telling us this story from the perspective of a person on the scale of Autism and related conditions. This story is very effective in fostering understanding of these Atypical personalities which the vast majority of us sort of avoid because we don’t understand how to interact with them. Each and every one of the Atypical people you meet are unique and have differing levels of communication and interpersonal skills. Interaction requires patience, empathy and compassion while taking cues from the individual. It’s very easy to overwhelm and frighten these individuals, as well as being embarrassed by and startled by their frankness and very directed speech and questions. I said previously that this story with some editing of the more sexual aspects would make a great training experience. Thank you for all of the care that you always bring to your stories. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Back to School and Graduation
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Back to School and Graduation
Excellent chapter! Noah and Sky are going to college on two different coasts. Noah will pursue a degree in marine biology outside New York City, while Sky pursues his degree in theater arts in California. The separation will be difficult for them both, but their friendship will continue and maybe they’ll be together again in their future. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! The cruise experiences for both boys was amazing. I did not realize that cruise line’s had special quiet rooms in the theater. The sounds of the Dads having loud sex freaked Noah out, Sky was aware of what was going on but couldn’t convince Noah that np one was getting hurt. Daddy was completely embarrassed as was David. The strength of the boys relationship is maturing and deepening. Overall the vacation was definitely enjoyed by the entire family. It will be interesting to see what changes have occurred in Barnstable. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
