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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 39

    The best part of this chapter was Jesse tamping down his impersonation of Joan Collins being a b i t c h. The parting with the twins after the party was actually touching.
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Since we've last seen them, they've used their power to create matter to forge superior weapons and armor. Fenn is more adept with his power. To my eye, these generals are less than half-assed at planning and too limited in strategy. This only serves to insure future conflict. They should have pursued multiple goals, like regime change. It's the only option for long term peace.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 5

    Isn't he always?
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 5

    From Brick's conversation, we knew a fix was in the works from on high. Now we know how. Lapointe can't be punished twice and gets rewarded for his loyalty. Jason is lost to the streets.
  5. Trust is the most fragile commodity in the world, hard to win and easy to lose.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 32

    Perhaps to the trees he counts in Siberia?
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 32

    The Alvarez Adventure School for Boys final exam?
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 4

    Nothing good is my guess.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 32

    Interesting for Madame Xue to be in Russia. Is she also exacting revenge for the attack on Enrico?
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 22

    By combing powers, they have rendered pure creation of matter. What will this mean?
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 22

    What the Herald described, is the strategy they should have already been using. The best defense is a good offense.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 32

    Who gets Chad's Patek?
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 32

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    Chapter 32

    All the lawfare has been eviscerated and the opponent's major donors are in a terrified retreat with Will's use of the USB file. Madame Xue, with her cold and ruthless precision, has consigned Chad Wexler to a living hell. Caleb has his justice.
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    Chapter 21

    He could also throw huge boulders.
  16. But it might promote ear cleaning.
  17. Too earnest about Lord Alfred Douglas.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 4

    "We're all a lot of work." For young people and fledgling relationships, it's a trying time of life. So many don't survive separation because they are still growing and learning. Right now Peter and Jason find the connection they both need.
  19. Just 15 weeks after the debut of the play he was sent to prison.
  20. The best fortune of all is to be surrounded by earnest friends.
  21. drpaladin

    Epilogue

    A beautiful and unique story. Thank you!
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 30

    Lovely!
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 29

    Oh my! Going to meet the 'rents.
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 28

    Torynn should have lopped off her head.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 27

    May she become disorganized.
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