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  1. drpaladin

    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    It's not simply a means like a phone call. Each is always present in the other. As Lucien explained to Eli, even if Eli were to die he couldn't get away from the loss. If this isn't the ultimate possession, I don't know what would be.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    I think both of you are ignoring the presence of the bond. They possess each other already and can't escape it.
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    When they most need Park for his lethality, they get Bean Boy instead. Good thing Hollis has no eye for ladies. If he had survived the planet, Tweek would have gotten him when he beamed back up.
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    Some things ascribed to spezzatura is merely extreme stupidity. It's easy to be a straight man in a comedy act when you don't understand the jokes.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    Eli couldn't watch Lucien kill them. He would have been too much of a sociopath if he could. One more day as a human. It's not much time when facing an eternty being different.
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    The election played out as they thought with the Liberals losing massively, but Will won by a large margin. He was shocked by the PM's offer, which will anchor him. Andrew is far too good at acting surprised. His false holiday will be busy.
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    Perfect Moment

    drpaladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Perfect Moment

    The mating at last. Our guys are joined forever, and a great forever it's bound to be.
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    The rope is certainly still around the Moon. Barnswallow is proving to be a magnificent place, and they haven't even reached the house yet. I'm sure more surprises lay ahead.
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    I see nothing there capable of ending him.
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    More. It requires every founding families blood, a death, to end it.
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    How wet is wet?
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    They simply left and the Vespers disbanded. High profile or not, it's only eight people out of thousands. And the founding families will enable a coverup.
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    There is still a place below the chapel. It becomes a crypt. None of the families will want this secret to ever be exposed.
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    When you can't have it all, winsome works.
  15. drpaladin
    Shall we call Park the Zodiac Killer?
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    Institutions have costs. The balance sheet has become due. Remy was calm and resigned. He knew the ritual and what was coming. He had already decided to take Adrian's place. The only decent act he's done in sixty years.
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    The Circle

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Circle

    Something I've wondered about. Remy was here sixty years ago. This would have put him in his early thirties. Was he there getting some advanced degree?
  18. drpaladin
    Will and Andrew will be headed to Hong Kong, Will to help snag vital capital and Andrew to drop a dime on the Russian operation. Neither will be easy. The most unlikely figure of Yani takes on the role of Baby Whisperer. Who knew babies had feedback loops?
  19. drpaladin
    So you never made the Color Selection Commitee?
  20. drpaladin
    And the ship's AI is a galaxy class moron.
  21. drpaladin

    The Circle

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Circle

    I doubt Adrian has ever wanted to be there.
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    Fog? No fog here.
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    The Circle

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Circle

    Like a trainwreck in slow motion, it's all unraveling before them and no one is able to stop it.
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    My mind shuts off when I encounter bloviating.
  25. drpaladin
    Should I say I found this chapter somewhat... VEXing?
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