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  1. drpaladin
    Good thing the Chinese happeen to be aligned in purpose here, since they already know everything.
  2. drpaladin
    It's difficult to have secrets in one of the most heavily surveilled places on Earth. The game is in motion, but the Russians are in terminal mode and not done.
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    A kind of tape?
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    The Turning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Turning

    Travel will be problematic. Lucien's passport isn't up to date.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    I wouldn't say he's getting ioff easy by any means. He's lost his friends and the only male figure in his life. He's lost Eli. He'll continue to suffer with survivor's guilt. Adrian is a victim of choices made for him.
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    The Turning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Turning

    Before this, Lucien's blood has enhanced Eli's senses. The full experience will be overwhelming when Eli wakes in his new form.
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    AI has tried to tell me things which were absurd.
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    The Turning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Turning

    The hurting is the cost of forever. The well of pain and hunger is deep and indistinguishable. The darkness is the death of his mortality.
  9. drpaladin
    I'm still trying to process them actually listening to a diagnosis from the stupidest AI in existence.
  10. drpaladin
    Well, and the ship is literally buried now.
  11. drpaladin
    The architecture of Andrew's plan becomes clear. It's a heist no one can be allowed to discover. That stall was extremely disappointing after seeing MI6's setup on the RMS Queen Elizabeth in The Man with the Golden Gun.
  12. drpaladin
    Oh-oh, here she comes.
  13. drpaladin
    Yeah. On screen keyboards and trembling fingers don't mix well. Sigh.
  14. drpaladin
    Burgandy does have some blue, but also some brown and black for the ticher shade.
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    Reunion

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Reunion

    Kylie was the only one mentioned as being there. I don't believe any of the others were present for the last sacrifice.
  16. drpaladin
    I've been thinking. There's still a foundation at the other place. It could be rebuilt on later to give Runyon and Willy James a place to themselves.
  17. drpaladin
    Escape from a sticky situation.
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    The Last Day

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Last Day

    Eli has always been an observer, an outsider, invisible. This is Eli's natural state. It is quite ideal for what he is to become. If he had never met the Vespers or Lucien, his future would have remained as an anchor to his mother. It's not very appealing. I would have been more expansive with my last day, but this is Eli. He had an Eli day. I'm not sure how continuing to see his family will work, but the choice is very Eli.
  19. drpaladin
    Word play is often tenebrous to the literal mind.
  20. drpaladin
    If it's possible, Park just had an orgasm.
  21. drpaladin
    Becky is a terrifying mess. Andrew is right, she will be such a distraction no one will look his way.
  22. drpaladin
    The Captain's tunic is burgundy, not generic red.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    It's not simply a means like a phone call. Each is always present in the other. As Lucien explained to Eli, even if Eli were to die he couldn't get away from the loss. If this isn't the ultimate possession, I don't know what would be.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    I think both of you are ignoring the presence of the bond. They possess each other already and can't escape it.
  25. drpaladin
    When they most need Park for his lethality, they get Bean Boy instead. Good thing Hollis has no eye for ladies. If he had survived the planet, Tweek would have gotten him when he beamed back up.
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