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  1. drpaladin
    The architecture of Andrew's plan becomes clear. It's a heist no one can be allowed to discover. That stall was extremely disappointing after seeing MI6's setup on the RMS Queen Elizabeth in The Man with the Golden Gun.
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    Oh-oh, here she comes.
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    Yeah. On screen keyboards and trembling fingers don't mix well. Sigh.
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    Burgandy does have some blue, but also some brown and black for the ticher shade.
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    Reunion

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Reunion

    Kylie was the only one mentioned as being there. I don't believe any of the others were present for the last sacrifice.
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    I've been thinking. There's still a foundation at the other place. It could be rebuilt on later to give Runyon and Willy James a place to themselves.
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    Escape from a sticky situation.
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    The Last Day

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Last Day

    Eli has always been an observer, an outsider, invisible. This is Eli's natural state. It is quite ideal for what he is to become. If he had never met the Vespers or Lucien, his future would have remained as an anchor to his mother. It's not very appealing. I would have been more expansive with my last day, but this is Eli. He had an Eli day. I'm not sure how continuing to see his family will work, but the choice is very Eli.
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    Word play is often tenebrous to the literal mind.
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    If it's possible, Park just had an orgasm.
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    Becky is a terrifying mess. Andrew is right, she will be such a distraction no one will look his way.
  12. drpaladin
    The Captain's tunic is burgundy, not generic red.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    It's not simply a means like a phone call. Each is always present in the other. As Lucien explained to Eli, even if Eli were to die he couldn't get away from the loss. If this isn't the ultimate possession, I don't know what would be.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    I think both of you are ignoring the presence of the bond. They possess each other already and can't escape it.
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    When they most need Park for his lethality, they get Bean Boy instead. Good thing Hollis has no eye for ladies. If he had survived the planet, Tweek would have gotten him when he beamed back up.
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    Some things ascribed to spezzatura is merely extreme stupidity. It's easy to be a straight man in a comedy act when you don't understand the jokes.
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    The Offering

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Offering

    Eli couldn't watch Lucien kill them. He would have been too much of a sociopath if he could. One more day as a human. It's not much time when facing an eternty being different.
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    The election played out as they thought with the Liberals losing massively, but Will won by a large margin. He was shocked by the PM's offer, which will anchor him. Andrew is far too good at acting surprised. His false holiday will be busy.
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    Perfect Moment

    drpaladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Perfect Moment

    The mating at last. Our guys are joined forever, and a great forever it's bound to be.
  20. drpaladin
    The rope is certainly still around the Moon. Barnswallow is proving to be a magnificent place, and they haven't even reached the house yet. I'm sure more surprises lay ahead.
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    I see nothing there capable of ending him.
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    More. It requires every founding families blood, a death, to end it.
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    How wet is wet?
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    They simply left and the Vespers disbanded. High profile or not, it's only eight people out of thousands. And the founding families will enable a coverup.
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    The Reckoning

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Reckoning

    There is still a place below the chapel. It becomes a crypt. None of the families will want this secret to ever be exposed.
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