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vellichor - Word of the Day - Mon Jul 28, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Here's number three. Paleologism is the opposite of neologism. -
It's a fulfillment of Sam's dreams to be going on a mission with a real knight. It seems straightforward on the surface and Graeme appears confident and unconcerned despite the odds. Anything could happen.
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We learned some truths. Sinclair is a fool. He really believes money can buy anything. Enrico is besotted. Both he and Xue are ruthless killers, yet at no time in their conversation did Xue suggest killing Ezra. She knows Enrico too well.
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vellichor - Word of the Day - Mon Jul 28, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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The Moon through the Pines
drpaladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Moon through the Pines
For some reason, visions of Jack distracting Cassandra by throwing playing cards a la Ricky Jay. (Jay could throw cards 99mph, hard enough to stick in watermelons) This is after the little squirrel rescues Vince. There are priorities.- 32 comments
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And sadly, not uncommon.
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Don't forget Buster Crabbe as Flash Gordon.
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And the indecent comments...? (Waggling my eyebrows while armed with my cigar)
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The Moon through the Pines
drpaladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Moon through the Pines
Danny had the correct read on the situation with the pack. Whatever Danny might be, he has an awesome amount of glamour to hide it. Maybe he should have brought the toaster.- 32 comments
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The pressure tanks are damaged, but they should still be able to compress air. Pump the air into the ballast tanks.
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Um. Not sinking, just stuck.
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proliferate - Word of the Day - Sun Jul 27, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The most frequent use of proliferate in modern times relates to the spread of nuclear weapons. -
So much for intricate plans within plans. If the objective was to steal the detonator, it just literally blew up. The recovery team's mission has failed and they aren't even there yet. Reza made a bad choice. He knew the recovery team is coming. A better gamble was to let them extract him.
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U-boats typically had a load out of three MP-40 submachine guns and as many as ten 7.65mm pistols by the end of the war.
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No sunscreen?
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Right now only one guy on the sub is armed and unless there just happens to be a marine detachment on board, there will only be some handguns in the arms locker.
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dystopian - Word of the Day - Sat Jul 26, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Dystopian movies are popular because they show worlds worse than the one we live in. -
Submarines are woefully unprepared for a direct assault.
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The endgame seems to be detonating the mine, else why build a detonator? Ezra is hopelessly entwined with the romantic dreams of first love. This could have been very different if his mother wasn't so career focused.
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Being chaste but slightly sultry and slutty aren't mutually exclusive.
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But Mission roofs are so hard and bumpy.
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It becomes clearer and clearer Alexander's analytical mind is the only one who understands the true dynamics of their group. Lyn has always been his focus even though his approach until now has been from an obtuse angle. The analogy of Luke as an overgrown puppy is perfect.
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Um. He doesn't like battles because they don't appreciate silks?
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Yep. Somebody was cut off.
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Nope. He'll have a child to raise.he
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