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The Loturi seem to be honorable people and good guys. Our problem here will be trying to find out what these two races are up to and attempt to solve the Loturi's spy problem. Not an easy task. Earlier when they first went aboard Imvestigator using Charlie's second presence, Robin said his suit said the atmosphere was breathable. But here when they spied on the Loturi ship, the translator tech wouldn't work because it wasn't actually there. These can't both be true.
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Andrew shows remarkable compassion by giving Dmytro a lifeline even though he pulled a knife on him. He could have arrested him or simply left him to fend for himself.
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If anything, the FSB is more sinister than this. Some time back one of their operatives was running a boy's camp and using them to make porn and for sex honey pots as shown here. All of the boys were underage and at least one was killed to protect the operation.
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The fire and a member of his play group found murdered on the premises is too coincidental to be an accident, and the decapitation of Guillotine is a macabre message. I now doubt the fire was of a benign origin. Since he knows none of his group by name, he would have no way of knowing who else might be dead. Of course, he's not quite worked out in his head yet he may be a target.
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A very productive night for Andrew, shutting down a honey pot, snaring a spy plus a new operative, and getting a lead on his prey. All done without sacrificing his morals or honor, a sometimes difficult feat in the intelligence game.
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obsession - Word of the Day - Fri Jul 11, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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This takes up where the last book in the series stopped. I'm speaking of the entire series, not what's currently here.
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I was speaking specifically about this particlar story. I'm aware where he has content.
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resilience - Word of the Day - Thu Jul 10, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
When you get older, everything seems to lose resilience. -
With only four rounds from the mortar, the village must be small. Doesn't look as though they were being careful taking the terrorists out. Hard to question dead men.
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It was my fault. I accidently hid it when I posted it so you wouldn't have gotten a notification.
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Well, I also have more considerations in play than my own tastes.
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It seems Enrico will be very involved in the events to come.
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I'm not sure I can be so generous.
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infidelity - Word of the Day - Wed Jul 9, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
In a rage, Howard smashed a high fidelity stereo. Does this mean he is promoting infidelity? -
infidelity - Word of the Day - Wed Jul 9, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I have confidence there are those out there capable of infinite infidelity. -
Chapter 23 Comes with the Territory
drpaladin commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 Comes with the Territory
I don't believe the elderly couple are shifters. -
You want to look like Ming the Merciless too?
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Oops. I meant @Seraph28
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I agree with @Seraph28
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Valiant Edge? Does this make Rory the Valiant Sheath?
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I don't see it anywhere else.
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As effective as the barrier is, do they even know they are there?
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Chapter 8 Hiding In Plain Sight
drpaladin commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Hiding In Plain Sight
Once begun, it's a lifetime joy. -
No sympathy for Finch and I wouldn't want the perpetrator over for dinner.
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