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    Bastien has more than turned Lawrence's head, he's turned him topsy turned. Lawrence can't think of much else. Like Icarus, he has already gotten too close to the Sun.
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    Chapter 1

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Better late than never, and there's a stair lift.
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    The pattern for well to do families is to send errant scions to a military school. I knew a graduate of one of those in college. He was a nutjob, carried a nasty 8 inch knife he made himself he called The Widowmaker.
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    There is the mention of unwashed bodies. All we've seen so far are washbasins and a trough urinal. Apparently cleanliness is next to godliness isn't a concept here.
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    The protection had a price, and you notice it had a lag. He let the abuse go just long enough for Calloway to know he needs the protection. It takes little imagination to know the price of protection when there are no physical goods. You got a purty mouth boy.
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    One has to wonder what kind of creative fiction this place presents to the world.
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    Chapter 30

    drpaladin commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 30

    The storm has passed. They are left with something different than before, uncertainty.
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    There is a lot more to Elias than brutal edges.
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    Calloway Sr. swept away in the dark of night to a place l I ke Blackwater might make something of him.
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    Would anagnosnoreisis mean I don't care? 😛
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    Prologue

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Prologue

    Another one. No cuddly softies here.
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    With some stories the anagnorisis is the peak.
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    My we are ambitious.
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    I love A-10 Warthogs. Some morons at the Pentagon keep trying to retire them, but they keep proving no t hing can till a field like they can.
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    Ring! Ring! "Um... Hello?" "Hello! How are you?" "Uh, who is this?" "Your neighbor. Look up."
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    The mutual agony of those on the firing line and those who wait for their return. Attacking a US FOB with an illicit mercenary force is an incredibly audacious move. They will stop at nothing.
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    Chapter 29

    drpaladin commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 29

    I'd rather be frightened with you than certain without you. They are left with forever, but they also have today.
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    And they were protected by a Ward. Jay Ward.
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    But LA isn't landlocked.
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    Leaving the question of how Marcus will enjoy Montana?
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    Natasha was flummoxed. Her efforts to beguile Bulleinkle were in vain.
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    Yani had the solution to Will's political problem. It's simple and elegant. There will be a massive cost.
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    Alpenglow. I've seen the effect, but my first encounter with the word
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    Chapter 28

    drpaladin commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 28

    Maelor/Vale has been held by his own grief and guilt. Christopher's forgiveness has given him peace and released him from his self imposed burden to fix it all.
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    Here comes the Judge! Here comes the Judge! Everybody stand cause Here comes the Judge!
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