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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    Well, Libbet could have stood on her head and opened wide
  2. Perhaps omniscient in this case?
  3. Harley?? Probably a Honda.
  4. Owen is pathetically passive and needy. Maybe he needs to be enslaved.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Upon finding the man dead at the base of the stairs, the coroner ruled the death accidental. "But Fred, he's been shot," pointing at the revolver on the floor. "He dropped it and it went off." "Six times in the chest?!!" "Everytime it hit a step, it went off." * This actually happened here. *
  6. Margot shouldn't be a journalist. Her talent is more toward fiction.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    Poor Atreus. He sees a wonderful new sword and not the weight of its meaning.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    And less passion than some handshakes.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Some problems fix themselves while others must be managed. "He fell on the bullets." Now this was a very artful fall.
  10. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Once triggered, status flags have to be manually changed
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter Eleven

    Dame Shirley Bassey?
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter Twelve

    They want to escape, not come back
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter Twelve

    Speaking of @mastershakeme Where she be?
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter Twelve

    Folks do get away with the college trick and some just think they do.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter Twelve

    What do you need? How sad no one has asked before.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    Alvarez won his battle and brought Ephraim back to justice. Devon saved him from falling into Acosta's clutches forever. The only bitter pill is Acosta still draws breath.
  17. Most of us have a place we consider a sanctuary.
  18. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Oh, did Richard enjoy being under Atreus?
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Who knew diplomacy would be a harder game than the battles in the Holy Land.
  20. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Atreus is Darien's son. There is no denying it. He wants to make his father proud, but like all teens is expressing h I s own identity. Maybe he can do it without starting a war.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter Eleven

    Yes. Besides I question how devout the Donnelys could be. One kid? Come on.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    It was amusing seeing Austin rejecting Alpha candidates. The best candidate is already there and doesn't know it.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter Eleven

    There is a limit to Catholic guilt
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 14

    I doubt it.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter Eleven

    After a funeral home is well established, it is a cash machine. Owen drives a seven year old Honda, a modest wardrobe, and a room is Iike a monk's cell. What the heck do they do with the money?
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