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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    One thing is undisclosed. What is Edgar?
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    Uh oh. Tyler's locked in a cage with Edgar's very feral Beast. This is just... so wrong.
  3. Courage shows itself in many forms. Bravery isn't limited to battlefields.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter Two

    It's a dangerous time to be among the powerful factions in Florence. Matteo is to be sacrificed to marriage, but still cavort with his lover.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    Here in a microcosm is one of the problems of the Crusades, rivalry over glory and spoils. Baldwin is a snake.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Varilik is completely ruthless. Control the food and you control the people.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Dumbass heroes are your trope.
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    Chapter 13

    About holier than thou this is for your own good and keeping secrets? You're damn right.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Trillion, you're so dumb. The prophecy will do it's thing and won't let them peel off alone.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Polycules can be so confusing, even with a binder and color coded tabs.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Uh, when did Gregory drop Chloe?
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Charlie is undead - status - pet. He gets a collar.
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    And Lynix with bunny slippers.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    He'll (Pip) leave crumbs everywhere.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Poor Simon/Rufus co-habitated, redecorated, and renamed. At least they haven't changed the siding.
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    Chapter 11

    You made Simon into Ron Weasley.
  17. There is a thin line between empowered and overconfidence.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Matteo chides Danielo for mocking Pazzi. I'd say Pazzi is a fool for showing contempt for the Medicis.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Beautiful writing snd swiftly immersing us in the tangled intrigues of old Florence.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    It may be a no brainer, but it's more of a willer. These are the cruel brothers his father protected him from.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    A trait not confined to witches.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    By chance, Fenn has unraveled the trick to sending his shadows off to do his bidding. It's a terrifying power. It's one which might be unstoppable.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    As suspected, Sev is a mole sent by his father, who isn't dead, to undo Arcum by luring Trillion to his doom. Sev is dismayed to find out Garran has never trusted him. This isn't going to work out to Sev's plan. Caelo will never stop watching him and Trillion won't leave without Ember.
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    Chapter 16

    I really hate prophesies. They are so purposely arcane
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Ishan, our little Turkish sorcerer prince, has survived his brother's assassination attempt. They underestimated him by trying to bypass his magic, but his sword skills were superlative. But his beloved father wasn't as lucky, and now he is alone in a nest of vipers. He only has Wylan left.
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