Why have I put myself into this? I was up from midnight until close to 7am reading this... novel...
Now I'll have to revive vicious old memories of me waiting *(im)patiently* for a new chapter each week.
That's just f**ked up. It's like me not having a cigarette for a week. NOW I hate not having any for more than a day. A week alone... I'll be one hyper and moody bitch trying to smoke a newspaper at the end. I guess in this case for Chase's story, I'd be trying to smoke my Chase Bank credit card.
You're screwed, Chase. :mace:
Overall, I enjoyed it. I didn't know it was a magical story (in some way) until I went chapter after chapter. Nice way to trick me thinking it's a non-fantasy in the first place. I don't have much comment yet, but I adore how this is going right now. I'm stuck... just like I'd said a few minutes ago. Nice way to trick me thinking it was Caleb that did Jeremy (well, kinda... the chapter cut me off from the possible gooey details), but it was Braden.
I did notice the British English overtones, but I'd like to mention that "traveled" is "travelled".
And titles are capitalized, such as "My Prince", "The King", etc. Maybe you did it on purpose, but I'm oftentimes anal with capitalization. Your story... Just commenting what caught my eyes.
9.5/10.
Yes, I went to force myself to read this, just for you, sweet Chase.