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Oh Mark , remember the brief sour expression , guard yourself . Kyles apology is too pat , he’s selling the reformed , lonely , workaholic a little too hard.
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Ross's explanation certainly is plausible , and what went on between Ross and Kyle definately was a private thing. I believe Kyle is right when he said , ‘the truth is somewhere in between ‘.
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Goodness , what a twisted revelation , the feeling is that it’s more than likely , mostly the truth.
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Mark may be quick witted and snarky , but he is also surprisingly naive sometimes. I don’t think he’s quite prepared to deal with someone as devious as Kyle appears to be.
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Kevin’s Fathers reaction was a welcome surprise . His Mother is a grave disappointment , seems she and Devin are cut from the same cloth . What Paul has got up to and who he has told is a cause for concern. I think Stanley and Charles are in more danger than Kevin and Cameron, I think Paul will heed Devins warning to him to leave Kevin alone , no warning was made regarding the others . If Lyle is unable to get his wife to see sense , their family may well implode. Not an enviable situation for any of the characters .
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Ardant's reaction is hardly surprising and his realization that it may be PTSD a valid one given his experiences in the past. Hopefully an explanation will be forthcoming at the meeting. There are almost certainly ‘ pacifist’ Gahlamon families who also just want to settle down and get on with life. A great chapter.
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The pep-talk has the felling of a fore-telling or premonition. Mark would do well to heed the voices of experience.
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Oh dear , and there’s the cat among the pigeons ! Can’t wait for the scene Sofia’s going to throw. Mark had best be prepared to temper his responses, I fear this is a topic Sofia has an extensive opinion on.
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Why does Marks pending departure leave one with a felling of unease ? Probably because it’s meant to! It’s a little to smooth!
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Well , if Sofia didn’t know almost everything about Mark before , she certainly does now . Right down to the shape of his behind!
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I like both Mums very different , ‘take no prisoners approach’ , you’re left with no doubts about their views !
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And there we have the perfect introduction.
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Gosh a perfectly awesome moment sandwiched between to Mothers , the call from Sofia sounds ominous .
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After the hurricane that was Mum , things were bound to be a little awkward . Also things seem to be moving to the next level after the misunderstanding !
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Good Lord , meeting Marks mother , what an experience . She’s fabulous ! I can relate. I brought my first lover home as a teenager and my mom put us in the same bedroom , when my brothers reacted that this was unfair , she replied , ‘ Stop being rediculous he can’t get your brother pregnant’ . I’ve never lived it down , my brothers still greet me with , ‘Pregnant , yet? ‘ , whenever we meet up.
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Ross does have a valid explanation and waiting to talk when he’s home is not unreasonable. At least he acknowledges he could have handled it better. Mark does need a mobile phone it will help with communication .
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Mark had every right to be angry after days of non communication , anybody in that situation would feel used. A good airing of feelings is necessary .
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Gosh , an introspective , pensive weekend followed by a Manic Monday , these Foresters are trying poor Mark.
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Thank goodness Mark has Joey as the voice of reason, it doesn’t make one feel better though!
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Despite having read this story a couple of years ago , before one could acknowledge and comment on your mobile, this chapter remains a shocker ! Wake your lover up before you leave , it’s a common courtesy !! I like Ross and his assertiveness but he needs to think before he acts ! A world of uncertainty and doubt could be left in the wake of his actions!
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Ollie’s journey to self discovery as gay and a serious musician is really being made easier with Ryder and Teddy as his mentors . He has a solid base to rely on at all times in both spheres of his developing awareness . I can only imagine what he’s going to say or come up with at the press conference if the interviewer annoys him!
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Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
deville commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
Superlative ! A piece of Fine Art , it should be framed. -
Kevin has already undermined the Daves authority by calling him out on his words and by calling Jamal his friend . People like Dave very seldom have friends and those around him are aware of this .
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Chapter 24 - The Petition
deville commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 24 - The Petition
Absolutely , remarkable restraint , my Husband would probably be restraining me from beating him with his clipboard , whilst simultaneously giving him a P.A piercing with that damned pin. People should sometimes suffer for their convictions . -
Just perfect that Yoshi broke protocol, enough of a message for the Empress to see that despite all the changes he has undergone , he remains the Prince she raised, true to himself. Now he just has to sell the idea of Midori as his consort to her.
