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Wonderfully disjointed feeling to the first chapter . Sets the tone for the potentially unusual relationship that’s going to give ‘settling down’ whole new look .
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Chapter 23 Cakes and caring
deville commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 23 Cakes and caring
Lovely chapter, glad they’re all back. -
Auspicious that Grim and Prism meet at a festival of colours , not dissimilar to the Festival of Holi. Twenty years indentured to a Grandmaster , one can’t envy that!
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Seeing this story made me all ‘soft and squishy and excitable . ‘
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Free from the Brox Consortium and their methods of control over him Kohen has been evolving , it seems the implants have too . Let’s hope it’s into something the Consortium never imagined and have no inkling of what it will become .
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Chapter 25 - What'll I do...
deville commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 25 - What'll I do...
Beautifully written but over whelmingly sad. -
Filled with sadness and hope , quite bittersweet really.
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The juries out on Trey , but leaning towards caution. Not sure I buy the sudden about face in his attitude . I hope Riley’s little transaction in the locker room wasn’t witnessed , it’s a sure fire way for him to lose his position on the team.
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Awesome ! The voice added surprising depth to the image , which in turn gave layers of meaning to the words.
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So sneaky , both your tale and Max.
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Wholly entertaining ! Definately brightened my day . Whenever I hear ‘started on the wrong foot ‘ , I’ll be thinking if hotdogs and things trying not to snicker.
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Bespoke weather! What a lovely concept. Merriweather , the names delightfully misleading amidst the rainy , stormy greys. Hope the lads give those foreigners a dose of British best that places a pall over them for weeks to come. P.S. All I can think of now is a bacon butty smothered in HP.
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Definately not , they’re not close enough to my itchy little fingers.
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Steam punk , nothing beats it! The idiom fits perfectly ! Great snapshot story , we definately need more!
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Amazing story , I loved it, Jack an employment agent who finds positions that don’t pay in money !! Like I imagine Chris’s did , my mind yelled , WTF!!! Hell no , not in my world , I like looking at my bank balance at the end of the month , rubbing my hands , whilst gloating , ‘mine , all mine.’
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When Pigs Fly, A Lich Dies
deville commented on comicfan's story chapter in When Pigs Fly, A Lich Dies
When do pigs fly? Literally ! In an infinitely enjoyable short fantasy story. -
So different but both are beautiful and haunting in their own unique way. Quite a month , I read them all again . A monumental achievement . Thank you for sharing with us , yet again.
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Chapter 10 It Is What It Is
deville commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 It Is What It Is
Gods ! That was a hard read. Let’s hope it isn’t a case of a little to little , a little to late . At least Drake was honest with them both in the end . I fear they are both in for another uncomfortable night . -
A fabulously twisty tale with a mythic , oral tradition flavor . I could visualize the campfire around which it would be told.
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You should have seen me...
deville commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in You should have seen me...
A delightfully fishy tale , told from the bottom of a long glass with just enough truth for it to be taken as far fetched , your narrator excels in his story telling . -
April 29 through April 31
deville commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 29 through April 31
It couldn’t have come at a better time . -
Well you can’t get a more literal interpretation than this. An intriguing tale with just enough possibility slipped in to let the imagination take flight.
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April 29 through April 31
deville commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 29 through April 31
31 April , I actually took a moment to check .... before kicking myself. Each of the 3 poems so different and diverse . -
Well it seems Klaus and Jake have had sufficient time with their pride to realise it’s a cold and lonely place . Let’s hope Hans’s plan brings them closure , preferably together , and that they don’t have a run in with Diego yet!
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The sinister overtones had the mind spinning in so many different directions , before tumbling into relief at the benign manipulation in the end .
