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Absolutely , and we wouldn’t be human , without the ‘why’!
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I agree Jake is not thinking clearly , Klaus kept his word , Diaz is free ! Klaus over reacted too though! A sad chapter!
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An excellent , informative interlude ! Either someone is interfering with the relationship between the Gods of the nighttime , or, the spell Khonsu learned from Hapi needs to be energized by something and Khonsu jealousy was readily at hand . At least now Anubis knows to keep pursuing Khonsu!
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I do enjoy it when those crows come home to roost!my only concern is for the baby and what will be done about it . Now that Paul has informed Devin of Ashley’s plan , I’m sure Devin is going to have little to do with her , she’s going to have to catch someone else when he rejects her , probably Gordon ! If not, and the truth does out , I wouldn’t want to be in Devins shoes when both his parents realise he’s been lying about the project to them.
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A smorgasbord for the senses , each one , called upon to indulge in the imagery of your words. Sight , taste , scent , touch and hearing ! Topped off with memory and emotion. Can’t pick one , or two or more ... each stands on its own , all so different.
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Another Half Baked Oliver Plan
deville commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Another Half Baked Oliver Plan
Not such a half baked plan Oliver ..., pretty sweet actually . Even had some planning ... that’s new! Telling Teddy other patients being wheeled into hospital now might need what only Teddy can do , shows he paid close attention to Liz. -
It saddens , that Grimm sees himself as not ‘unlike’ the demon, the 8 centuries can not have been kind to him or his psyche! He and Prism are well known to the demons , well enough to have been named, and names are powerful ! I can’t shake the feeling that Neredos arrived just in time to further an agenda , what though , eludes me at present! I just don’t like him! Demons can’t perform magic , we’ve seen they are susceptible to it , perhaps Grimms magic will continue to work even in the stasis of the mist column!
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April 8 through April 14
deville commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 8 through April 14
A swarm of images , a lot to imbibe and order at 3 a.m! Also providing a much needed lift ! Will have read them again but in this moment 9 moves me the most , and 10 plays unrepentant with my thoughts . -
A sweet little interlude. Masons an observant , clued in young man , his apology for calling Joel , ‘a girl’ , segues seemlesdly into some pretty deep insights into interpersonal / sexual dynamics. The thoughts flowing quite smoothly .. once he started articulating them ....sort of like the Walz.... one , two , three....
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Brady has taken his time about it , but he’s cleaned out his closet , right the way to the back. His apprehension surrounding meeting everyone so many years later , especially when you’ve returned home with nothing is understandable. Rick seems like he could be an ally and a good friend again. In the interim Paul doesn’t appear to have grown up or developed , nor had he grown in the estimation of his school day friends ! It must be incredibly hard for Brady to see the object of his childhood obsessions and bullying actions and realise he’s still someone he’s attracted to , more so now. Rick will probably give him the current lowdown of what has and is going on with everyone he knew in Town.
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TC2 - Chapter 3: Meet Tibot, Adam’s Brother
deville commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 3: Meet Tibot, Adam’s Brother
The rift between the brothers is serious , if I were Adam , Tibot would be under serious scrutiny for a while , a long while , before he is admitted to my nearest family again. I’m all for cautiously mending the rift . Here’s to hoping Adam and his legal team nail the State of Massachusetts and the the maternal grandparents to the wall. -
That Mrs Williams can even consider comparing her reaction to Kevin and Cameron to Mr Williams reaction to Devin leaving the team and playing truant with Ashley shows how irrational she really is . If Paul does manage to assault Kevin ( I sincerely hope not) and Ashley’s conspiring with Paul becomes known , I hope that Devin realizes what a truly despicable person she is .
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I believe Sardella knew precisely who she was talking too and her enquiry into wether he was crew was to test Kohen's honesty and his commitment to the Captain and crew. I find her behavior a little odd. Who and /or what is a Trepharo and did Sardella notice him too?
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The Love, the Fighting and the Laughter
deville commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Love, the Fighting and the Laughter
I don’t believe it’s Mark , his father from the little we know of him seems to love and be protective of him. So Teddy’s and Ryder’s first prospective child is my favorite, but knowing how sinister @Aceinthehole can be I’m sure that we are all in for a surprise and maybe not a pleasant one . -
The rebellion may have failed for the Underking but it has certainly succeeded as Fasha planned it would. I sense that the Vhor in addition to their other powers , may be the demon caste that can control other demons , it would be pointless releasing senseless killing machines otherwise , unless Fashas aims all along were total annihilation of all other races. Styx ,Maxthane and Kirra seem to work well together , and I’m pleased that Styx returned to find Kirra , even more pleased that Max healed him even though he was already exhausted. We now know of Max and Kirras ancestral heritages , only Styx remains an enigma as yet.
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Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
deville commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
I apologize , geographical semantics , no -one may act as a therapist in our country without the requisite degree and expertise . That goes for counselling too, unless you’re a minister of religion . (I still have difficulty figuring this one out , and it’s my job to understand the law!) -
Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
deville commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
Drake has now heard about ‘evolving’ sexuality from Jimmy-Dean and Richard , Richards telling of it supported by a Psychologist . In his own words he needs time to work things out. Maybe it will sink in and he can now see Jimmy -Dean in a different light. I feel this conversation was extremely important for Drake and that he will find closure ( Aaaargh)! Richard did love Drake , he admits that he still does, and that’s probably reflected in that second kiss. It would probably not change anything for him and Bernadette. -
Anubis and Khonsu's Children
deville commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Anubis and Khonsu's Children
These six being let loose on pristine nature ? I have s feeling it may be more than a little besmirched by the end of the run. Especially with Eli more charged and Quinn rolling in the grass. Anubis doesn’t seem too averse to the mixing of the two sets of children , as Khonsu is just spiteful and mean spirited . -
Jake does appear to be wining more of Klaus’ staff to his side! It’s really sad that he has lived for so many years with the death of his parents weighing him down , and that Diaz capitalized on it is quite despicable , not that I would expect much less from Diaz. Klaus’ approach to the pending gang wars is quite brutal , but I suspect effective .
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I think the Priciple is wrong , Zero Tolerance means just that ! No tolerance of slurs , names or physical action of any kind. The teachers should be put on high alert and sent into the halls during change of class to be vigilant ! I can’t help but feel that given his past experience Cameron is at high risk ! I hope his friends really support him. Mrs Lynch is fabulous !!
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Beautiful works , all of them! Anomia , otherworldly , with its innocent certainty and ‘black ‘ flowers , calls out to be read again and again.
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Great sense of a close found family .
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Gosh , what a week! I liked the acknowledgement in (1) , the introspection in (2) , the humour in (3), the observation in (4), the comfort and security in (5) , the longing and connection in(6) , and ethereal beauty of (7). That said , April 4 and Ghosts resonate most with me.
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A quick and easy way to get a community behind an idea is to promise economic prosperity, and a better future. Besides Ardant , the Volder clan seem to be the only other members of the community with direct knowledge of the Gahlamon and their prowess in war. Maza’s comment on the perceptions of ‘murderers ‘ opens up a whole new set of perceptions for Ardant , as does his sisters reaction. I feel he is in for an interesting two days at home , especially with Dathars interest focused on him.
