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Parker Owens

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  1. Zander may not so much be using Mary Ellen as much as he is being pursued. Unlike Andy, he can’t run.
  2. @Higster: Justice indeed. Mrs. Chandler and FPS were thoroughly put in their place. Andy was lucky to have the Stevensons as his family, and Heidi Graber to dismantle the hapless FPS lawyer. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  3. No, Greg wasn’t hiding it much. But outing someone else in a fit of pique is not cool at all. Andy and Zander have something that not everyone gets - a deep and abiding love. They are lucky they have one another. Thank you again for reading this entry in Andy’s journal, and for your comments.
  4. I am so glad you are enjoying this. This was a hard chapter in many ways, yet it is good for Andy to work through some of the hurt he has endured.
  5. You are most welcome. I am glad you liked getting to see how Andy is becoming himself more, even as he deals with the wreckage of his past.
  6. @Higster: Yes. Andy and Zander have revealed to one another who they really are, and who they really love. And in this perfect moment, Andy perhaps believes something truly good will happen to him.
  7. I liked this feature, Dodger. You speak so easily about some of the things that are quite difficult for others to say clearly. Writing a story where the main character is not a sympathetic person can be very trying. Thanks for writing this.
  8. Thank you. Summer stargazing is one of my favorite things. Glad you liked these.
  9. I am glad these inspired and made you smile. I love your response verse! Stars and constellations are some of the greatest delights of any time. Thank you, my friend.
  10. Thank you, tim. Some constellations are old friends; all one needs is a glimpse of a few points of light to know they are shining there. Kind of like some wonderful people I know, too... xxoo. p
  11. I am deeply grateful you took the time to read these. I am doubly happy you found some of them resonant in memory. Your kind words are a balm, a blue sky, a melody of birdsong. Thank you.
  12. And Andy very nearly expected things to go wrong, as if life was going along too well. But while it was horrible, at least Andy is alive and safe. Whether he will ever manage to emerge from his hurt is another matter. Thank you for continuing to read the story and for your reactions.
  13. Parker Owens

    Chapter 1

    Thank you so very much for your kind comment. Even more, thanks for reading this short story. I enjoyed writing it, and hoped the end would be a nice surprise.
  14. I, too am partial to the night sky. I am glad that particular line connected with you.
  15. Thank you. I am happy you read these.
  16. I spied your stars rising high in the southern sky; a constellation promising and bright; they say you are loyal and generous, a sexy lover, too; but they forgot your smile. Do you anticipate that sweet, strong, tight embrace where warmth meets warmth and hearts beat swift as one? Await with me that transcendent moment when parts join exactly with our voices in tune. Smudged prints on the mi
  17. Poor Andy can hide, but not from Terry. She is very persistent, like Ambrose. If he feels uncovered, exposed, Andy could run again, despite the good place he seems to be in. Thank you for your thoughts and comments, and for reading the journal.
  18. Oh, I love how this ended. You wrote an awesome final chapter. Wonderful that Jimmy walked all that way, because he had to. Thank you for this story.
  19. But the important thing is that Andy - as he calls himself now - decided to stay in Blackburn and try school. Somewhere on the road between Carlsberg and Blackburn, he began developing into someone he might not have recognized: himself. Eustace may have had a fair bit to do with that. You’re right that Andy has hazards ahead of him. He may have to run yet. Thanks for your thoughts and for reading the journal.
  20. Parker Owens

    All Your Ducks

    You write the pain so brutally well. I feel the sadness and emptiness so clearly. Derek is full of hurt and memory; a difficult combination. Your tone is full of love and understanding for this man. You made me weep. Beautiful.
  21. Parker Owens

    Plain Luck

    Back to being a nomad, indeed. Eric doesn’t trust anyone enough to reveal the truth about himself, even though Eustace might have been understanding. But Ambrose would have been a whole different matter. Thank you for continuing to read the journal and for your comments.
  22. Parker Owens

    Quiet Days

    Toby and Eric at least reconnected. You’re right that he will always get nervous about slipping up - too many bad memories to do otherwise. But at least Eric is eating at safe. The farm has been good to him. Thanks so much for your comments and thoughts.
  23. Parker Owens

    Work

    This is a hugely good thing to happen to Eric. He has shelter, work, and even a bit of food. Perhaps he can rest and recover a little. Thanks so much for your comments and for reading the journal.
  24. Parker Owens

    Roger

    No, Eric really came up luckier than some - he escaped, and he did not end up being sold to other truckers. He is still on the run and scared, but he remains free. Thanks again for commenting and for reading.
  25. Parker Owens

    Splash

    These are unfortunately the common episodes to kids who live on the street, who are wandering. The police suspected Stephan / Eric, and it would not have been hard to pin the murder on him. Prison might have been far worse than his current life. Thank you for your comments and for continuing to read the journal.
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