You made my evening when I saw this. You divined my meaning perfectly in the first, and in the third. And you seemed to hear, as I did, a kind of harmony in the second. Thank you for reading this set, and for your thoughts.
You speak strong words against your adversary. I know him, too. I shall be glad of your light which pushes darkness into retreat, and your poetry which sounds melody against the noise of hurt.
@Higster: Justice indeed. Mrs. Chandler and FPS were thoroughly put in their place. Andy was lucky to have the Stevensons as his family, and Heidi Graber to dismantle the hapless FPS lawyer. Thanks for reading and commenting.
No, Greg wasn’t hiding it much. But outing someone else in a fit of pique is not cool at all. Andy and Zander have something that not everyone gets - a deep and abiding love. They are lucky they have one another. Thank you again for reading this entry in Andy’s journal, and for your comments.
@Higster: Yes. Andy and Zander have revealed to one another who they really are, and who they really love. And in this perfect moment, Andy perhaps believes something truly good will happen to him.
I liked this feature, Dodger. You speak so easily about some of the things that are quite difficult for others to say clearly. Writing a story where the main character is not a sympathetic person can be very trying. Thanks for writing this.
I am glad these inspired and made you smile. I love your response verse! Stars and constellations are some of the greatest delights of any time. Thank you, my friend.
Thank you, tim. Some constellations are old friends; all one needs is a glimpse of a few points of light to know they are shining there. Kind of like some wonderful people I know, too... xxoo. p
I am deeply grateful you took the time to read these. I am doubly happy you found some of them resonant in memory. Your kind words are a balm, a blue sky, a melody of birdsong. Thank you.
And Andy very nearly expected things to go wrong, as if life was going along too well. But while it was horrible, at least Andy is alive and safe. Whether he will ever manage to emerge from his hurt is another matter. Thank you for continuing to read the story and for your reactions.
Thank you so very much for your kind comment. Even more, thanks for reading this short story. I enjoyed writing it, and hoped the end would be a nice surprise.
I spied
your stars rising
high in the southern sky;
a constellation promising
and bright;
they say
you are loyal and generous,
a sexy lover, too;
but they forgot
your smile.
Do you
anticipate
that sweet, strong, tight embrace
where warmth meets warmth and hearts beat swift
as one?
Await
with me that transcendent moment
when parts join exactly
with our voices
in tune.
Smudged prints
on the mi
Poor Andy can hide, but not from Terry. She is very persistent, like Ambrose. If he feels uncovered, exposed, Andy could run again, despite the good place he seems to be in. Thank you for your thoughts and comments, and for reading the journal.
But the important thing is that Andy - as he calls himself now - decided to stay in Blackburn and try school. Somewhere on the road between Carlsberg and Blackburn, he began developing into
someone he might not have recognized: himself. Eustace may have had a fair bit to do with that. You’re right that Andy has hazards ahead of him. He may have to run yet. Thanks for your thoughts and for reading the journal.
You write the pain so brutally well. I feel the sadness and emptiness so clearly. Derek is full of hurt and memory; a difficult combination. Your tone is full of love and understanding for this man. You made me weep. Beautiful.
Back to being a nomad, indeed. Eric doesn’t trust anyone enough to reveal the truth about himself, even though Eustace might have been understanding. But Ambrose would have been a whole different matter. Thank you for continuing to read the journal and for your comments.
Toby and Eric at least reconnected. You’re right that he will always get nervous about slipping up - too many bad memories to do otherwise. But at least Eric is eating at safe. The farm has been good to him. Thanks so much for your comments and thoughts.