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Eric's retreat to the farm is a big step in his growth. Yes, the smash up with redhead was predictable, but precisely because Eric is not at all comfortable in in his own skin with anyone, and can't read the danger signs. Eric's relationship to Eustace was fun to write about. Hope it will be as enjoyable to read...Thanks so much for reviewing!
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The redhead might once have had a thing with Maddie - it's not clear (says the author). They certainly appear to have diverging views...Eric will be okay with hanging out at the farm for a while. And alcohol? Yeah, he's definitely learned something there.
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What is good is that Eric felt safe going back to the farm. Eric doesn't trust anyone, or confide in anyone except his journal. But he feels safe with Eustace, and that's a huge step.
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Yes, it seems that Eric is damned for being straight and damned for being gay. But look beyond that a moment. For the first time, he had someplace he felt safe in retreating to when things went badly. And while Eustace misread the situation, he treated Eric's cuts and kept him on. And Eric isn't going to blame Toby for what happened, even though it's doubtful he'll be able to be open to him. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter!
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July Fourth. Independence Day. That means parades, celebrations, fireworks. It means cookouts and parties and bonfires. My friends noticed that I'd been a freaking hermit since school got out. They hounded me with texts and calls all through the month of June. Didn't I want to go out on a day trip to the beach with everyone? Didn't I want to go to a friend's graduation party? Didn't I want to double date to the movies? No, no, and no. I'd be expected to pair off. To have a girl. To pretend.
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Thank you. It was very kind of you to review this. Tim has been pushing me and inspiring me; I'm no poet. This was a very long time coming.
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Stark, cold realization sets in. Now what? He has to learn to live, no? Wonder haw that will play out....nice chapter, especially from the internet angle. Well done. Hoping for more?
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Asshat? What is that in Swedish? What we've seen of Toby doesn't look that way to Eric. Ambrose is another matter. He's glad that Eustace has some help. And it really is fun to watch Eric begin to explore becoming himself. I'm really grateful for your perceptive comments and reviews. Thank you.
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Chapter 21 Poetry Prompt 15- Loyalty
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 21 Poetry Prompt 15- Loyalty
The hurt, the betrayal, the disloyalty are all beautifully painted. Nothing wrong with this. You can deviate from the plan any time you like. -
Flashback time. And what a rotten time it seems to be for Craig. Poor guy. Things weren't going well before the end of the world...ugh.
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Week Five Thursday October 2, 2014: The Beginning
Parker Owens commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Five Thursday October 2, 2014: The Beginning
You have successfully painted the picture of emptiness and pain that those who are bereft may feel. The church service and funeral were gracefully described. What a way to learn your good friend - now dead - had a crush on you; from the brother. Meditation certainly might help, but David has got to be messed up about this - and it's good to see him beginning to wrestle with it. Not sure what to make of the spirit connection made between Twoey and David. Having something to do for Twoey will be good for David though, as long as Twoey will allow it, and if David doesn't blame Twoey for Danny's death. And as long as the mom is good about it, but right now she seems onside. Excellent chapter. Want more! -
And we got to see a side of Eric that was only partially exposed earlier. He's a little competitive, I think. Eric is clearly nervous about the day to come.
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I am sniffing around the bait. It looks good. Seems interesting....is there more, perhaps?
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I am glad you liked this chapter. I found it easy to draft, but very hard to hone into the shape I wanted. I suspect Eric's arms and back and hands ache, the walk down to Andersonville was enough exercise for Sunday. Count on caution from Eric - though saying yes to Toby was a huge step for him, you could tell.
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Episode 12 - Reunion Part II
Parker Owens commented on Cynus's story chapter in Episode 12 - Reunion Part II
So much in this, it needs another reading. Or two. But the richness of the background and the tragedy of all this killing and blood - I'm attached to these characters, and very sad to see them die. That said, it's a well written and riveting chapter. Thank you. Now to do my self-assigned re-reading.... -
Chapter 15 Going Straight
Parker Owens commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 15 Going Straight
Don't agree the story is stalled, but like ice growing on a Canadian pond, it gains form and definition in lots of different places - slowly, slowly, around the margins, and then suddenly, it;'s there. I suspect this story is kind of like that. I liked the skating scenes, especially. Very interested in the Daniel - Robbie interactions. Wonder where that's headed. But Robbie is making a mistake with Fran; who's there to tell him so? Poor kid, the answer is 'nobody.' Another interesting developmental chapter. Will keep watching for more. Thank you. -
Chapter 14 Is this Nathan?
Parker Owens commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 14 Is this Nathan?
Poor Robbie. Heart being vectored in two directions, plus the girl who wants in. And then, there are other undercurrents that could be even more difficult fro Robbie to navigate. What's an outsider Brit to do? Eh? Great chapter. Please, sir, can we have some more...? -
July 3 - Sunday Sunday, day of rest. I am so glad that Eustace Whitley believes in God, because I am as tired and worn out as an old pair of shoes. Kind of like my old sneakers, in fact. I got to meet Ambrose Whitley and his family this weekend. Ambrose is a stockier, broader version of Eustace, with thinning red hair and bright blue eyes. He grinned at me when he shook my hand Friday evening before I brought the flock up from the lower meadow. “So you signed on as the summer help? Lucky
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Week Five Wednesday October 1, 2014: Meeting Dad
Parker Owens commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Five Wednesday October 1, 2014: Meeting Dad
Well done, David. He had the guts to actually walk over to Twoey's house and ask, which none of his other friends did. The man at the door - Twoey's presumptive father - is possibly better than he appeared at first, but first impressions weren't good here. David certainly has more to stew about. And one wonders whether the father will hang around for much longer, or whether he'll wash his hands of the whole mess if Twoey regains consciousness. Nice to see David eating again, and cooking! Well, now, there's a dream. -
You are most kind to review this. Funny how just one tree can light up a hillside, but a whole landscape full of them looks so very different.
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Thanks for the very kind review. Poetry is fun, but slow work for me. Doggerel is different...
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Tim will tell you I was scared to share it. LPW is fun, but this was more serious. Very glad you liked it.
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Thank you, Tim, for your encouragement, your kindness and your thoughts. You inspired this. A sunny hill side begged for a tiny bit of notoriety, and your example kind of made it happen.
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One orange tree: autumn's lone surviving blaze of maple, splashed like paint on a sea of brown, A vandal's mark on bleak November's hillside. How long until all Polaris' mighty arms sweep away the Sun's last lonely sentinels? It is their doom, and mine, I now contemplate. And I am lost.
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Fitful, occasional contributions to a poetry collection.
