terrywhitt

If you were to never conclude this story, I would be happy. I know these people. Not one of them is perfect all the time, but yes, sometime.

I have enjoyed all your characters throughout the series of tales. Chippers story was a good read. I pulled up several of the mentioned songs to listen too.. Neil Diamond has been singing all afternoon. Thanks for writing for us.

Really liking the whole tale. Thanks.

I have gotten hooked into this story. I wasn’t sure at the beginning. Now I really want more of the tale.

There is a seamless transition from Dom Luka’s writing to your own. The direction you are taking the story seems exactly correct. I look forward to more chapters.

I appreciate the thought processes as you wrote the story. Very interesting to me. You definitely picked the correct ending. None of the others would have made me happy.

You have a lot more story to tell us. Interesting characters, I like dissecting their thinking as I read. Thanks for writing. Thanks for continuing. Gotta know what’s going to happen.

I wish there was a better vocabulary for non-traditional identities.

I had to put down my iPad and walk away for awhile when Miss Ann Thrope grabbed and sliced Sylvan’s balls with her nails. I had to stop reading again when she attacked him with the whirling cutting club. I knew he would somehow get in control but it sure looked iffy at that point. Such relief by the end of the chapter.

The future looks pretty exciting

I am imagining how this new ‘race’ of individuals will change over time to be the same as the humans. Could they really stay pure in thought and action? “Utopians”. That was the name for our high school graduating class. We thought we were pretty special. I do look forward to the further adventures of our friends. Thanks for writing.

I really like Mort as the protagonist in your tale. Such a smart fellow to be able to learn so much from life and his mentors. It is sad that he loses the important people in his life. I look forward to finding out how he will be relieved of Perdita. She is surely a terrible person.

Oh man, I thought we had him for sure.

'Sebastian Sanspere'. I really got into that story. I hesitated to read 'Dome" because it sounded a little brutal by the description. I have just begun reading it, not even finishing the first chapter, and I am hooked. So off I go to see what Rigby Taylor can do.

I'm really liking this entire story. Thanks for writing it for us.