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    If you were to never conclude this story, I would be happy. I know these people. Not one of them is perfect all the time, but yes, sometime.
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    The Winner

    terrywhitt commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in The Winner

    I have enjoyed all your characters throughout the series of tales. Chippers story was a good read. I pulled up several of the mentioned songs to listen too.. Neil Diamond has been singing all afternoon. Thanks for writing for us.
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    Chapter 29

    terrywhitt commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 29

    Really liking the whole tale. Thanks.
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    I have gotten hooked into this story. I wasn’t sure at the beginning. Now I really want more of the tale.
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    There is a seamless transition from Dom Luka’s writing to your own. The direction you are taking the story seems exactly correct. I look forward to more chapters.
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    Afterword

    terrywhitt commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Afterword

    I appreciate the thought processes as you wrote the story. Very interesting to me. You definitely picked the correct ending. None of the others would have made me happy.
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    Chapter 5

    terrywhitt commented on oat327's story chapter in Chapter 5

    You have a lot more story to tell us. Interesting characters, I like dissecting their thinking as I read. Thanks for writing. Thanks for continuing. Gotta know what’s going to happen.
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    A Twist of Kim

    terrywhitt commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in A Twist of Kim

    I wish there was a better vocabulary for non-traditional identities.
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    I had to put down my iPad and walk away for awhile when Miss Ann Thrope grabbed and sliced Sylvan’s balls with her nails. I had to stop reading again when she attacked him with the whirling cutting club. I knew he would somehow get in control but it sure looked iffy at that point. Such relief by the end of the chapter.
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    The future looks pretty exciting
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    I am imagining how this new ‘race’ of individuals will change over time to be the same as the humans. Could they really stay pure in thought and action? “Utopians”. That was the name for our high school graduating class. We thought we were pretty special. I do look forward to the further adventures of our friends. Thanks for writing.
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    Elbert

    terrywhitt commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Elbert

    I really like Mort as the protagonist in your tale. Such a smart fellow to be able to learn so much from life and his mentors. It is sad that he loses the important people in his life. I look forward to finding out how he will be relieved of Perdita. She is surely a terrible person.
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    Oh man, I thought we had him for sure.
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    'Sebastian Sanspere'. I really got into that story. I hesitated to read 'Dome" because it sounded a little brutal by the description. I have just begun reading it, not even finishing the first chapter, and I am hooked. So off I go to see what Rigby Taylor can do.
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    I'm really liking this entire story. Thanks for writing it for us.
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    Good beginning. I look forward to the tale. One has to be careful around demon rum.I was smiling at the end of the chapter.
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    Chapter 22

    terrywhitt commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 22

    it's getting excitier and excitier. Or nervousey about the future.
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    Chapter 20

    terrywhitt commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 20

    I was pretty sure that the tranquility of chapter 19 wouldn’t survive into chapter 20. What a dastardly bunch of people messing with our heroes. Let’s find them.
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    Wow! What comes next? This is serious business.
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    Reality Check

    terrywhitt commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Reality Check

    It's going to be interesting going forward.
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    I have been following the story forever. I certainly have been remiss in telling you, though. I would hate not having the final chapters. Thanks for your writing. Terry
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    I have to keep reading because I need to know how you are going to deal with cowardly Nix. I can find no good excuses for him to not get more involved in stopping the torture of Spencer. Grrr! And I certainly cannot excuse Riley and Dexter for any underlying reason they have from their past. Jeez! I'm surprised he is still alive.
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    Grab Bag!

    terrywhitt commented on Lugh's blog entry in Gay Authors News

    Hi Mark, I appreciate the interview. It's nice to get your background. Makes the reading of your stories even better.
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    You sure tied up a lot of loose ends with chapter 99. I'm not ready to let this story end, just so you know. Thanks for the good read. Terry
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    I look forward to each chapter. Thanks for writing for us. I want more. I'll go back and check out your other stories now. T
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