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This was a interesting relationship between Seth and Hayden the phone is Hayden’s way to have sex without actually having sex with him.

Great chapter. It seems like Jamie and Ricky are getting very close to doing things other than just making out with each other.

I have a feeling that Edwin may not be able to keep his secret for long especially after telling the class about going to Holyrood. I like how his aunt was teasing him at breakfast about his Baronet title. I hope he gets to deal with the bullies and put them in their place where they aren’t going to be causing him any trouble.

Going back and rereading this story is fun to me, I have to say that I have laughed at things in the past two chapters and I knew I had to tell you that I am enjoying rereading the story. Once Christian was feeling more like himself Erik helped him out of bed and into the bathroom and then shaved his face so that he was at least presentable for Ella. Even though I’ve read the story before doesn’t mean I can’t enjoy it more than I did before. Thank you for the exceptional story, I know that you work hard to produce the great stories that you write. I just wanted to say thank you.

I’m glad that Sadie finally got up the nerve to come out to San Francisco to see what it’s like to be free of the church’s keeping you from really living as full a life as you can. I’m glad that she and Adam have finally been able to get the past behind them and they’re both free to be who they are. I think it’ll be good for her to live in the same place as Artie and Adam especially with as close as she and Artie are. I’m also glad that there were witnesses to the reconciliation between Sadie and Adam. I hope this is the step they all needed in order to move forward with a clean slate.

I’m glad that Edwin enjoyed the trip to the UK with Lord Lindsay his 2nd cousin, the 2nd day in Scotland Robert took Edwin to Holyrood but kept him in the dark as to his reasons why they were there. During a ceremony the queen awarded Edwin the Baronet of Wigan, so that he would have a title as well. After some sightseeing of former family owned property, they came across one that was in the process of getting ready to go up for sale. After the tour Robert and Edwin stopped at the real estate office, while Robert took care of his business there Edwin went to a museum and a zoo before getting a text from Robert that said for them to meet at the train station in 15 minutes. After leaving there they went to see a nephew of Roberts and his family where they spent the night and then left for Zurich where they spent just over 2 days before Edwin was due to fly back to Australia. When he got back his aunt said she had received a call from Robert saying that she was supposed to ask about his visit to a special place in Edinburgh. When he retrieved the case his ribbon was in his mum was asking what it was when he handed it to his aunt she opened it and knew right away what it was, she asked 2 questions to which he replied yes. His mum was still asking what it meant aunt Bea told her that on formal occasions she was to introduce him as Sir Edwin Crawford, BT, still not understanding what it meant she was told that the BT was his title as Baronet of Wigan. When aunt Bea said that they should get your honourable son home, his mom realizes that something was said about Holyrood, she then started to say that, that it was the summer home of the queen only she stopped short of finishing her statement. This was a very excellent chapter, I’m sure that Edwin will have a lot more that 3500 words on his essay assignment for school that is due shortly after starting the new term. I can’t wait to read how that goes and if he reveals his title or not.

What a great chapter. The work that Zion did on the pool house turned out great Brett and Caesar loved it. Zion now has the contract to do the main house. This was a great way to get to know what the group has been doing since the first story was put out.

The preacher is smarter than Don and that makes him very dangerous when it comes to Robbie. Robbie needs to just be himself and not what someone wants him to be. Great chapter and story I’ve been enjoying it since the beginning.

Daniel may be the way he is because of Don, we’ll just have to wait for a little while to see if it’s true. I think he’s trying to maintain the status quo that previously existed but no longer does. It’s not Nathan’s fault that there are drugs in Cobourg he’s just become the pawn in the whole matter.

Fantastic chapter, very enjoyable especially when Trey took Doby & Flash to the dog park. It seemed like they enjoyed the time as well since they were able to be around other dogs for a change. The Texas group seems to be having a great time with Brandon’s parents going to Six Flags over Texas would be a great amount of fun if I were about 30 years younger and in better health and shape. The trip to Hershey Park for the weekend sounds great as well especially since I haven’t been to either place before. Noah has just learned that Holly only thinks of him as a brother and she might already have a boyfriend. To bad Josh isn’t sticking around so that he and Jake could have a weekend together since Josh has been away visiting his boys that he adopted after being their foster dad when they were young boys.

I will say that I believe that Edwin will have the best essay about his family all thanks to the help he’s getting from his cousin. So far he’s traveled from his home in Tasmania to Scotland and is now a guest in the house of the 26th Earl of Crawford. I have a feeling that Edwin is really going to enjoy this 2 weeks even though he’s going to be working on his assignment he’s also going to get to see other places his family owned in the past along with hearing about the stories that are told about them. The more I read the more I want to read, this is quite an interesting story and can only get better with each new chapter you post. I love your way of writing the stories that I have read as each one is written in a different way depending on the story line which only draws me into the story.

I would very much like to see this become a very large canvas. As it’s already been said there are so many loose ends for it to end here, as far as polishing and publishing I think it would be a great way to get the story out to a whole new audience. I just finished reading the whole 52 chapters again and I have very much enjoyed it as much if not more than the 1st time. If I didn’t say it before I want to say that you have an interesting way of telling the story that changes when Kieran goes on the trip to Alice Springs. The realms had so much going on I think I would have a hard time getting anything accomplished because I’d be too busy trying things and going to somewhere I haven’t been already. Thank you for the great opportunity to read this fantastic story.

I think it’s great that the Earl traveled from Scotland after he invited Edwin to come visit him so that he wasn’t traveling alone on the international trip. I think the best thing to happen was that the Earl picked Edwin up at school and then took him home so he could meet his mum and see his aunt again after many years. Once James found out about the school assignment he said they would have many sit downs and then Edwin showed him the box of documents that auntie Bea had held onto did in fact prove that he was the owner of North Rona Island. This trip is going to be very exciting for Edwin as he will get to know his cousin and possibly other family members as well.

Sorry I got confused with the name.

This was a great start to the story of a 16 year old boy who was given an assignment for history in school. Upon arriving home he told his aunt about his assignment and then he went up to his room to change out of his school uniform, when he came back down his aunt and mum were in the kitchen talking as his mum was pulling a cake out of the oven. She said that his aunt had mentioned the assignment, at that point he told her all about the assignment she said that there wasn’t much to say about her family. Then things get very interesting for James. I look forward to reading this story as it unfolds.

We all knew Nalbo was a sleaze bucket, the amount of cameras that were found in the house, pool house and guest quarters was overkill in my mind. The only need for that many cameras was for blackmail of his guests and his way of making young artists to sign with him for recording contracts. I’m glad that Caesar & Brett had them removed, their offer to let Chipper the use of the house rent free was a smart move in that way there is someone living there instead of it sitting empty which would only spell trouble. Great chapter, Malibu sounds like a fantastic place to be.

Interesting chapter, the proposal of Helga to the people of Makarovia will now be to have them accept her as their queen since she is married to the king. The confrontation that Eric hoped would take place did so in a different way than any of them expected. Klaus came to the palace to get Olek to take the recording off the website and allow him to get back to his life. Only he didn’t expect to have Eric and Peter tell him that he was no longer a citizen of Makarovia and that they had heard the tapes and asked if anything had been omitted or added to the conversation and he said no to both. They also informed him that the services he was getting at his house provided by Tysa or Makarovia were being cut off and he could keep his house although it would now be a part of Romania and he would be Romanian. I think the confrontation went well even though Klaus had gotten past security and into the private family quarters in an attempt to get to Olek, which I hope didn’t happen.

Interesting start to the story. I’m down for a good old fashioned neighborhood fireworks competition and a friendly barbecue. It’s always good to have great neighbors and they become friends and then family. I can’t wait to see what happens the rest of the night between Josh and Salvie, do they kiss or not? That’s just a question I hope to find out in the next chapter or two. I kind of understand where he’s coming from about moving a lot since his dad’s in the army, my dad was as well and we moved a few times although we always had a place to return to since both grandparents were in our home town.

Interesting way to end the story, it would be nice to see a second book or something similar with the same characters. The reception Jexon got on his 3rd visit to the airbase and the Marble Bar clinic by the civilian contractors who were hired by the army to keep people out of the base and the army training areas wasn’t very good. They should have been told that the airbase was privately owned and that the owner was a reservist who might be flying in from time to time. The way that Marcus proposed was very interesting especially when they were in the middle of a training flight since Jexon was teaching him to fly so that there would be 2 pilots to go to the different stations since it was getting harder to find enough time to get to all of them on a regular basis while also going to Marble Bar once a week to hold clinic there. Thanks for the great story, I’ve enjoyed every chapter of it.

I’m glad that things are going so well for Artie and Dizzy especially after Artie told Charlotte he was in love with him. Then they get home from school and find a surprise person waiting for Artie, Sadie actually did what she said and showed up at Adams house like she told Artie she would. I hope that after he gets done crushing her with hugs he’ll get around to introducing her to his friends and boyfriend. This could be a very interesting visit.

I’m glad that the comments were made saying that this is your story to tell any way you want to tell it. Eric has been through alot in his short life losing his father grandfather and mother and having to deal with not only their illness but their deaths as well. I’ve been through some things with hospice as well and I don’t have a lot of respect for them because of what I’ve seen. I just got done reading this chapter and I had kind of a hard time following what was going on, then I would just go back a little bit and reread that part then I figured out what was going on. I hope the revelation of the tapes from the meetings with Olek will be enough of a deterrent for Klaus Ordan to keep his mouth shut if he wants to continue to live in Makarovia. I always look forward to reading the latest chapter for the story that way I’m up to date with what’s going on with the characters.

Jexon’s running around like crazy and then he forgets to pickup Marcus which had him upset as well as Auggie. This business with the cattle is getting busier especially after he found out that the cattle truck was the source of the Leptospirosis, he told the driver that he was not allowed to return to WA for a period of 14 days and he needed to clean his truck inside and out which made the driver mad. After the call from Marcus it was decided that he would wait until tomorrow afternoon to have Jex pick him up and then fly back to Kununurra. The 2 station hands weren’t aware of what had transpired in regard to the station. Another thing on Jexon’s list.

Chapter 57 & 58 are the same chapter.

To me it seems like mom is trying to control his life even now that he’s told her that the divorce papers were already signed. I hope he doesn’t give up his control over his life to her again.

It looks like Jexon’s life just got a lot busier now that he’s the new District Veterinary Officer after he reported the outbreak of Leptospirosis. Jexon’s family is moving again after purchasing 3 other cattle stations with his uncle being the Station’s Operations Manager and Jexon’s mum is the General Manager.