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  1. Butcher56

    Harlan

    I wonder how this is going to go between Gary and his son Harlan, they haven’t spoken in a long time because Gary couldn’t deal with Harlan being bisexual. The only thing that brought him back to California was the fact that Gary was recently diagnosed with leukemia. I’m glad that Harlan is staying at the Refuge because they all know Gary because of his business and he gets cups and other things that Elias makes in the potters studio (or cabin) which Gary sells from his store and he gives $12.00 to Elias for every one he sells. I liked the part where he had just got a dozen cups from Elias that Mason dropped off yesterday and he only had a few left from that bunch. Even though Elias wasn’t able to emancipate he still gets to stay with Orson because the judge allowed Orson to be the legal guardian for Elias which he is thrilled about. Now Orson has a great guy who is a police officer himself and they met when he and his partner came to the campground to pickup Elias so he could tell them what had happened to him before he took off from his mom’s apartment. I’m glad that neither Danny nor Elias’ mom will be able to do anything to him for a long time do to Danny getting arrested for a probation violation and his mom getting arrested for drug possession. Once the new charges are set for them they’re going to have a long vacation in a 6 x 9 room with bars for a door.
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    The Law

    I’m glad that the local police department knows of Clay and Orson, especially Orson after he saved the lady during the shooting he and Clay were in when the bank robbers started shooting. The lady turned out to be a council member and thanks to Orson she survived, even though he lost his leg after getting hit by a bullet he still did what he needed to do. I hope that with the information that Elias has to give to the police they can do a lot more investigation into his mom and Danny and Danny can get more charges against him for his assault on Elias. Then Elias can seek emancipation from his mom and be able to stay with Orson at the campground. I’m sure that he would be very happy there with Orson.
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    Trouble

    I have a feeling that Elias is going to be in need of help very soon since his mother brought Danny back to their apartment. Danny is going to be in desperate need of help after Orson gets ahold of him if he hurts Elias at all, or if he does anything to him sexually. I’m sure the local police department will also have to get involved and Elias will be needing some where to live.
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    Christmas Eve

    Awesome start to the story. It’s great to read about CJ, OZ and Liebe again along with the Liston family. Between Christmas and the wedding I think the families are going to be extremely busy for a little while, at least until the wedding is over. At 8 months of age Liebe is talking with a few words and she doesn’t say dad or daddy.
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    Honorbound

    I agree with you wholeheartedly, I think the wall is a waste of money and resources that could be used elsewhere. I don’t think our president really has any idea what the people that are desperate to come to this country for whatever reason will do to get over here. I just saw on the news last night how these two people put a ladder up on the wall and then climbed over the top and slid down the other side. To me it’s just another expense that we as a country can afford to build and maintain.
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    Chapter 25

    It appears that Max is having trouble with the fact that Issac is in the wheelchair. Even though he said he still considered him a best friend, he has to get to a point where he can honestly say that he’s willing to help him with anything he needs. I hope that Max figures things out soon and then they could hang out together and with his other friends, even though Issac isn’t able to go rock climbing as he’s in the wheelchair that doesn’t mean that they can’t do other things. Issac shouldn’t call himself a cripple because he’s only putting himself down by doing so, instead he should say that he’s mobibly challenged.
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    Someone to Miss

    This chapter reminded me of a guy I know that lived a few blocks from me before I moved to stay in my sisters house because she works out of state and is only home for about 6 weeks a year. Any way back to what I was going to say, this guy was always having sex with someone and I hadn’t seen him around for about 2 months and then I saw him again and found out that he was diagnosed with HIV and then he was diagnosed with AIDS. The last time I saw him he was drunk and causing a huge disturbance because he was told he couldn’t be served because he was already drunk. My son tells me he sees him from time to time and he looked like a walking skeleton the last time he saw him. I have nothing against him except that he tries to push himself on you and it’s worse when he’s drinking which is everyday,some days are better than others. I think his drinking just makes his problems worse, I’ve seen people ask him to stop coming into their business and I overheard one person telling him that he wasn’t welcome to come back because he has AIDS. I feel bad for him but I don’t want to be around a drunk, he’s one of those mean drunks and when he’s not drinking he’s trying to get some guy to sleep with him.
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    Pride

    I’ve been reading the comments about this chapter and I have to say that I wasn’t aware that any of the things stated about the treatment of a so called cure for the disease of LGBTQ people. I have been seeing a commercial about a baby who was denied health insurance because he had 2 moms, it states towards the end that in 30 states it is legal to fire, evict and one or two more things just because they’re LGBTQ, this country allows for them to get married but yet they face discrimination because of who they are. I hope that some time soon the so called lawmakers will get their heads out of the sand and start doing some things that will help them with their lives and their families as well. I’m proud to say that in Colorado we elected the first openly gay man to be the governor, this is my home state. I’m glad that Greg opened up to Mason about the ordeal he went through after he came out to his mother, he even kept the confidence of Greg when Clay asked what they talked about and Mason told him that was privileged information between him and Greg.
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    The Red Knight

    Great chapter, a lot of work has already been done and they have more to do in order to open up to the public. Mason goes to see the guy who called him back about the offer for the clients of the Raven Project, he becomes really infatuated with Jeremy. When they all get back to the campground Mason goes to put the guitar away and realizes that he has a hard on for Jeremy. I hope things work out for the Raven Project as well as Greg since the whole place was his idea.
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    Clay

    What an interesting way to start the story. Greg knew that he needed to get out of Alabama so he found out about the campgrounds was for sale and he could get it for his price. He got out to California and started working on the campground, he had a lot to do because it was very run down and covered with weeds, briars and vines. His original plan was to get the tent areas done and then he got a call from his old partner on the police force asking him if he could possibly have his son Mason come stay with him for the summer since he just graduated from high school and he would have a lot of trouble if he stayed home because he’s not hiding the fact that he’s gay. Greg told Clay that they were both welcome anytime, they planned to fly out to California the next week. The fact that Mason knows that Greg is gay may hurt their friendship but he doesn’t know what his dad is doing inside his cabin with Greg. I’m interested to see what happens next for the guys, if Mason is going to stick around and work as planned or not and also what Clay decides to do now that Greg knows that he might be interested in starting a relationship with him.
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    Chapter 21

    This was a truly fantastic story from beginning to the end, I literally had no idea that Charles Harris was the bad guy even though he worked for the FBI. I’m glad that Corbin and Paul made it through alive even though Corbin did shoot himself and in the process he shot Harris and killed him. Since he’s now the Don of his little mafioso family and going legit means that even though he’s the boss there won’t be any non legal things happening. I hope that he continues to be a partner with Karen in the coffee shop as that gives him even more credibility and having a friend in law enforcement doesn’t hurt either. I’m glad that Stefano turned out to be the good guy in the story, along with that is Jenoah who is the son of Stefano and he decided to stay and be with Bruce. The FBI assigned Timothy to be Corbin’s handler who is proud of his new home, hopefully he will continue to see Karen.
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    Chapter 10

    I hope that Corbin is given enough notice that Stefano is on his way to Idaho and his final destination is Hailey and that’s where he is. Corbin and Paul are going to have to get away from there like now if they want to live in peace. Although Corbin has said that he was done running and hiding from Stefano, whatever he is planning to do he better do it quickly before he gets killed him self. This is such an interesting story of friendship and love along with the mafioso after him he needs to be very careful not to be killed.
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    Chapter 3

    After reading this chapter and the comments by the other readers I do believe that Corbin is in the Witness Protection program due to the fact that he mentioned that he had told his handler that he wanted to move to this place he told Corbin he should buy some steel toed boots. Then he meets Paul who’s his neighbor and he’s been learning about cutting and splitting wood from Paul and he’s got a good amount of wood just from the big tree that had fallen close to the house, he even gave Paul half of the wood that they had cut and split. Interesting story so far, and now it’s onto the next chapter.
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    IOR Chapter 20

    Excellent chapter as usual. I’m glad that Kip has decided to face the shark issue head on by going back to the Abrolhos Islands. When he told Joshua he was coming back to the floating city so he could face his nightmares head on once and for all and he was coming on his own barge and research station. Joshua told him that he would send Amanda to meet him with the Silver Cloud so he wouldn’t be alone in case of bad weather. I hope that he is able to get in the water again and he gets over his nightmares so he can continue his work he and Joshua decided to do as a team then once they got to the islands they met with Mr Lloyd and then things got a lot better for them.
  15. I’m glad that Dale has found a friend a friend who is a member of the church his wife goes to. Dale and Rich became friends after spending time at a budget meeting for the church. They had dinner at the home of Rich who is a very good cook and they find that they both like the outdoors and they plan on doing some hiking and they took their last hike of the year in November and then it’s decided that they would go cross country skiing beginning in January. The two men seem to have more in common than just hiking and skiing as well as the meals that Rich plans for them to eat. I’m glad that Dale confided in his grandson his choice of men more than women, this was brought up because of the pressure that his father was putting on him to go into the family business.
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    The Winner

    This was a very excellent story of a young man who has his heart set on a music career and he is encouraged to try out for The Voice in which he has to compete in order to even get on the show. Once he’s named a contestant he has to work hard to use his voice to get his point of the song to the audience not only in the studio but for the people watching at home. He is chosen by Adam Levine as a member of his team which works out really well for Chipper as he makes it all the way to the finals in which he winds up as 1 of the final contestants 2 of the 4 get eliminated very quickly so it comes down to either him or Bliss. I enjoyed the whole story from the beginning and I like the way that Adam says that win or lose Chipper will have a career in music and that they will be working on his first album and then he said that he would be producing the album himself. I think it would be great to have another story about Chipper showing whether his career took off the way he wanted.
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    Chapter 29

    Maynor is going to be shocked when Kieran comes to get Ranevargars pearl. I’m thinking that he might need it when they get to the dead land in order to awaken the dragon from it’s 600 year sleep. Things are about to become more interesting for the group as they get closer to Maynor’s realm because Kieran is the only one that’s going to be able to get through the shields that I’m sure that Maynor is going to have in place since he’s trying to get the High King to give up his crown and submit to Maynor who’s trying to take over the whole realms.
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    Chapter 25.3

    I hope they’re successful in their rescue attempt and they can get past Cheryl before she captures them all.
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    Chapter 46

    Very excellent chapter as usual. I think Boris is going to have a big amount of different menus to use with Peter and Eric after the honeymoon aboard the Duchess, Henri the chef aboard is filling them up with different seafood dishes from many countries. The guys have even joked about taking him home to Boston to assist Boris in the kitchen, myself I don’t think that would go over to well with him. I’m glad that they’re enjoying their honeymoon even though it’s not where they intended to go, I think the fact that they’re on the yacht and they can get to just about anywhere they want to go makes it better than Tel-Aviv any day.
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    Chapter 23

    Since meeting Ranevargar the group has made great progress in the understanding of how the realms of Faerie work and who has the most control over everything that happens there. They’ve also learned that Kieran and Mr B are possibly from the realms as well and that they’re also widderkin which means that their gay in the human world. They’ve also learned that the only way that Rhys could have been brought to the realms is with the High Kings support and power. I think with the help of Ranevargar they might just be able to break free from whoever is trying to control them and remove their memories.
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    Earl Chapter 5

    I’m glad that Tyler asked Mrs Philips to keep his identity a secret as he wanted to have a chance to see the Abbey as a tourist and not be mobbed by the media. Mrs Philips is Uncle Charles housekeeper and after the introduction was made by Charles and Tyler told her that he wanted to keep his identity a secret right now, she told him that she would give him the full tour. The only problem was that two people who worked at the Abbey decided to take it upon themselves to cause trouble for Mrs Philips when Tyler told her to let them handle the couple, she told him who they were and that the husband had been trouble since they were first hired. Any way Charles introduces him to the couple and then Tyler stated loud enough so that the approaching security could hear that they were no longer employed at the abbey or any other property owned by the family. I think that the media will be finding out very soon that he’s not only in the U.K. but he is at the abbey. I hope that he doesn’t get found out until he has a chance to get used to his new home and his heritage as being the 14th Earl of Portland. Fantastic chapter as usual having a great time reading this story.
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    Chapter 17

    Two times in the dead land and poor Tan got injured when the monster came after them, Rhys started to heal him but they had to get moving quickly because there were more monsters out there and they were headed straight to the group. I’m glad that Kieran has the opal as it’s the only real protection they have in the place they wound up in after Rhys was taken from their house. The red glow around them is coming from the opal and it’s their protection for crossing through the walls separating the different areas.
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    Original Song

    This was a very excellent chapter. Chipper must’ve been looking for a fantastic song when he was looking for one that he would perform for the finals, I think he has just sealed his spot in the finale with this song.
  24. It seems that Alex and Jake are getting to be very close to the other one especially after the shower they just took as they were both very excited about the opportunity to see the other one naked. The only set back would be that neither set of parents arrive at the shelter, although I don’t think it would dampen the mood of these two horny teenage boys.
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    IOR Chapter 19

    The research barge was a fantastic gift to Kip from Mr Lloyd as Kip and Flynn are taking the barge up the river so it’s closer to the home station they spotted some tents in their camping area that they use from time to time. Flynn was asked to get the registration information from the vehicles that were parked there while Kip was on the radio trying to find out if anyone had any idea who was camping on their land. The first thing Kip thought of doing after looking at the research barge was to take it up river closer to home.which is what he did once the Ute was driven onto the barge and secured, while Flynn was busy with the Ute Kip tied the barge to the catamaran which is also part of the gift from the Lloyd family company. I have a feeling that the barge is going to be getting a very good workout while Kip recovers from the injuries he got when he was doing a snorkeling swim around one of the islands in the area that they were working on with the government to rebuild the damage done from the cyclone that hit the area. While snorkeling Kip was slammed into the hull of the catamaran that he had decided to check the area out to see how the coral looked in the area only he got slammed around by some sharks and he had been injured quite a bit and while he was recouping at home on the station he started having some nightmares and it was decided he was to go see a doctor for this so he could figure out what they were from. I hope they’re careful when they approach the camping area and the tents that are there.
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