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Great chapter. I agree with Kohen that he’s the designated babysitter for the time being. Sparkles does have a sense of humor, it showed when Deke got Kohen in the lock and as Kohen got out of it Sparkles soaked him with water from the pool she had the eggs in.

Excellent chapter. I hope Artie gets a better grip on his thoughts because if he doesn’t he could have more problems later in life, he needs to do as Char said and vent to her before he gets stuck in his head worrying about everything. I’m glad that he told Adam that they ran into Ezra at the park on their way home from school, Char & Ky were with him and Dizzy. Dizzy is a great character for the story as he brings his personality out and makes everyone around him relax as he does crazy things. I hope Artie does well with this game and the next one so they can get to the playoffs.

Awesome chapter. I agree that the Lloyd Corporation is planning on spending quite a bit of money on this project. I believe from what I just read that the project is going to help the people who are permanent residents on Pitcairn Island to become financially stable again as well as add jobs and better living conditions for the people. I can’t wait to see if the people accept the proposal for the project.

Great chapter. I think Erik & Seth need to figure out how to get the natural hot water from underground so that they can have a good place to go when they are very very sore. I hope that Toby and Thomas get why Erik & Seth are so mad at them, they don’t realize the danger they can get in especially when they were told to stay at the palace in A’dore. I think Erik made the right choice to not speak to or let the boys talk until morning otherwise he’d say something he really shouldn’t say right now. I hope they have a great excuse for not obeying their fathers to stay in A’dore.

Awesome chapter indeed. I’m glad to see more adventures for Trenton and the Lloyd Family Corporation. I like the way Trenton showed the police officer how they arrived at the island.

Fantastic chapter. I don’t like the fact that Robbie hid the incident with Alex from the police when the officer came to take the report of Alex & Luke not coming home. I think he should have let Nicola take the officer out side or out of earshot of Sue and tell him the truth about what Alex did. At least they are going to put out an Amber Alert because of Luke. I think this counselor that Walter set up for Robbie is going to be good for him and maybe get some things done for him so that he can start getting better and maybe not have so many episodes where he blacks out or he gets hurt some how. She seems to be just what he needs right now especially after the dealing he had with Mr Symmonds.

Fantastic chapter. The fight has begun over Artie’s choice of wanting to meet with Ezra for an extra hour before the next evening for the next game of trying to get the team into the playoffs. I hope that Adam & Dizzy see that Artie isn’t all gung ho about up and moving back to Texas with Ezra. Ezra is trying to get to know who his son is and what he’s like after not being around him for 16 years, due to his parents and his own stupidity of not standing up for himself to his parents and going back to Sarah and Artie. I can’t wait to read the next chapter to see how the whole weekend visit will be and if there’s any more hurt feelings between Adam, Artie and Dizzy.

Great chapter. I agree that baseball has been a great distraction for Artie as well as being fun. Now that the team lost the 1st game of their attempts to get into the playoffs Artie is mad at the way the team played today as is Jose. Both of them agreed to work on their parts to make sure they don’t lose anymore games otherwise they miss the chance to get to the playoffs. Artie needs to deal with his part of getting the defense side of the team in line for the next games and not worry about Ezra until after the games, then he can get down to the reason Ezra wants to get to know him now. I think he tries to over think things that bother him and that just makes them worse than they need to be. I’m glad that Adam trusts Artie enough to let him make mistakes that will help him in the future.

Great chapter. I remember those feelings of yearning for more after you got done making love. I still get those feelings after my friend and I get done, although recently it’s been just a quickie as we don’t have the privacy to get into anything more.

Another fantastic chapter. The fight continues in the search for the mysterious Tawa or whoever it is, they were able to get some more information to use as a possible guide for what questions they need to ask and the possible confrontation between them and Tawa. I’m glad that they decided to leave the boys at the castle in A’Dore for their safety that includes prince Edward as well. I hope that they will do a bit of surveillance before going in to confront Tawa. I wish them luck with this new part of the trip.

Excellent chapter and end to the story. I’m glad that they had their lawyers fight the purchase offer to buy the property that has been in the family since the 1980’s and is the home of Madsen Sailing Adventures. The land also includes the home of Matias and his mum. It’s great that they can finally get to do some sailing trips on the yacht to make money for the company in order to help pay their employees. Great story I enjoyed reading it very much, thank you for the story and all of the others you write.

Carlos let me start by saying that I have read and followed the story from the beginning and I was never disappointed with any of it. The story had its ups and downs just like we have in our lives. I think the meeting of CJ to Owen and the subsequent wedding then the birth of Liebe were some of the high points of the story. I feel like I have been a part of the lives of the characters in the story. I’ve ridden with the squad, been there for Brad, Richie is getting ready to enter the Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs, Colorado, which just happens to be my home state. I have been to the AFA a few times and it’s a great facility to visit, the chapel is fantastic to see. I would like to see a sequel to this story to continue with Liebe growing up and to actually read about their moving into their new home after they finished their renovation of it. I’d also like to see what Brett and Caesar wind up doing. I must say that for someone who hasn’t written before you did an excellent job with it, all of the chapters just flowed into the next one, you kept it to the point where it all worked out. I can’t wait to read what you put out next for us to read.

Awesome chapter, to bad it had to end where it did. I was hoping to read whether or not the kayaking along the river went well for guests in the cabins. It was nice to see Lance back in the story.

Fantastic chapter. Charlie brought up some great questions about the intended reason for Kohen’s DNA, how does sparkles fit into the plan? Who’s the new traitor on the crew and who else is involved? I hope that these questions will be answered soon, I just have a feeling that more questions will come out of the answers. I’m really loving the story and look forward to each new chapter of it.

I agree with both droughtquake & Wesley8890 it was better for them both to get it out in the open that way they both understand where the other one is and where they stand. As far as Ezra coming to visit I hope for Artie’s sake that he genuinely wants to have a relationship with him and not try to make things worse than he did before with Artie’s mom after getting her pregnant. I think that if Ezra comes to visit and Artie sees what Adam is talking about that he’ll tell Ezra to go jump in a lake. I’m glad that Adam & Artie came to an understanding and that Adam shows he’s genuinely on Artie’s side and he trusts him to make the best possible decision. Loving the story as it shows the struggles that everyone goes through at times.

Awesome chapter. I hope that the media will leave them alone for awhile so that they can have some privacy as they work on getting the business registered and licensed so they can start the tours. I’m glad that the Headmaster and his wife along with Curtis’ aunt, uncle and cousin were able to come aboard for a short cruise. As it turns out they’re going to Rottnest island to enjoy their dinner. Everyone enjoyed the evening and the dinner which Daniel was able to keep his dinner down due to the fact that he became seasick right after coming aboard the Eldorado. Matias called for a meeting so that he could make a few ideas on staff and his ideas for the cruises along with prices for them, it was decided that Mrs Kingsley would be the media liaison, Mr Kingsley & Mrs Madsen would be the directors since Matias is underage, the skipper & chef have said that they would like staying on long term, while the other crew would have 6 month visas with renewal options if they want to stay on longer.

What a great way to bring in a new life. I truly believe that Liebe is going to be blessed with such a great family who will be there when ever she may need them to be. CJ & Ozzie will be great dads for her. With the squad behind them along with the rest of the family Liebe will not want for anything. The lullaby was a beautiful touch to the end of the chapter. I think you did a great job with the way you made it about the birth of Liebe and her dad's.

I agree it is more likely a child of Eve. I wonder though if there could be a child of Eve and Lilith? The more I read the more I wonder if it's possible the way that this Tawa works and is able to speak through the people who are under his control.

What a great chapter, after all that they have been through with the rough landing and then they find out that the plane was sabotaged. Now that the conditions of the inheritance have been met Matias is now the proud owner of the yacht Eldorado, which is the first one they went on before the sailing trip which was required to get the inheritance. When they arrived in Singapore Curtis was surprised to see his parents standing in the arrivals area waiting for them. I’m glad that Matias has finally gotten something great out of the whole mess they’d been in since arriving in St Petersburg and the crooked immigration police. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Talk about head scratching, that’s what I’m doing now trying to figure out how Aparoe hid sparkles as Kohen calls her on the ship. How does she have his DNA 🧬, is he in any real danger from her? I know these are all good questions that you will answer in time, I just thought of them putting them down helps me remember them.

Another excellent chapter. I agree with droughtquake that a child of Eve could be the one behind all of the attacks and thefts of the gold. I feel like things are just beginning for all of the different regions and it will be a long battle before it's over. I just hope there's not a lot of good people who die because of this mess.

Interesting chapter and story so far. The captain of the yacht seems like a nice enough guy to begin with, although it may change after they get out to sea. It may be a good thing that the bosun did as the captain said in taking Matias & Curtis onto his team. Since they arrived early they got to choose a cabin close to the permanent crew, the one that Kristof put them in was a double cabin, which is one with two bunks while the rest of them are quads. I can’t wait to see how they do on their 14 day sailing excursion so that Matias can get his inheritance.

I hope this isn't the end as it's just getting started with the battle with the demons. I hope that Worthington is able to keep the boys safe and away from the demons. I understand his reluctance to do the ritual on these boys because of their age of 12, also he's trying to get away from the dark side of being a mage.

Another great chapter. I think Jonathan needs to quit holding back especially when it comes to Watts, if he continues the fight the way he did here he’s going to have more trouble than he can stand. I agree that Jonathan does need to find a new place to hide otherwise Watts is going to find him & Jory. I have a feeling that Watts isn’t going to back down and forget about Jonathan until he knows for sure that he’s dead.

Another fantastic chapter. I think the captain just needs to trust Kohen that he isn’t in any danger from the creature that he made a toy that looks like it. I’m glad that Kohen told the captain no hunting.