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I’m glad that Everett is starting to be better with Kohen when it comes to the nightmares. Everett prepares a defense for when he wakes Kohen up from a nightmare. I agree with glennish in that the best course of action would be to make sure that I have another ship before I sell the current one. Great chapter Cia. I hope to see more about Everett and Kohen in future chapters showing what their relationship is like after all of the stuff they went through after Kohen was rescued by Everett and the crew of the ship they’re on right now.

It seems like Ariel and Tyler are going to be together after all. I hope that they can get more time alone and then we’ll see what happens then. Great chapter.

I had a feeling that Simon and Kitryn were going to be mates. Now since the time hadn’t presented itself so Kitryn could tell Simon that they were mates, Kitryn was going to tell him anyway only they were interrupted by a surprised vampire who was looking for Elder Carl it was urgent that he be found immediately. When Simon suggested that they help to find the Elder Kitryn couldn’t deny Simon of the request, Kitryn decided it would be easier if he were in his cat form. When they went to the office where they first met the elder the young vampire said that this was the first place he looked and he wasn’t in there. Simon told him that if Kitryn said he was in there he was, they opened the door and sure enough he was in there. When Elder Carl asked what the meaning was for interrupting him the young vampire stepped forward and said he was sent to find him and that Elder O’Connor had arrived but he was injured and his guard was killed and his mate was taken. It’s going to be interesting to find out who or what attacked the Elder, killed his guard and took his mate. I have a strong suspicion that Simon and Kitryn will be tasked with finding out the reason for the attack and the taking of the mate. Fantastic chapter.❤️❤️😀

Great start to the next installment of Nessa. I’m glad that he is writing the story of what happened 23 years ago and that none of this will be in any history book. Thanks for continuing the story.

First off I’m sorry to read that you were having some health issues and that I’m glad that you’re getting better and are continuing to heal from the health issues. I can not only say first hand I know what it’s like to be dealing with health issues, I’m glad to be healing some due to a couple of procedures although I have a long hard road ahead in order to get better with my health issues. Enough about that now for my comments on this chapter. I’m glad that Nick wasn’t injured more than he was it also think that he was very lucky to have seen the gun when Hannah pulled it out of her purse. That’s when Nick yelled gun which gave the teacher a few extra seconds to push the alert button on her desk and then said “active shooter” which got the SRO (School Resource Officer) to the theater class quicker where he ordered Hannah to drop the gun and she turned and pointed it at him so he had no choice to shoot her first. I’m sure that he’s going to have mixed feelings about the shooting for awhile. After the CPS caseworker came back after Nick was released from the hospital she asked how he was feeling right then, Nick told her the truth about his health and that he was a bit sore from the surgery then she asked him about how things were going with him there living at the Whites home he said that he was really happy there and he was hoping to get back to school soon. Great chapter really enjoying the story and the characters in it, I’m really impressed by the way that Billy and Nick are going with their relationship.

I think that Hannah needs to feel the full weight of the law upon her shoulders and she not have daddy’s money to help her with her legal problems and her parents get brought up on charges as well. I’m glad that the trip to San Antonio and Six Flags Fiesta, Texas was a fun day for the White’s, including Nick in that part as well, Billy, Maddie and Cal, the roller coasters were a big hit for Nick especially when he had never been to an amusement park before, one of many things he had never done or eaten before coming to live with David, Andrew and Noah. I must say that I feel like Nick has done a lot of growing up since he’s come to live with the White family, he’s becoming more of what they saw in him and as he learns to live his life to the fullest and he has had Noah tell him at least twice that he deserves to be happy and he also has every right to be able to see himself be happy. I’m glad that David and Andrew had the thoughts to add motion activated cameras on the front of the house so that way when they’re gone they can be vigilant about their home and property, which turned out to be a great thing since Hannah decided that since they were going to take Nick over her she would do what she did and think nothing about it. Now that Frank Webster decided that the stipulation that he remove Hannah from Westlake and put her in another school that was the deal breaker for him along with the fact that David or Andrew called Nick son and asked him if he had anything to say about the settlement agreement, he was very polite and calm when he started to speak to Mr Webster. Amazing chapter the cliffhanger was a shocker so I guess I better get to the next chapter to see if Hannah does anything with the gun she brought with her to school and in to the class room.

I hope that Noah has a way to get Hannah out of his life for good because when they were in his room she was showing her true colors, she won’t be happy until she has Noah cowering under her thumb begging for her to give him some time to be with his friends and family and hopefully that will include Nick as a real brother instead of just a foster brother. The way she was going was that she had to be number one in his life and do only as she says or something will be done to make him comply with whatever she wants and only what she wants. I’m glad that Nick is there for Noah the way he has been for Nick. The more time they spend together the stronger the bond between them increases which is a good thing.

I have to say that the surprise visit from CPS and Mrs C. went very well and the caseworker had nothing but good things to say about how it seems to be going so far and was smiling at the end of the visit and that in of itself is a rarity, I know from personal experience with both of my younger sisters were in foster care and so was my oldest son. I even took my youngest sister in for awhile and that was an experience that I will never forget. Suffice it to say that was a experience I could have done without. I never once saw the people from the CPS here smile until I saw one of the caseworkers smile until I saw her years later. I’m glad that the inspection went so well and even Mrs C was surprised by what she saw and she even asked Nick what happened to the Nick she knew and loved when he told her about Billy she was surprised again and she gave him the be careful and not rush into anything that he wasn’t comfortable doing. She was very happy for Nick and impressed by his change in his attitude and his overall situation. He told her about his anxiety attack and that Noah was there and talked him out of it. I think the lady who came to do the inspection was very happy with Nick and the current living situation and said that she would love to see it as a long term placement.

I’m also loving this story. I think the gym was a totally new experience for Nick and then having a good sub for lunch and then they went to their room to practice the song. When they went through their song and afterwards Noah asked Cal was singing the song he had been practicing and he said it was only when Noah cued it up Nick started singing it and when he finished there wasn’t a dry eye in the house. Billy came up to him and pulled his face up to where he looked directly into his eyes and he kissed him so passionately and he didn’t care who saw him, he told Nick that he had sung the song with such emotion that they’ve never heard before. When David asked him if he was thinking about his life now or before he came to live with them, although I think Nick said that that song represented his life and that’s when David asked him if he was talking about now or before Nick said that he was singing about his life before they came along. The date was a great hit as well, the pizza they had as well as the show they saw were a home run to them and then on the way back to drop Nick off they stopped for pho soup which is supposed to be eaten with chopsticks only Nick had trouble trying to use them and he just ended up using a spoon and fork, after that he told Billy that it was very good, so was the good night kiss at Nick’s front door. All in all a fantastic chapter.😀❤️

I would say this chapter is worth at least 20-25 stars. I’m happy that Nick may have the beginnings of a great relationship with Billy and it’ll be fun for both of them as neither one has ever been involved with another boy before so it’s going to be good for both of them as they learn what’s good and bad with each other. I’m glad that Nick told Billy about the fact that he isn’t a friend at all because he just met them yesterday and he is a foster child who is only here because someone felt sorry for him. I love the way that Billy took control of the moment and he flat out told Nick that he was damn lucky to be with a group of guys who totally love him for what he is and that’s a wonderful human being who’s been through the wringer but he’s now in a very loving and caring home with guys who totally loved him for the kind, considerate young man who had quite a few bad breaks in his life but where he’s at now is better than any other place he has been or could be sent to. I’m glad that Billy, Noah and Nick are going together to work on the song they want to do at school, if it’s anything like that response they got from David and Andrew they’ve got a hit on their hands.

I’m like everyone else who said that Nick needs to be honest and open with Billy about him being a foster child and if the questions come up about why he’s a foster child he should tell him so that there’s no reason to go any further if Billy has a problem with Nick. I’m glad that Noah was there when Nick had his panic attack and he was able to get him to calm down and then he said something that Nick was surprised by Noah said that he did deserve all of the things he was getting because he deserved to be happy with his new family and new life. I’m interested to see how things go with the song they chose to do for theater class. I don’t know much about musicals or the music associated with them, but I am open to learning about them who knows I might start to like them. Great chapter,the way that Billy and Maddy were introduced to the chapter and the story was well written.

I just started reading this story and it has captured me and so I’ll be going from chapter to chapter. I think Nick is going to be very happy with David, Andrew and Noah, just the amount of time he has spent with them has been like a dream to him and he said it’s a dream he doesn’t want to wake up from. I’m hoping that this turns out to be a permanent place for Nick because he has been through so much already and now that he’s become an orphan he needs somewhere other than the group home to call his home. Just from reading the first chapter I believe that the White men are really great to be with and they even included Nick in the decision to see if he wanted to come live with them. I loved the talk that Noah had with Nick while they were sitting in the hot tub after several games of volleyball in the pool, Noah said that they had been talking about this since Ash Wednesday back in February about fostering a boy who is undesirable to most people. The reason why they’re undesirable is do to age, sex, or sexual orientation these three things are enough to keep someone from wanting the child, and that’s what they are is children.

I’m also waiting for the relationship between the two of these guys will take off like gang busters. Abel and Cairo need to get to where they can be together so that they can start the relationship if that’s what they want. I hope that they work out that way since they have an interest in each other. Although I think Cairo has a worse case of the hots for Abel than he has for Cairo. I hope Noah does start to delegate more responsibility to the other people on student council. Love the story and the characters.

I’m glad that everyone seems to be having a great Christmas with each other. I’m glad that Abel wasn’t a throwaway kid because he likes boys, but it was his parents that shocked him with their own way of saying that they have no problems with him liking boys. I will say I love that Carter and Cairo are able to be together now that they live in the same town. Even though Cairo is still with the foster family, but all seems like it might be a good thing when they go to court for the hearing about whether or not Cairo should go live with Carter’s mother. I’m hoping that goes well for Cairo. Great chapter.

I agree with glennish that the school shouldn’t force the students to come out to their parents when they can’t even get it straight to themselves. I mean if the student doesn’t even know that they are gay or Bi or whatever it is, if they aren’t sure about it themselves they just have some feelings that they are attracted to the same sex as they are. I know that there are lots of people who believe that the Bible says that what happens when two people of the same sex get together is a sin and therefore excimmunicate that person from the church or if it’s a child they’ll either send them to one of those places that try to get it out of their system. I hope that Abel isn’t one of those people who have to leave because he’s gay. I’m glad that Aidyn and Noah are better now that they have gotten the anger out of their systems, they did have some great sex to make up for the idiocy that Aidyn caused by getting so drunk that he can’t remember what happened that night. Great chapter.

I hope that Greyson isn’t taken out of the school he’s in because of Kayde Virtue kissing him twice in the men’s room. This time he got caught by the TA who was following Greyson because he was kissed once before in the men’s room while at school. Because of that issue he lost some of the freedom he had gained by being self sufficient, which caused he and Sky from being able to go on their blind date. I’m glad that nothing happened between Aidyn and Cupid after the party where Aidyn got drunk, the next morning he woke up naked and in bed with someone he didn’t know. It made Noah a bit mad and since then he hasn’t really spoken to Aidyn about how he feels about him waking up with someone he didn’t even know plus the fact that he was naked with him. Noah and Aidyn are going to have to sit down and talk about what happened the night of the party. Great chapter.

I think what Noah went through shouldn’t happen to any child no matter how old they are. I felt bad for him going room to room looking for Ryan and then when he got to Ryan’s room and saw the rope and the blood that’s when it really hit him, then just weeks after Ryan’s death and funeral Noah’s dad gets notified that he was being deployed to Afghanistan. It wasn’t but a few weeks after his dad was deployed that they heard on the news that some soldiers were killed in Afghanistan then the next day a soldier comes to deliver the news that his dad was one of those who were killed and that his ashes should be there in a few days. After that Noah and his mom started seeing a psychiatrist while his mom would talk Noah would give short answers such as yes, no or okay, his mom was prescribed antidepressants to help her with the loss of not only her oldest son but her husband as well. After the news of her husband being killed Noah’s mom started drinking more and more then awhile later she was found with an empty bottle of pills, that’s when Noah became the sole survivor of his family. That has to be hard for a 12 year old to deal with, thankfully his aunt took him in so he wasn’t alone. Since moving in with his aunt and cousin Noah has gotten a boyfriend who adores and loves him, Noah found out the real reason for Ryan’s suicide he couldn’t handle what he was forced to do by the babysitter they had at the time. I’m glad that Carter and Cairo have found each other again just by chance of Tre getting custody of him and then getting a new job in another town, when they went to register Carter for school they were in the office and Tre was having to fill out a bunch of papers and so Carter asked if he could possibly walk around the school so he could get used to the layout and where things were, when he came to a dead end he turned around and then Cairo saw him and came running to him. I’m glad that Carter and Cairo are going to be together again and they don’t have to worry about their parents getting between them again. Another excellent chapter.

Nathan may not have gotten to Carter before he and Tre left so that Tre could start his new job away from the town Nathan lived in. Tre is now Carter’s legal guardian which was one thing that they needed to be done before they could move. I’m glad that Carter’s willing to get back into school and give it a great effort in order to get caught up. I’m going to be reading the next chapter.

Wow I like the way Greyson told Sky he was ready to go all the way. Then when they went to Sky’s room and took their clothes off and Greyson started sucking Sky then he decided that he wanted to be closer to Sky he told him he wanted to have Sky in him. Once they had done it they were cuddling with each other then Greyson told Sky that he wanted to do it again, Sky said they only had 10 minutes before Greyson had to leave to go home, so they decided to just continue to cuddle until Greyson left. I loved the way Sky told Greyson that he had created a monster because he wanted to go again. I hope things get better for Carter, and that he goes back to school even if it’s the same school that he was attending before he was kicked out of his house by his mother, after his mom and step dad found his magazine under the bathroom sink and because Cairo was home sick he first told his dad that he didn’t know who’s magazine it was only his dad didn’t believe him and he told his parents that Carter was gay and that’s when they went to the school and his step dad started yelling at him and he shoved Carter halfway down the hall and he continued to yell at him which got the attention of the class rooms in that hallway. When the principal told his step dad he had to leave the school because he was creating a scene and that wasn’t acceptable for the school, Carter’s mom came out of the office and proceeded to tell him that he was no longer allowed at the house and that his key wouldn’t work because the locks had been changed. The principal told Carter that the police were called and that he would need to talk to them about what happened after he was called to the principals office. Carter left with the few things his mom brought him and left just wandering around and then he went to the youth center and used a computer to try to get ahold of Nathan and after a few days he checked his Facebook page and saw that Nathan was online right then. Nathan told Carter to stay at the library and that his mom was in town and she went to get more of Carter’s clothes and a few other things of his. Nathan’s mom was able to get just a few more clothes for Carter and then went to the library to pick him up. Anyway this was a great chapter to read.

I’m glad that he brought up the former things Noah did and he has no reason to go looking for anyone else when he’s got the best boyfriend ever in the form of Aidyn. I hope that Carter continues to go to the meetings and he starts to open up as to why he’s going through the things he’s having to do. I think that Carter is a good young man who has been thrust into the abyss because of his father and his beliefs. Carters dad is another bible thumper who probably is going to the same church as Abeles family. I’m going to be looking very closely at the situation with Abel and his feelings about guys and what he is going to do with those feelings. Great chapter.

I’m glad that Greyson has someone who he can go to when he is unsure about something he should or shouldn’t be doing with Skylar. Like how he’s afraid of doing what Skylar’s doing to him, if Sky is giving him a blow job then when Greyson is coming down from his orgasim he feels bad because he’s afraid to give one to Sky. Basically he’s afraid he won’t be doing it right when it comes time for him to give it back to Sky. I hope that Greyson is able to overcome his own fear and anxiety about the sexual relationship he and Sky have together. Great chapter.

Interesting chapter. I’m glad that Aidyn and Skylar are having a great time playing the card game. Cairo seems like he’s a foster child or something else like that, he has to ask to be able to get something to drink. When Noah was looking around the house from where he and were working on his homework there weren’t any pictures of Cairo and when he asked Cairo he dropped the glass he was holding while trying to pour them something to drink. Noah was definitely surprised when Aidyn finally spoke because he was hiding just out of sight of Noah although Tiz saw Aidyn and had to stifle a laugh when he saw Aidyn. I’m glad that Aidyn was able to get away for the weekend and when he left he told Carter he could use his bed.

It was nice of Skyler and Greyson to go see if the new neighbors wanted to hang out with them as they were just horsing around in the pool before the weather turned cold enough to keep them out of it. When they went across the street Aiden answered the door and they asked if he wanted to come over to Greyson’s and play around in the swimming pool unfortunately he hadn’t unpacked his shorts yet so he couldn’t go back with them. I don’t know how religious these new neighbors are although I think they’re going to be very religious especially if the whole family is named for someone in the Bible. I’m curious about Nathan’s step cousin what’s his story and why would he need to hide out with Nathan in his dorm room. It would appear that Aidyn has an admirer who’s on the school newspaper staff as well as the captain of his high school soccer team Brailyn is attending the same college. It looks like Noah is going to be busy with tutoring and Student Council that he’s the president of it. Noah will be tutoring a student in science and math and the students parents have offered to pay Noah for his services for their son. I’m sure Noah could use the money to help with college or something else that he would need to have money for.

I just started book 2 in the series and I’m sure it’s going to be as good as book 1 or better depending on your views. I’m glad that Noah and Aiden are going to try to have monthly dates and that they’re going to text each other every day and possibly Skype nightly depending on Aiden’s work load. Although I’m not sure who was having the bad dreams at night at the end of the chapter. Other than that I loved the chapter very much and I expect to read soon that Skyler and Greyson take their relationship to the next level,I can only imagine what that’ll be like when it happens, who’s going to be the first to take the others cherry. Onward and upward.

I must agree with the other people who commented on this chapter and it’s ending, while I’m very sorry that Gene was targeted by a hunter from the ECP, I don’t want to be Angus right now because he’s going to be very very sorry for sending hunters to kill Gene. I truly feel bad for the Homestead pack and the other packs who have been privileged to have known Gene or who had worked with him. I hope Jon does go after Angus so he can finish what he started. Jon is going to kill Angus for killing Gene and then look out because ECP might just merege with Homestead because their Alphas going to die a very very painful death, he’ll be begging for Jon to end his suffering with a swift death but I feel like he would deserve to stay with the slow death. Great chapter, I can’t wait for more.