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It appears that the date was successful in that both Nessa and Lydia were happy when they came home from the date. They explored the town then went to dinner at a nice restaurant to have a nice meal together. They each shared the other's meal and Nessa was being covered with kisses from Lydia to keep Nessa off guard in order to keep her from going off on the owner of the restaurant about the way they were holding the fish. I wonder how Unn's doing now since getting sick? I also wonder who's at her door now since Lydia is at school. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Another great chapter. I thought it was demons that were out to get the teenagers who happen to live with Lorant, now there's three of them guarding Nessa and Lydia. What happens if they were going to try to hurt them? I'm glad that Nessa and Lydia had a good time on their date and then they go home and have to split up so Lydia could get some sleep before going to school. I'm curious as to who is at Nessa's door the early the next morning as she was writing in her diary. I hope that it's someone who has a good reason for knocking so early, like Lydia looking for a little snuggle before school. I can't wait to read what happens next for Nessa.

It's nice to have some of the people from the VUN-GB in New York at the VUN Headquarters. I'm glad that Kevin and Ellis made the trip with Edwin, Wayne and Amasis. I love the way Kevin tells Ellis to concentrate on his proper English, and then Ellis will slip back into the Cockney rhyming slang for a bit then back to the proper way of talking. I thought the story of the way that Kevin and Ellis got to be with each other and the way that they were bit and then having to hide during the day. I thought the shock of seeing Repetate, Iustinia and Ralph for Kevin and Ellis was short lived then Ellis made the remark about them having a penis but no ass or as Ellis said they have their hampton wick but no bottle & glass. I love the way the question asked by Iustinia as to who the new people were to Devon who simply stated that they were friends. Then Ellis says they have a smell that's some what old on them, then went on to tell everyone about his unique ability to be able to tell you when you last took a shower almost to the hour. Ellis tells them that the smell he was getting from Ralph was also coming from Wayne. Ellis asks Wayne if Ralph was the one who bit him and Wayne said he was. I have a feeling that Kevin and Ellis are going to be very useful with the VUN as they venture into new countries or even with some of the work being done in New York. This was a fantastic chapter in which we were given a taste of the newest additions to the VUN and what their contributions will be. I can't hardly wait for the next chapter to see what happens next for everyone and more about Kevin and Ellis.

Another great chapter. This is a really great story and every chapter you write adding new characters in the different areas the VUN just adds a different level of fun. I really enjoyed the Cockney slang even though I don't understand most of it it's fun to try to figure out what is being said. I hope that Dr Baxter and Ellis do get involved with the VUN International as well as VUN Great Britain. I'm sure that Edwin and the teams there could be a good asset for them. I think Dr Baxter will be a great asset to George with his research with finding a cure for the vampirism. I love the story and the story quite a bit it's got so many characters who are individuals with their own personality. Thanks for writing it for us to enjoy.

Another great chapter in a very strong story. I hope that Dillon becomes a stronger partner for Will, Carrulo needs to figure out what he wants and stop playing around. I'm not quite sure if Luka will make a good partner for JJ. Will and JJ both need strong partners and someone long term. I hope if this promotion is really what Carrulo wants then I wish him luck.

It was very nice of Kris to let Nessa use one of the dresses from his collection. I hope that Kris and Nessa go shopping for clothes soon so that Nessa has her own clothes and won't be a bother to anyone. Lydia is a very lucky young lady who can say that she knows Kris. I hope that they'll all become friends and have each others backs like Lorant says they should. I'm looking forward to reading more about Unn. I hope that Unn will become a friend as well. I love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Another great chapter. So it appears that Nessa and Lydia are going on a date outside the house. Nessa didn't have anything to wear then as she's writing this page in her diary Kris shows up with a dress and tells Nessa to come with him to get a pretty dress for her date. Is everyone in the house aware of their plans to go on the date or is it just me. I hope that Kris is starting to come around to the friendly way as Lorant asked them to. I hope that the date goes well for Nessa and Lydia, and that hopefully Unn is getting better as well.

I believe that Kohen is attracted to the captain because he was the one who rescued him. I'm hoping that this attraction will slowly fade to where they can start a real relationship instead of the one where Kohen is attracted to the captain due to him being the rescuer. I think the skin to skin contact will be just what's needed to bring Kohen out of the hole he's in right now. I'm sure that Deke will be able to extract what information they need from the Trepharo then the captain can figure out what to do with it. It would be nice if we could get an idea what the captain's backstory, then we might be able to know what he's afraid of with regards to Kohen. This was a very strong chapter in which we're able to finally see the connection between the captain and Kohen. Thanks for writing this amazing story.

I hope that Kohen is able to break free from the hold on his emotions. It appears that this alien being can shape into anyone or anything. I wonder why it was after Kohen, also was it the reason for the raid on the lab where Kohen was held. I hope that Kohen and the captain can get past the barrier between them and maybe start a real relationship. Love the story so far and I can't wait to read what happens next.

I feel bad for Kohen as he was wanting someone to give him a chance to feel what it's like to have someone love him, not necessarily a sexual love but like a parent, that's the way I took it. I'm hoping that Kohen is able to gain some insight as to what things were done to him and the other's that were rescued with him. The one that he starts talking to is Sardella Kime thedescription of her reminds me of a bird. I hope that Lakshou can help Kohen to learn how to accept the attention he can get without the sexual overtones. I'm rooting for Kohen to find peace and then comfort in the future maybe even find someone to share his life with. I'm loving the story very much, I'm going to read more.

I like the fact that Kohen is wanting to be able to do something besides sitting in his quarters. Kohen asked the captain about a job on the ship and found himself working with Priella and Luca in maintenance on the ship. I really like the fact that Kohen is able to do something that no other crew members can do. Kohen's physical strength allows him to lift or move item's that are way above any normal human's ability which he proved the first time he'd been in the captain's cabin with Lakshou and the captain asked Kohen to hold the green block, he was then asked to try to crumble the block which he did without any help from anyone else around. It was then explained how he's able to crush the block so easily, he was told that some of the other rescues were talking and then the captain explained that he was made to be part machine by the captors. Thiswas a very interesting chapter in Kohen's life since he was rescued from the Bronx Consortium, I'm rereading the story so that I remember what each character's part is in the story.

Another great chapter as usual. It appears that Lydia and Nessa are starting to do as Lorant asked them to do. Nessa and Lydia are talking again and paid a visit to Unn to see if they can become friends and have each other's backs. Unn wasn't to receptive to the idea, of course that could be related to the sickness that is keeping her in bed. I definitely didn't see the fact that even though Unn is a merperson that she could be seasick especially since her people live in the ocean. I hope that Lorant is able to get the spell back on Unn soon as she's mean when she's sick. I wonder if the girls will try to make friends with Kris like they were told by Lorant, I think it would be advantageous for all of them because they could be together when they need to be. I see several pluses for the kids to be friends one is that it might take a bit of pressure off Lorant. It makes sense to have the kids watch each other's backs as at least there wouldn't be a chance that the demons catching any of them unprepared for the attack and make it almost impossible for one of them to be taken by the demons. Another advantage is that they'd never really be alone so that a demon could get to them. I can't wait to read the next scene in the story so that I can see what happens when Unn gets well again.

I agree that the party is over now the birthday trip with Nathan. I'm sorry that Tom has to go back to England soon, as much as I would like to see him stay I think it would be a bad thing for Robbie and Nathan. I think Robbie would always have Tom on his mind if Tom were to stay which would cause problems with Robbie and Nathan. I also agree that Robbie and Alex getting together would cause problems with Robbie and Nathan. Alex needs to gain some stable footing before he gets into any kind of relationship. I hope that Alex gets some kind of stability and then only reach out to find out first if he still feels the same way and if he still likes guys. If Alex stays with the Taylor family for to long it might become a problem for Robbie especially. I hope that Alex can get the help he needs to be able to stand up and be the man he should be. Great chapter as usual I can't wait to read all about the birthday adventures Nathan has planned for Robbie and also to see if they can walk afterwards.

Another great chapter Mark. I'm glad that Brad has found someone like Jake who makes him feel young again. I think they're both in agreement as they both say that the other makes them feel like teenagers again. If the relationship goes further than it is right now then Brad may be able to let Robbie go, even though he'll never forget him, he can become a better partner with Jake. I'm glad that Will has possibly found the right guy to be with in Dillon, and then he might be able to let Zach be in the wind since he hasn't been there for Will for awhile now. When Will does get ahold of Zach it's always rushed because he's too busy to talk to Will at all. Will might get a 2- 3 minutes to talk before saying he has to go for some reason or another. If things work out for Will with Dillon I hope that we'll see more about Dillon and then he'll be a regular character in the story. Elizabeth Danfield is a formidable woman who has an objective for everything she does. I'm in agreement with JP when he says not to turn your back on her because she might just stab you in the back. Thanks for writing this wonderful story.

This must've been a tough chapter to write due to the complexities of the situation. I can see why the Drakes did what they did when they went to see Ian, although I think that after telling him about what Declan told them they should've told Ian that Declan's last name was also O'Rourke and then told him about adopting him as a infant. I feel like they should've asked about Paddy and when he was adopted instead of going straight to the fact that they wanted to get the DNA of both boys to see if they are siblings. I hope that Paddy doesn't regress because of this, it's taken a long time to trust Ian enough to take his shoes off at night. I'm like everyone else that Ian and Adam need to go see Theo as soon as possible to see if he can get better records of both boys to see if there's any possibility that they are brothers or not. I'll be waiting for the next chapter in this story. I love the way you tell about the fun things as well as the tough things with the characters in the story, I feel like it makes them more real to me, I thank you for writing this amazing story along with the ups and downs of the lives of the characters and the way you put feeling in the story.

I don't know what the problem was, I have been trying to read this chapter for 3 days and up until today I kept getting the message that it couldn't be found. I'm glad that Nessa and Lydia are talking again, at least until Nessa and Lydia have another fight over the fact that Nessa doesn't know about these customs of the dwarves. I hope that Lydia will be more patient with Nessa since she didn't have access to the t.v. shows that showed what the dwarves live like and what their taboos are. It just goes to show you that relationships between two people who are very different from the other as Nessa and Lydia are things can get taken out of context and then it hurts both partners without meaning to. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see who's past will be revealed in the next chapter. Thanks for writing this wonderful story I like the way that you are mixing the different people who live in the world of your story.

Another great chapter. I think there's more to the fact that Unn got sick from the ice cream that she ate. Nessa has been talked into helping with Unn's care since she isn't attending school just yet as she has to have some lessons in languages first. Lorant must be wearing thin in the attempt to get Unn better. I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see what Lorant said when it called the meeting about Unn.

Great chapter in the continuing saga of Nessa and why she was thrown out of the fairy world. It seems like she's easily distracted by things that aren't important to what she has going on, like the video game. It sounds like any teenager in the world today, they'd rather play video games instead of doing homework for school or at times not even their chores around the house. I hope she gets the research done that she started reading on, before going off on something else. I really hope Unn gets better soon it seems like she's worse off than originally thought to be, I think she deserves to suffer some because she knows she's not supposed to eat ice cream and this time she over did it. Lorant is looking down from trying to take care of Unn and not taking care of herself. I love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great chapter as usual. Nessa seems to be learning about the different people who live in the world besides the fairies. It shows that she was listening to the other people who live in the home that Lorant is in charge of.

Another great chapter in the story about Mitch and Tony. I agree that Mitch is a Delveccio and Tony is a McKenzie, as they've been accepted by both families as being a true partnership. Mitch completes Tony when they're in New York, and Tony completes Mitch when they're with the McKenzie clan. The same could be said when they're traveling. I hope that Tony doesn't shut down when he gets the results of the tests the doctor had done as he and Mitch have already figured that the results won't be favorable to Tony, they just aren't saying it out loud because they don't want to alarm everyone else. I'm glad that the Delveccio family and the McKenzie clan are both very supportive of Tony and Mitch and will do everything possible to help with whatever they can. David and Sasha are another great couple that has been accepted by most of the family, there are the 3 uncles who don’t see what’s right in front of them and that’s the love ❤️ that’s shared with each other. The love 💕 shows in how they act and interact with their partners that they say completes them. I’m glad that Gary has finally started to see the light and stood up to the uncles saying that they had two choices, they could either accept the fact that these couples are in a man to man relationship and they are staying, if the uncles wouldn’t accept them for what they are they (the uncles) could leave otherwise shut up because all the talking and planning to get them apart wouldn’t do anything except alienate them from the rest of the family. Everyone is proud of Mitch & Tony for legalizing their marriage even though they were already married only it wasn’t legal. I hope that David and Sasha do the same thing and legalize their marriage right away, then Alik would have two dads instead of a dad and an uncle who’s in love with his dad. I’m glad that David, Mitch and Tony have all learned Russian as it came in handy for Mitch & Tony while they were on the Queen Mary where they met a great couple Ivan & Katya when Ivan came out of his cabin asking for help with the laundry slip saying he needed his shirt cleaned and extra starch added to it. They became really great friends and Mitch and Tony found out that Ivan is the raging bull in the Russian wrestling circuit. Alik knew of the Raging Bull and was very excited that they got to meet them especially the bull. I’m hoping to see more of the story before the next spring if possible. 😃

I'm glad that Tony and Mitch are finally married for legal purposes, even though they were married before. This time was for the legality of it. I like the way that Nick and David greeted Tony and Mitch when they got home from work after Tony and Mitch cleaned up the pizza boxes and then the rest of the house. I think it's great that no one had anything to say about the new wedding. I wonder what the McKenzie clan will say about it especially since no one knew it was happening? Great chapter, I love the story and I can't wait to read more about Mitch and Tony.

I'm glad that Will and Brad have what appears to be new love in the future. I'm glad that Will is now 17 years old but he's got the mind of an adult which is a product of the way he was raised. I think Dillon might just be the replacement for Zach in Will's life, especially if he's the god Will thinks he is. I'm glad that JP, Stef, Brad, Darius and Will made it back to Escoral in one piece. I hope that they can figure out how to stop these attacks and put an end to the madness. This was another great chapter in the continuing saga of the Black Widow. Great work again Mark I love the story.

I'm glad that Unn has been giving Nessa some tact and has turned out to be a possible friend and ally in the house. I hope that when Unn gets well again that she will still want to be a friend to Nessa and will tell her why she's there and not in her own home. I'm glad that Nessa has learned that it was possible that her stepfather was made to act the way he did as he was possibly under the orders of a demon. Which is why he attacked Nessa promoting her to kill him. I hope that Unn will tell her what she has done to be in the situation she's in along with the others. I hope the rest of those in the house will be able to tell each other what they have done to end up there. I can't wait to read what comes next for those living under the care of Lorant.

I hope Unn will be okay after eating the rest of the ice cream that Lydia left when she ran from Nessa. Nessa was trying to be a good friend by going in Unn's room to see if she could do something for her. Nessa was holding Unn's hair up away from her face to keep it from the ice cream that came back out, and then Unn has the gall to say that Nessa shouldn't have come into her room with out being asked or given permission to enter. After Nessa telling Unn that she wants Lydia to know that she's sorry for passing gas in her presence, and that she won't make the same mistake again. After that was said Unn passed out right into Nessa's arms, which is why Nessa yelled out for help. I hope that Lorant doesn't get upset with Nessa for Unn eating all of the ice cream that Lydia left. I'm glad that Lorant put a special lock on the freezer to keep Unn away from the ice cream. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see if Lydia goes back with Nessa.

That was a very thoughtful interview with Ellen DeGeneres, having the recap of the proposal ceremony before Eric and Peter came out on stage was nice because to me she was showing that not only did King Olek, and Queen Alla approve of the relationship and the eventual wedding but the country of Makarovia approves as well. To me the questions she asked them about their plans to marry and that they were the first openly gay couple who are so far apart from the normal couples, this couple has a Prince and a commoner getting married. This type of wedding has never taken place before in any royal wedding, not the royal and commoner, but a gay Prince and a gay commoner. I'm glad that Yuri didn't have anything to worry about while they were taping the show. There weren't any problems with anyone or anything while at the studio. I hope that all of the talk shows go as smoothly as they did while taping the Ellen DeGeneres show. This was another great chapter which I loved quite a bit because of the fact that Eric and Peter asked Boris and Yuri to join them for the trip. I'm waiting for the next chapter to see what happens when the show is aired.