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LOVED the chapter! I'm so happy Karl decided on a separation. I have no doubt divorce will be the outcome. He deserves way better than Maria and her asshole family! I'm also hapoy that he hit Rick! He's disgusting too, and definitely deserved it. What can I say about Brenda, except she's as disgusting as the rest! Can't wait to read more!!
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Still loving the story! Luke is so adorable! I sure hope karma comes around and closed fists Maria and Brenda in the face!
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Good story so far. Not a big fan of Jackson's at all. A self centered ass is what I see so far.
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Still loving ur story so far. I knew it had to be Nat that attacked Sammy! So happy he's gonna be ok. I hope Nat's family gets raked over the coals for the disgusting people they are, Maria included. Karl definitely deserves better than her, and from the sound of it won't have a problem finding someone else. Surprised Sammy's mother came to take care of him. Can't wait to see how Sammy and Peter's relationship develops now that everything is out.
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Omg, I'm on pins and needles wondering what exactly happened to Sammy and if Nat had anything to do with it! Surprised that Peter just up and ran out the door when Billiee called to let him kno that happened to Sammy. I think this,may be the point where Brenda starts putting the pieces together. Loved the surprise party for Karl, and was kinda shocked at Rick's reaction to Sammy being gay. Just goes to show what closed minded assholes are out there! SOOO looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
Another great chapter! I can't get enuf of the adorable Nate and Bodie! They are so cute together! Was so sweet at the end of the chapter when Bodie cuddles Nate instead of him going to sleep with his uncles for comfort after his nightmare. As always, looking forward to reading more! -
I'm a big fan of ur story so far! I enjoy Peter and Sammy together, although Peter has A LOT to work through first. I like Karl, and feel so bad for him. Maria's parents and brother are horrible people! Will be interesting to see what Brenda does with Sammy's phone number that she found in Peter's pocket!Looking forward to reading more!!
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Loved the chapter! So glad that Toph is loosening up, if only a bit. Already dislike Steve, only because I think Toph should be with Gary. Lol! I felt so sorry for Gary at the end of the chapter when Toph got the call from Steve! Can't wait to see how this turns out!
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Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
Absolutely love Nate and Bodie! They're so sweet together. Laughed at Big Mike's comment about the boys tying their laces with one hand because they hadn't let go of each other. Loved the gift Bodie gave to Nate. I would have been happy with just the box too! Lol! Always look forward to new chapters! -
I think u should move on to the next day. We alteady kinda kno how both couples spent their evening. Guess to me it really doesn't matter who's point of view u go with. Whichever character's point of view u choose to go with, I kno its gonna be another great chapter
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Hey CG! Just read the new chapter and loved it! I literally laughed out loud at the Fag Newton comment! I also had to laugh when Jeff and Lee were making fun of Denny and Greg feeding each other! Great chapter!!
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Thank you all for the warm welcome! I did look at the pics of what u all thought the guys might look like. They were all great looking and a couple actually looked a bit like how I imagined them.
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Hey CG! Finally made it over from Nifty! Wanted to say again how much I'm enjoying reading about Jay and Miles and their friends!
