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    Chapter 10

    I knew Lane would become a very important part of Casey's life. I love how close they've become and how protective Casey is over him. I'm totally team Casey when it comes to Coach. I wondered about his relationship with Mike, and the fact that he's protecting Mike has me wondering even more what the deal is between them. I think I would have had the same reaction to the coach if I were Casey. It was very dusappointing that it was coach and not his father that came in to speak with him. I have no respect AT ALL for Casey's father.
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    Chapter 28

    Good chapter. Jason's parents are a real piece of....work. Lol! I feel sorry fo Jason and what he's going through. I was disappointed in Thomas. He's trying to change who he is to please Colt. Thomas wants monogamy, and he should stick to that and be true to himself. Colt isn't worth it anyway.
  3. Good chapter! I like Lucas and Nate together...they sound like a really cute pair. I liked how playful they were with each other after they got thru their hurt and anger. I hope that Lucas eventually has the guts to stand up to his ex-friends for what they did to Nate.
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    Sean

    Good chapter. Was good to look into when Tait first met Sean. I feel bad for Philip for not telling Tait how he really felt about him. I now understand why he's standing beside him now. However, now knowing that Tait was warned about Sean before they were even introduced makes me feel less sorry for his current situation. I just feel that if ur not only warned that somebody can possibly be abusive, but stay with them as it escalates, ur just as much to blame for what happens to u than the person who's inflicting it. I would be willing to bet that Philip probably had many converstaions about the situation with Tait before Sean beat the hell out of him. Tait is very lucky to have someone like Philip in his life.
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    Chapter 9

    I feel so bad for Rayne! If we didn't know how much he loved Daniel before, we sure know how much he loves him now! I can only imagine what poor Daniel went through. On a good day, you just want to pull him into a hug and never let go! What Daniel went through must have been heartbreaking! What can I say about Andy, except that I hope karma comes around and hits him right between the eyes! Maybe he can get hit by a truck crossing the street?? Lol!
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    Chapter 6

    Great chapter! I like Coach, and how he's there for the guys. Curtis is definitely an asshole and is gonna pose problems. I felt so bad for Lane, crying because he thought Casey was like everyone else. I can only imagine how lonely his life has been before Casey. Obviously his parents don't even notice how he's treated, or they just don't care. Was very interesting that Coach warned Casey about Mike being a player. That would explain why he's been so pushy. As always, looking forward to reading more!@
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    Early January

    Good chapter! Knew Steve was no good! My first impression of him was not to trust him! Hope Toph gets over him quickly. Like the saying goes, u can't make a ho into a housewife! Lol! At least he has a lot of support from his friends.
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    Acceptance

    Great chapter! Its a relief to finally kno what happened between Nix and Keon. I would have never forgiven him either, nor would I ever. I don't get how Lakota is getting away with this whole Theo thing so easily? First Oliver pretty much shrugs his shoulders, then Lyric is over it in like an hour! Its one thing when a boyfriend cheats, because u can always find another one. When its ur own sibling that he's cheating with, that's unforgivable in my eyes.
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    Guilt

    Great chapter. I liked the flashback to how Sean came to be, and can totally understand Philip's guilt. I think Philip tends to be too hard on himself. I also hope Tait gets the help that he needs to work through this. I can't believe that asshole Sean is still in their house and not in jail. I hope one way or another he gets what he deserves. I see Tait and Philip eventually together.
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    Chapter 5

    Great chapter! Very entertaining that a brother and sister are competing for Casey's affection! Of course Mike wins! Lol! Still feel sorry for his living arrangement. Aside from Lane and Karen, I wouldn't want to be there any more that Casey does. Great that he met Mike. Too bad Curtis has to be such an asshole. Hope Casey gives him what he deserves!
  11. Great chapter! Jorge broke my heart! How sad that he thought his mother was sleeping! He's a very lucky boy to have been rescued by Sam and Nick! I just kno they're gonna be great parents and Jorge will get all the love he needs from them!
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    Chapter 4

    Loving the story so far. I love how protective Casey is over Lane. Of course, who wouldn't adore Lane? I think these two are gonna be a great help to each other. Just the fact that Casey gave Lane directions when helping with dinner and he followed them shows that Casey will be able to maybe help Lane catch up. I also agree with Casey that Lane's other brothers are assholes! Lol! Looking forward to reading more!
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    Chapter 3

    I can understand Casey's anger and his thinking for the reasons why his mom pawned him off onto his father. I think Skipper is definitely gonna be the one to mellow him out. Who wouldn't love Skipper! Looking forward to reading more!!
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    Late December

    Great chapter! I'm enjoying how Toph is maturing and learning new things about himself. A very unfortunate New Year's Eve. I don't care what anyone says, alcohol IS NOT an excuse to be lip locked with another guy when ur already in a relationship. If that's what alcohol does to u, then maybe u should stay away from it! I would tell him exactly what he did, then let him stew in his own shit. I think he already had reasons for insisting to go to the club.
  15. Great chapter!!! I'm so happy Craig let Carly have it with both barrels! Although a little bloodshed would have been acceptable too! Lol! J/K. Not so much surprised that Bailey isn't Jared's but amazed at what lengths Carly would go to. A definite sociopath!
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    Chapter 25

    Yeah, I definitely agree that the mug would be a totally lame idea. I don't think Colt's father would take any apology at this point as sincere. I sure as hell wouldn't. Poor Jason. I can definitely understand his thinking. Even if I were out in high school, I wouldn't want any association with those guys. I have a problem with people who don't have any respect for others. Their age shouldn't make any difference as far as respect is concerned. As far as ur reply to my comments on the last chapter, I totally see Matt and Andy grown up as a couple of tweekers looking for their next fuck at the bar, and maybe going back to prostitution. I don't think that's hot at all. I just don't see another possible outcome for two guys that don't have any respect for themselves, much less anyone else.
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    Chapter 2

    Love the story so far! Nick and Sam are so good together! Was so happy that u included Jerome and Rob in the chapter! I miss reading about them, and their now 6 month old twins. Quite the ending. Can't wait to see who was calling!
  18. So excited to read the new chapter! Ryan is such a sweetheart looking after Randy like he did. Randy's mother HAS to know about the two of them! Lol! Its nice that with everything that happened that Tyler can still come to them for advice. Just like the whole Matt/Sam situation is coming back to bite Tyler, I have a feeling that the whole Sean situation is far from over. He wasn't mentioned in this chapter, but I'm sure he's plotting his next move! Always looking forward to reading more!
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    Chapter 20

    Great chapter! Have been waiting anxiously! Lol! Love how giddy Ariel gets at just the thought of Tyler! Well, the subject of Sam and Matt finally reared its ugly head. So, maybe Ariel will ask Tyler more about them, or maybe go to Matt and Sam himself?? Always look forward to new chapters!!
  20. Great chapter! Can't believe that bitch Carly kept Jared and Craig apart for her own evil, selfish reasons! So happy they're reunited and Jared is letting Craig help him. Can't wait to see what they have in store for the she-devil! Hope they rake her over the coals!!
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    Chapter 24

    Good chapter. Hard to believe they're seniors and still pulling their sneaky bullshit! I'm happy that Colt's dad stuck to his guns with him. Its about time someone's parents gave a shit what their kids are doing. 24 chapters into their senior year....isn't it about time to have some sort of epiphany and clean their act up??
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    Renewal

    So happy Mark and Dan have found each other. Mark definitely deserves some happiness, and Dan sounds like a great guy. Carl is a selfish asshole who doesn't deserve Mark's attention, much less his love!
  23. Love, love, love the new story! U have such a great way of weaving an equal mix of love and drama into ur stories! Have a feeling its gonna be a bumpy road to get Jared and Craig on the same page, and I'm sure together! Can't wait to see what Jared has to say! Absolutely looking forward to reading more!!!
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    Chapter 6

    Great chapter! Never thought about him ever getting a boat. I guess any way to deal with heartbreak. What a way to leave me hanging at the end! Lol! Can't wait to read more!!
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    Chapter 22

    Good chapter. Surprised Matt went back to the office after his outburst. Honestly, I can totally see both of them ending up as bar skanks drugging and looking for their next fuck. Maybe Matt more than Andy. Also, they're right that Matt and Andy have kinda changed roles, although I don't remember Andy being as narcissistic and uncaring about other people's feelings as Matt is. Where the hell are their parents? They just let them run the streets and don't give a shit what they do? They both proved to their parents that they lie and can't be trusted! I don't get it.
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