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Great chapter! Very entertaining that a brother and sister are competing for Casey's affection! Of course Mike wins! Lol! Still feel sorry for his living arrangement. Aside from Lane and Karen, I wouldn't want to be there any more that Casey does. Great that he met Mike. Too bad Curtis has to be such an asshole. Hope Casey gives him what he deserves!
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Chapter 6 Impulsive Decision
jaysalmn commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 6 Impulsive Decision
Great chapter! Jorge broke my heart! How sad that he thought his mother was sleeping! He's a very lucky boy to have been rescued by Sam and Nick! I just kno they're gonna be great parents and Jorge will get all the love he needs from them! -
Loving the story so far. I love how protective Casey is over Lane. Of course, who wouldn't adore Lane? I think these two are gonna be a great help to each other. Just the fact that Casey gave Lane directions when helping with dinner and he followed them shows that Casey will be able to maybe help Lane catch up. I also agree with Casey that Lane's other brothers are assholes! Lol! Looking forward to reading more!
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I can understand Casey's anger and his thinking for the reasons why his mom pawned him off onto his father. I think Skipper is definitely gonna be the one to mellow him out. Who wouldn't love Skipper! Looking forward to reading more!!
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Great chapter! I'm enjoying how Toph is maturing and learning new things about himself. A very unfortunate New Year's Eve. I don't care what anyone says, alcohol IS NOT an excuse to be lip locked with another guy when ur already in a relationship. If that's what alcohol does to u, then maybe u should stay away from it! I would tell him exactly what he did, then let him stew in his own shit. I think he already had reasons for insisting to go to the club.
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Chapter 4 White Water Rafting
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 White Water Rafting
Great chapter!!! I'm so happy Craig let Carly have it with both barrels! Although a little bloodshed would have been acceptable too! Lol! J/K. Not so much surprised that Bailey isn't Jared's but amazed at what lengths Carly would go to. A definite sociopath! -
Yeah, I definitely agree that the mug would be a totally lame idea. I don't think Colt's father would take any apology at this point as sincere. I sure as hell wouldn't. Poor Jason. I can definitely understand his thinking. Even if I were out in high school, I wouldn't want any association with those guys. I have a problem with people who don't have any respect for others. Their age shouldn't make any difference as far as respect is concerned. As far as ur reply to my comments on the last chapter, I totally see Matt and Andy grown up as a couple of tweekers looking for their next fuck at the bar, and maybe going back to prostitution. I don't think that's hot at all. I just don't see another possible outcome for two guys that don't have any respect for themselves, much less anyone else.
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Love the story so far! Nick and Sam are so good together! Was so happy that u included Jerome and Rob in the chapter! I miss reading about them, and their now 6 month old twins. Quite the ending. Can't wait to see who was calling!
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Chapter 56 - "The Difficult One"
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 56 - "The Difficult One"
So excited to read the new chapter! Ryan is such a sweetheart looking after Randy like he did. Randy's mother HAS to know about the two of them! Lol! Its nice that with everything that happened that Tyler can still come to them for advice. Just like the whole Matt/Sam situation is coming back to bite Tyler, I have a feeling that the whole Sean situation is far from over. He wasn't mentioned in this chapter, but I'm sure he's plotting his next move! Always looking forward to reading more! -
Great chapter! Have been waiting anxiously! Lol! Love how giddy Ariel gets at just the thought of Tyler! Well, the subject of Sam and Matt finally reared its ugly head. So, maybe Ariel will ask Tyler more about them, or maybe go to Matt and Sam himself?? Always look forward to new chapters!!
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Great chapter! Can't believe that bitch Carly kept Jared and Craig apart for her own evil, selfish reasons! So happy they're reunited and Jared is letting Craig help him. Can't wait to see what they have in store for the she-devil! Hope they rake her over the coals!!
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Good chapter. Hard to believe they're seniors and still pulling their sneaky bullshit! I'm happy that Colt's dad stuck to his guns with him. Its about time someone's parents gave a shit what their kids are doing. 24 chapters into their senior year....isn't it about time to have some sort of epiphany and clean their act up??
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So happy Mark and Dan have found each other. Mark definitely deserves some happiness, and Dan sounds like a great guy. Carl is a selfish asshole who doesn't deserve Mark's attention, much less his love!
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Love, love, love the new story! U have such a great way of weaving an equal mix of love and drama into ur stories! Have a feeling its gonna be a bumpy road to get Jared and Craig on the same page, and I'm sure together! Can't wait to see what Jared has to say! Absolutely looking forward to reading more!!!
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Great chapter! Never thought about him ever getting a boat. I guess any way to deal with heartbreak. What a way to leave me hanging at the end! Lol! Can't wait to read more!!
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Good chapter. Surprised Matt went back to the office after his outburst. Honestly, I can totally see both of them ending up as bar skanks drugging and looking for their next fuck. Maybe Matt more than Andy. Also, they're right that Matt and Andy have kinda changed roles, although I don't remember Andy being as narcissistic and uncaring about other people's feelings as Matt is. Where the hell are their parents? They just let them run the streets and don't give a shit what they do? They both proved to their parents that they lie and can't be trusted! I don't get it.
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Great chapter!! I'm so sad that Rob and Jerome are fighting. HOWEVER... I always love when some good drama is mixed in and u definitely didn't disappoint!! Can't wait to read more!!
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I hope we don't have too much more of d-bag Jackson. A self centered, bratty teenager gets old really quick.
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LOVED the chapter!! So happy Sammy and Karl ended up together. Peter ended up being kind of a selfish asshole. Just my personal opinion. BTW, what happened to chapter 16? Chapter 15 was repeated on chapter 16.
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Another great chapter! I'm so loving Jerome and Rob! Even MY heart was fluttering when Rob was introducing Jerome as his partner! They make me smile! Looking forward to reading more!!
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Well, I'm happy Matt finally admitted thay he is an asshole! I've thought that of him for MANY, MANY chapters! He and Colt became my least liked characters quite a while back. Can't wait to see if Matt lets Dr Walker help him, or if he continues being a narcissistic asshole.
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Great chapter! I knew Maria was trash, and she just proved it! Sammy was right when he said that whole family is fucked up, not in those words. Lol! Sammy and Karl cuddled up....think old Peter has some competition! Can't wait to read more!!
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Chapter 10 - Blooming relationship
jaysalmn commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Blooming relationship
Hey there! My first time leaving a comment even though I'm a big fan of the story! I'm so happy that Dominic and Anikin are finally together. Will be interesting to see how their relationship blossoms! -
Well, this chapter has taken an interesting turn. Kinda seems to me that maybe Karl and Sammy may be the two that end up together? Or perhaps some jealous drama between Karl and Peter? Whatever happens, can't wait to read more!!
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Great chapter! I'm loving the developing relationship! Jerome and Rob make a grear pair. A lottle nervous about what's coming up in the next chapter tho. Nice teaser at the end! Lol!
